2026浙江1月首考读后续写 课件-2026届高三英语二轮复习专项

写作思路及写作技巧 Erin 2026浙江1月首考 读后续写 责任与担当 主要内容 1. 续写文本分析 2. 一起来完成续写写作 3. 该文章里实用续写表达锦集 4. 协作的力量类（适配“同心协力，克服困难”场景）主题句 温柔的善意类（适配“对生命的敬畏”场景）主题句 责任与担当类（适配”点滴行动的责任和担当“）主题句 续写步骤 Step 1 文本分析（新闻报道+“I”的视角） 1 Step 2 预设情节走向+把握主题 2 Step 3 构思续写布局 3 Step 4 造句（时态/人称/句型） 4 Step 5 审视初稿+认真誊写 5 East Bridgewater Police Officers Help Safely Corral Loose Cow EAST BRIDGEWATER — Chief Michael Jenkins reports that East Bridgewater Police officers safely corralled a female cow that was loose in town Wednesday morning. On Wednesday, Sept. 4, at about 9 a.m., East Bridgewater Police Officer Robert Lang was driving through the area of Belmont and Summer streets when he saw a woman on a horse chasing after a loose cow. The owner of the cow also called police to notify officers that her cow, named Boots, had gotten loose from a corral from her farm on Summer Street. East Bridgewater Police Deputy Chief Mike McLaughlin, Sgt. John Smith and Officers Joshua DeJesus, Matthew Monteiro and Patrick O’Brien responded to the scene and assisted in helping to corral the animal. There were minor disruptions to traffic during the incident when the cow got near the road at Belmont and Summer streets. There was also minor damage caused to some lawns in the area. Officers and farm staff were able to safely capture the cow after about two-and-a-half hours toward the back of Beaver Cemetery using a rope lasso and food. The cow was guided onto a trailer and safely returned to the farm. “I am happy to report that our officers were able to help safely capture the cow without injury to themselves or the animal,” Chief Jenkins said. 2026浙江1月首考真题 2026浙江1月首考真题 I was driving my daughter Lila to her swimming lesson when we spotted a cow wandering down the main road. A thick rope was tied around its neck, dragging on the pavement behind it. The cow was ambling along in the middle of the traffic, tail flicking lazily, while a line of cars followed cautiously, their drivers leaning out of windows to stare. A group of kids on bicycles had gathered at a safe distance, cheering and pointing as the cow nudged a stop sign with its head. “Look, Mom!” Lila gasped, pressing her face against the car window. “City people are all scared of it! But you can handle anything, right? You herded cows on Grandpa’s farm when you were a kid.” I smiled, recalling the summer I’d spent on my grandfather’s dairy farm, chasing strays back into the pasture with a stick and a loud voice. “It’s just a lost cow, sweetie,” I said, “but we need to get you to swim class first. I’ll check on it after I drop you off.” We inched past the cow, which lifted its head and let out a low moo as we passed. Lila waved, and the cow tilted its head as if waving back. I dropped Lila at the pool, promising to be back in an hour, then turned the car around to find the cow. By the time I got back to the main road, the traffic had cleared, but the cow was still there—standing in a patch of grass by the sidewalk, chewing on a dandelion. It was a reddish-brown cow, smaller than the Holsteins on Grandpa’s farm, with big, gentle eyes. And there was something about it, a skittishness in its posture, that made it different from the cows I’d known back home. It didn’t seem like a farm cow at all. Paragraph 1: As I turned to leave, two police officers pulled up in a patrol car. Paragraph 2: We tied the rope to a tree and discussed what to do with the cow. Step 1:文本分析：新闻报道（Part 1：Para.1---7） Para.1 EAST BRIDGEWATER — Chief Michael Jenkins reports that East Bridgewater Police officers safely corralled(圈住；逮捕) a female cow that was loose in town Wednesday morning. 新闻报道：导语 Para. 1 时间 Wednesday morning. 地点 in town 主人公 功能性人物 Chief Michael Jenkins；Police officers 功能性物品 a female cow 段落大意 警方协助安全围捕脱逃奶牛 Step 1:文本分析：新闻报道（Part 1：Para.1---7） Para.2 On Wednesday, Sept. 4, at about 9 a.m., East Bridgewater Police Officer Robert Lang was driving through the area of Belmont and Summer streets when he saw a woman on a horse chasing after a loose cow. 新闻报道主体 Para. 2 时间 On Wednesday, Sept. 4, at about 9 a.m. 地点 in town； the area of Belmont and Summer streets 主人公 功能性人物 Chief Michael Jenkins；Police officers；a woman on a horse 功能性物品 a female/loose cow 段落大意 事情的开端: 9 月 4 日早 9 点左右，警员巡逻时目击女子骑马追逃牛。 Step 1:文本分析：新闻报道（Part 1：Para.1---7） Para.3 The owner of the cow also called police to notify officers that her cow, named Boots, had gotten loose from a corral from her farm on Summer Street. 新闻报道主体 Para. 3 时间 On Wednesday, Sept. 4, at about 9 a.m. 地点 in town； the area of Belmont and Summer streets;her farm on Summer Street. 主人公 功能性人物 Chief Michael Jenkins；Police officers；a woman on a horse;The owner of the cow ;officers 功能性物品 a female/loose cow;her cow named Boots 段落大意 事件的原因：牛主人报警，说明自家名为 Boots 的奶牛从农场围栏逃脱。 Step 1:文本分析：新闻报道（Part 1：Para.1---7） Para.4 East Bridgewater Police Deputy Chief Mike McLaughlin, Sgt. John Smith and Officers Joshua DeJesus, Matthew Monteiro and Patrick O’Brien responded to the scene and assisted in helping to corral the animal. 新闻报道主体 Para. 4 时间 On Wednesday, Sept. 4, at about 9 a.m. 地点 in town； the area of Belmont and Summer streets;her farm on Summer Street. 主人公 功能性人物 Chief Michael Jenkins；Police officers；a woman on a horse;The owner of the cow ;officers ( Police Deputy Chief Mike McLaughlin, Sgt. John Smith and Officers Joshua DeJesus, Matthew Monteiro and Patrick O’Brien) 功能性物品 a female/loose cow;her cow named Boots 段落大意 事件发展：多名警方人员赶赴现场，协助围捕奶牛 Step 1:文本分析：新闻报道（Part 1：Para.1---7） Para.5 There were minor disruptions to traffic during the incident when the cow got near the road at Belmont and Summer streets. There was also minor damage caused to some lawns in the area.. 新闻报道主体 Para. 5 时间 On Wednesday, Sept. 4, at about 9 a.m. 地点 in town； the area of Belmont and Summer streets;her farm on Summer Street;near the road at Belmont and Summer streets 主人公 功能性人物 Chief Michael Jenkins；Police officers；a woman on a horse;The owner of the cow ;officers ( Police Deputy Chief Mike McLaughlin, Sgt. John Smith and Officers Joshua DeJesus, Matthew Monteiro and Patrick O’Brien) 功能性物品 a female/loose cow;her cow named Boots;some lawns 段落大意 事件过程中的影响：奶牛引发轻微交通混乱，还造成少量草坪损坏 Step 1:文本分析：新闻报道（Part 1：Para.1---7） Para.6 Officers and farm staff were able to safely capture the cow after about two-and-a-half hours toward the back of Beaver Cemetery using a rope lasso（绳索） and food. The cow was guided onto a trailer（拖车） and safely returned to the farm. 新闻报道主体 Para. 6 时间 On Wednesday, Sept. 4, at about 9 a.m. 地点 in town； the area of Belmont and Summer streets;her farm on Summer Street;near the road at Belmont and Summer streets;the back of Beaver Cemetery；the farm； 主人公 功能性人物 Chief Michael Jenkins；Police officers；a woman on a horse;The owner of the cow ;officers ( Police Deputy Chief Mike McLaughlin, Sgt. John Smith and Officers Joshua DeJesus, Matthew Monteiro and Patrick O’Brien); farm staff 功能性物品 a female/loose cow;her cow named Boots;some lawns;a rope lasso;food;a trailer 段落大意 事件结局：警员与农场人员耗时 2.5 小时，用绳套和食物成功捕牛，并将其送回农场。 Step 1:文本分析：新闻报道（Part 1：Para.1---7） Para.7 “I am happy to report that our officers were able to help safely capture the cow without injury to themselves or the animal,” Chief Jenkins said. 新闻报道：总结 Para. 7 时间 On Wednesday, Sept. 4, at about 9 a.m. 地点 in town； the area of Belmont and Summer streets;her farm on Summer Street;near the road at Belmont and Summer streets;the back of Beaver Cemetery；the farm 主人公 功能性人物 Chief Michael Jenkins；Police officers；a woman on a horse;The owner of the cow ;officers ( Police Deputy Chief Mike McLaughlin, Sgt. John Smith and Officers Joshua DeJesus, Matthew Monteiro and Patrick O’Brien); farm staff 功能性物品 a female/loose cow;her cow named Boots;some lawns;a rope lasso;food;a trailer 段落大意 警方负责人的发言：事件圆满解决，无人员和动物受伤 Step 1:文本分析：亲历者叙事（Part 2：Para.8---11） Para.8 I was driving my daughter Lila to her swimming lesson when we spotted a cow wandering down the main road. A thick rope was tied around its neck, dragging on the pavement behind it. The cow was ambling（溜达） along in the middle of the traffic, tail flicking（轻甩） lazily, while a line of cars followed cautiously, their drivers leaning out of windows to stare. A group of kids on bicycles had gathered at a safe distance, cheering and pointing as the cow nudged（轻顶、轻蹭）a stop sign with its head. 亲历者叙事 Para. 8 时间 On Wednesday, Sept. 4, at about 9 a.m. 地点 in town； the area of Belmont and Summer streets;her farm on Summer Street;near the road at Belmont and Summer streets;the back of Beaver Cemetery the main road；the farm 主人公 I 功能性人物 Chief Michael Jenkins；Police officers；a woman on a horse;The owner of the cow ;officers ( Police Deputy Chief Mike McLaughlin, Sgt. John Smith and Officers Joshua DeJesus, Matthew Monteiro and Patrick O’Brien); farm staff； my daughter Lila； their drivers；A group of kids on bicycles 功能性物品 a female/loose cow;her cow named Boots;some lawns;a rope lasso;food;a trailer；A thick rope；a line of cars；a stop sign 段落大意 偶遇逃脱奶牛：“我” 送女儿上课时，撞见一头拴绳奶牛在车流闲逛，路人围观。 Step 1:文本分析：亲历者叙事（Part 2：Para.8---11） Para.9 “Look, Mom!” Lila gasped（惊呼）, pressing her face against the car window. “City people are all scared of it! But you can handle anything, right? You herded cows（驱赶（牲畜）；把…… 聚在一起）on Grandpa’s farm when you were a kid.” Para.10 I smiled, recalling the summer I’d spent on my grandfather’s dairy farm, chasing strays（走失的牛） back into the pasture（牧场） with a stick and a loud voice. “It’s just a lost cow, sweetie,” I said, “but we need to get you to swim class first. I’ll check on it after I drop you off.” 亲历者叙事 Para. 9-10 时间 On Wednesday, Sept. 4, at about 9 a.m. 地点 in town； the area of Belmont and Summer streets;her farm on Summer Street;near the road at Belmont and Summer streets;the back of Beaver Cemetery the main road；the farm;on Grandpa’s farm； 主人公 I/MOm 功能性人物 Chief Michael Jenkins；Police officers；a woman on a horse;The owner of the cow ;officers ( Police Deputy Chief Mike McLaughlin, Sgt. John Smith and Officers Joshua DeJesus, Matthew Monteiro and Patrick O’Brien); farm staff； my daughter Lila； their drivers；A group of kids on bicycles 功能性物品 a female/loose cow;her cow named Boots;some lawns;a rope lasso;food;a trailer；A thick rope；a line of cars；a stop sign；a stick and a loud voice 段落大意 女儿的期许与作者的初步回应 Step 1:文本分析：亲历者叙事（Part 2：Para.8---11） Para.11：We inched past the cow, which lifted its head and let out a low moo as we passed. Lila waved, and the cow tilted its head as if waving back. I dropped Lila at the pool, promising to be back in an hour, then turned the car around to find the cow. By the time I got back to the main road, the traffic had cleared, but the cow was still there—standing in a patch of grass by the sidewalk, chewing on a dandelion（蒲公英）. It was a reddish-brown cow, smaller than the Holsteins（黑白花奶牛）on Grandpa’s farm, with big, gentle eyes. And there was something about it, a skittishness（胆怯；易受惊）in its posture, that made it different from the cows I’d known back home. It didn’t seem like a farm cow at all. 亲历者叙事 Para. 11 时间 On Wednesday, Sept. 4, at about 9 a.m. 地点 in town； the area of Belmont and Summer streets;her farm on Summer Street;near the road at Belmont and Summer streets;the back of Beaver Cemeterythe farm; the main road；on Grandpa’s farm； 主人公 I/MOm 功能性人物 Chief Michael Jenkins；Police officers；a woman on a horse;The owner of the cow ;officers ( Police Deputy Chief Mike McLaughlin, Sgt. John Smith and Officers Joshua DeJesus, Matthew Monteiro and Patrick O’Brien); farm staff； my daughter Lila； their drivers；A group of kids on bicycles 功能性物品 a female/loose cow;her cow named Boots;some lawns;a rope lasso;food;a trailer；A thick rope；a line of cars；a stop sign；a stick and a loud voice， the car； a patch of grass by the sidewalk；a dandelion 段落大意 短暂告别与折返观察 Step 2 预设情节走向+把握主题 Para.1: As I turned to leave, two police officers pulled up in a patrol car. Para.2：We tied the rope to a tree and discussed what to do with the cow. Para 1: 主要写我协助警官们抓牛（怎么抓？我的角色？） Para.2: 主要写如何处理这头牛（谁处理？怎么处理？） 主题：协作的力量；担当与责任；生命的敬畏 新闻报道+亲历者叙事 Para.（ 1-11） 时间 On Wednesday, Sept. 4, at about 9 a.m. 地点 in town； the area of Belmont and Summer streets;her farm on Summer Street;near the road at Belmont and Summer streets;the back of Beaver Cemetery the main road；the farm; on Grandpa’s farm； 主人公 I/MOm 功能性人物 Chief Michael Jenkins；Police officers；a woman on a horse;The owner of the cow ;officers ( Police Deputy Chief Mike McLaughlin, Sgt. John Smith and Officers Joshua DeJesus, Matthew Monteiro and Patrick O’Brien); farm staff； my daughter Lila； their drivers；A group of kids on bicycles 功能性物品 a female/loose cow;her cow named Boots;some lawns;a rope lasso;food;a trailer；A thick rope；a line of cars；a stop sign；a stick and a loud voice， the car； a patch of grass by the sidewalk；a dandelion 文章大意 9 月 4 日警方联合农场人员安全围捕走失母牛 Boots，“I”送女儿上游泳课时偶遇该牛，送女后折返观察情况。 Step 3 构思续写布局 第一和第三人称为主 以一般过去时为主 确定3句衔接句 故事的结局 主题句 人称 时态 情节+情感走向 Para.1: As I turned to leave, two police officers pulled up in a patrol car. ① 警察做什么：观察牛，想怎么抓 ② 我的反应及做法（拿食物，提建议） ③ 我们分工合作去抓牛 ④ 牛的反应（警惕---放下戒备） ⑤ 我们抓住了牛 Para.2：We tied the rope to a tree and discussed what to do with the cow. ① 讨论的结果如何：叫拖车；告知牛主人 ② 等待：照看好牛 ③ 拖车到了，牛主人带着农场人员也到了 ④ 安全装上拖车，送回农场 ⑤ 升华主题：协作的力量 定衔接+结尾+主题 Step3 情节+情感走向 Step3 情节+情感走向 Para.（ 1-11） 时间 On Wednesday, Sept. 4, at about 9 a.m. 地点 in town； the area of Belmont and Summer streets;her farm on Summer Street;near the road at Belmont and Summer streets;the back of Beaver Cemetery the main road；on Grandpa’s farm； 主人公 I/MOm 功能性人物 Chief Michael Jenkins；Police officers；a woman on a horse;The owner of the cow ;officers ( Police Deputy Chief Mike McLaughlin, Sgt. John Smith and Officers Joshua DeJesus, Matthew Monteiro and Patrick O’Brien); farm staff； my daughter Lila； their drivers；A group of kids on bicycles 功能性物品 a female/loose cow;her cow named Boots;some lawns;a rope lasso;food;a trailer；A thick rope；a line of cars；a stop sign；a stick and a loud voice， the car； a patch of grass by the sidewalk；a dandelion 文章大意 9 月 4 日警方联合农场人员安全围捕走失母牛 Boots，“I”送女儿上游泳课时偶遇该牛，送女后折返观察情况。 Para.1: As I turned to leave, two police officers pulled up in a patrol car. ① They stepped out of the patrol car and fixed their eyes on the cow, seemingly figuring out how to capture it without injury to themselves or the animal. (ving作伴随状语) 警察做什么：观察牛，想怎么抓 ②Just then, it occurred to me that there was some cow-favorite food in my car and it might help. （it作形式主语）Without hesitation, I took the food from my car and showed it to the officers, saying,“We might as well try this to distract it while catching it.” 我的反应及做法 ③ Meanwhile, another two officers arrived. One officer fetched a lasso from the patrol car, other officers helped herd the cow, and I held out the food to lure it just like I did when I was a kid on Grandpa’s farm, with the all of us approaching it slowly.(with +O+OC) 我们分工合作去抓牛 ④At first, the cow was rather skittish and wandered off, yet when it caught sight of the food in my hand, it allowed us to come near, starting to eat food and gradually turning mild. (yet并列句/when状从/ving) 牛的反应（警惕---放下戒备） ⑤Sensing the right moment, one officer slipped the lasso over the cow, while the other seized the rope dragging on the ground. We made it! 我们抓住了牛（ving/while 状从） Step3 情节+情感走向 Para.（ 1-11） 时间 On Wednesday, Sept. 4, at about 9 a.m. 地点 in town； the area of Belmont and Summer streets;her farm on Summer Street;near the road at Belmont and Summer streets;the back of Beaver Cemetery the main road；on Grandpa’s farm； 主人公 I/MOm 功能性人物 Chief Michael Jenkins；Police officers；a woman on a horse;The owner of the cow ;officers ( Police Deputy Chief Mike McLaughlin, Sgt. John Smith and Officers Joshua DeJesus, Matthew Monteiro and Patrick O’Brien); farm staff； my daughter Lila； their drivers；A group of kids on bicycles 功能性物品 a female/loose cow;her cow named Boots;some lawns;a rope lasso;food;a trailer；A thick rope；a line of cars；a stop sign；a stick and a loud voice， the car； a patch of grass by the sidewalk；a dandelion 文章大意 9 月 4 日警方联合农场人员安全围捕走失母牛 Boots，“I”送女儿上游泳课时偶遇该牛，送女后折返观察情况。 Para.2：We tied the rope to a tree and discussed what to do with the cow. ① After a brief talk, one officer contacted the owner of the cow and planned to use a trailer to carry it to the farm.(to do 目的状语) 讨论的结果如何：叫拖车；告知牛主人 ② During the time, police officers and I kept a gentle watch on the cow to prevent it from getting skittish again while waiting for the farm staff and the trailer to come.（while 状从省略） 等待：照看好牛 ③Shortly after, the trailer arrived at the scene as scheduled, and soon, the owner together with the farm staff turned up, relieved to find their cow unharmed and grateful for officers’ quick response and my timely help.（adj.作状语） 拖车到了，牛主人带着农场人员也到了 ④Hardly had we joined hands to carefully guide the cow onto the trailer and loaded it safely when I left to pick up my daughter. (半倒装) 安全装上拖车，送回农场 ⑤ On the way, I couldn’t help but reflect that no single person could finish this capture so smoothly. It’s the joint efforts that made difficult things easy, which was the best answer to my daughter about whether I could handle such a thing well. （强调句which定从/whether宾从） 升华主题：协作的力量 参考范文 Para.1: As I turned to leave, two police officers pulled up in a patrol car. They stepped out of the patrol car and fixed their eyes on the cow, seemingly figuring out how to capture it without injury to themselves or the animal. Just then, it occurred to me that there was some cow-favorite food in my car and it might help. Without hesitation, I took the food from my car and showed it to the officers, saying,“We might as well try this to distract it while catching it.”Meanwhile, another two officers arrived. One officer fetched a lasso from the patrol car, other officers helped herd the cow, and I held out the food to lure it just like I did when I was a kid on Grandpa’s farm, with the all of us approaching it slowly. At first, the cow was rather skittish and wandered off, yet when it caught sight of the food in my hand, it allowed us to come near, starting to eat food and gradually turning mild. Sensing the right moment, one officer slipped the lasso over the cow, while the other seized the rope dragging on the ground. We made it! Para.2：We tied the rope to a tree and discussed what to do with the cow. After a brief discussion, one officer contacted the owner of the cow and planned to use a trailer to carry it to the farm. During the time, police officers and I kept a gentle watch on the cow to prevent it from getting skittish again while waiting for the farm staff and the trailer to come. Shortly after, the trailer arrived at the scene as scheduled, and soon, the owner together with the farm staff turned up, relieved to find their cow unharmed and grateful for officers’ quick response and my timely help.Hardly had we joined hands to carefully guide the cow onto the trailer and loaded it safely when I left to pick up my daughter. On the way, I couldn’t help but reflect that no single person could finish this capture so smoothly. It’s the joint efforts that made difficult things easy, which was the best answer to my daughter about whether I could handle such a thing well. 审视初稿+认真誊写 句子哪些进行高级改写 时态和语态是否一致 主谓是否一致 人称是否一致 06 05 04 03 02 单词拼写是否正确 是否能写满格 01 续写实用表达集锦 核心表达 中文翻译 chase after 追逐 get loose 挣脱；跑丢 respond to the scene 到达现场 assist in doing sth 协助作某事 cause damage to 对...造成损害 herd cows 驱赶牛 pull up (in a car) 停下来 tail flicking lazily 尾巴慵懒地轻甩 tilt its head 歪着头 amble along ... 悠闲地沿着...走 核心表达 中文翻译 a patch of grass 一块草地 lift its head 抬起头 a skittishness in its posture 姿态里透着胆怯 press one’s face against the window 把脸贴在窗户上 gasp in surprise 惊呼 lean out of windows 探出窗外 inch past 缓慢移动过... wave at sb/sth 向...挥手 by the time sb did sth, sth had done sth By the time I got back to the main road, the traffic had cleared 1. It was the collective effort of all people present that made the tough work simple and easy. 2. When sb. worked together with a common goal, every small effort added up to a powerful force that could get through any difficulty. 3. Without the joint efforts of everyone, sb. could never have finished the work so perfectly. 协作的力量类主题句 24 1. It made me understand that every life deserved to be treated with respect and kindness, and a little gentleness could turn a tense situation into a warm one. 2. It was this experience that enlightened me with the fact that to hold awe for life was to treat every living thing with kindness and patience. 敬畏生命类主题句 25 1.What sb gained from this unexpected incident was that the warmth of daily life often hid in such small moments when sb2 responded quickly, strangers cooperated willingly and everyone cared, making the world a safe and gentle place. 2. Through the incident, it dawned on sb that shouldering one’s due duty, sb. could make a difference in the face of difficulties. 责任担当类主题句 26 $