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Unit 5 Summer fun 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“Summer fun”为话题,属于“假期与户外”主题范畴中“夏日活动与假期计划”主题群,核心聚焦“用英语谈论户外活动、制定假期计划、撰写假期邀请邮件”,运用will/won’t表将来、be going to表意图/预测、现在进行时表固定计划及户外、假期相关核心词汇,提升计划类与邀请类写作的逻辑性和实用性。常见写作角度包括:① 制定夏日露营/夏令营计划;② 撰写假期邀请邮件;③ 介绍户外生存活动;④ 分享夏日假期安排。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点,不超纲,可直接用于课堂同步训练。
【单元话题】
“我的夏日露营计划”。请用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的夏日露营计划,包括时间、地点、同行人员、活动安排及准备事项,词数80-100左右,题目为“My Summer Camping Plan”。
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【范文】
My Summer Camping Plan
I’m really excited about my summer camping plan with my family – we’re going to have a wonderful time in the countryside!
We’re leaving on July 15th and staying for three days. My dad has booked a campsite near a lake. We’re going to put up tents ourselves, and I’ll learn to light a campfire. During the day, we’ll go mountain biking and catch fish in the lake. In the evening, we’ll cook food over the campfire and tell stories. I’m also going to bring a compass and a map to learn how to read them.
I think this camping trip will be full of fun. It will not only help me learn survival skills but also make our family closer. I can’t wait!
【译文】
我的夏日露营计划
我对和家人的夏日露营计划感到非常兴奋——我们将要在乡下度过一段美好的时光!
我们7月15日出发,停留三天。爸爸已经预订了湖边的一个营地。我们要自己搭帐篷,我还会学习生火。白天,我们会去山地骑行,在湖里钓鱼;晚上,我们会围着篝火做饭、讲故事。我还打算带一个指南针和一张地图,学习如何看它们。
我觉得这次露营会充满乐趣,它不仅能让我学到生存技能,还能让我们一家人更亲密。我等不及了!
亮点词块
1.put up tents 搭帐篷
2.light a campfire 生火
3.mountain biking 山地骑行
4.cook over the campfire 围着篝火做饭
5.survival skills 生存技能
6.book a campsite 预订营地
7.be full of fun 充满乐趣
高分句子
1.We’re leaving on July 15th and staying for three days.(用现在进行时表固定计划,贴合单元语法重点)
2.We’re going to put up tents ourselves, and I’ll learn to light a campfire.(混合be going to与will,分别表计划与意愿,贴合单元核心语法)
3.It will not only help me learn survival skills but also make our family closer.(用“not only...but also...”升华主题,体现活动意义,贴合单元内涵)
【拓展1】
你的外国朋友Lucas想来中国参加夏令营,请你写一封邮件,向他推荐课本中的“Wild Weekend”活动,并发出邀请,词数不少于60。
Dear Lucas,
I’m so happy you want to join a Chinese summer camp! I want to recommend “Wild Weekend” to you – it’s super exciting!
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Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear Lucas,
I’m so happy you want to join a Chinese summer camp! I want to recommend “Wild Weekend” to you – it’s super exciting!
It’s held in Dali every weekend from Friday to Sunday. You’ll put up tents and cook your own food. During the day, you can catch fish, go mountain biking and learn to light a fire. In the evening, you’ll dance to Bai’s traditional music and make new friends. The instructors will teach you survival skills, like recognising plants.
Would you like to join me? I’ll meet you at the airport on July 1st. I’m sure we’ll have an unforgettable summer!
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的卢卡斯:
很高兴你想来参加中国的夏令营!我想向你推荐“野外周末”活动——它超级刺激!
这个活动每周五到周日在大理举办。你要自己搭帐篷、自己做饭。白天可以钓鱼、山地骑行,还能学习生火;晚上会跟着白族传统音乐跳舞,结交新朋友。教练会教你生存技能,比如识别植物。
你愿意和我一起参加吗?我7月1日去机场接你。我相信我们会度过一个难忘的夏天!
你的,
李华
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,写一篇短文,介绍你参加过的一次户外活动,词数70左右,开头已给出。
提示
信息
核心内容
活动名称(野外徒步)、时间(去年暑假)、同行人员(同学)、活动过程(认植物、找水源、分享食物)、感受
语言要求
运用过去时与单元核心词汇,贴合单元主题
Last summer holiday, I joined a wild hiking activity with my classmates. It was one of the most meaningful experiences in my life.
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【拓展2范文】
Last summer holiday, I joined a wild hiking activity with my classmates. It was one of the most meaningful experiences in my life.
We met at the school gate early in the morning and walked into the mountain. Our teacher taught us to recognise safe plants and find clean water. When we felt hungry, we shared the food we brought. In the afternoon, we got lost, but we used a compass to find the right way.
Although we were tired, we felt proud. This activity taught me the importance of teamwork and survival skills. I hope to join similar activities this summer!
【拓展2译文】
去年暑假,我和同学们参加了一次野外徒步活动。这是我人生中最有意义的经历之一。
我们一大早在校门口集合,走进了山里。老师教我们识别安全的植物、寻找干净的水源。饿的时候,我们分享带来的食物。下午我们迷了路,但用指南针找到了正确的方向。
虽然很累,但我们都很自豪。这次活动让我明白了团队合作和生存技能的重要性。我希望今年夏天能参加更多类似的活动!
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.户外与假期相关(单元重点)
· 户外活动:put up a tent 搭帐篷;light a fire 生火;catch fish 钓鱼;mountain biking 山地骑行;recognise plants 识别植物;read a map 看地图;use a compass 用指南针;cook over a campfire 篝火做饭
· 语法相关:will/won’t(表预测/意愿);be going to(表意图/预测);现在进行时(表固定计划);时间状语(next month, on July 15th, this summer)
· 计划与准备:book a campsite 预订营地;bring supplies 带物资;leave for 出发去;stay for 停留;make a plan 制定计划;join an activity 参加活动
· 感受与描述:excited 兴奋的;unforgettable 难忘的;meaningful 有意义的;full of fun 充满乐趣;tired but happy 累并快乐着
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· will/won’t 用法:
· 肯定式:We will go fishing. / I’ll learn to light a fire.
· 否定式:It won’t rain. / We won’t stay too late.
· 疑问式:Will you bring a compass? / Won’t you join us?
· be going to 用法:
· 表意图:I’m going to learn survival skills.(我打算学习生存技能。)
· 表预测(有证据):Look at the clouds. It’s going to rain.(看云,要下雨了。)
· 现在进行时表计划:
· We’re leaving next Friday. / My dad is booking the campsite.
1. 表达类(单元基础)
· 逻辑连接:and 并且;but 但是;during the day 白天;in the evening 晚上;not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
· 感悟表达:excited about 对……兴奋;can’t wait 等不及;full of fun 充满乐趣;meaningful experience 有意义的经历;make...closer 让……更亲密
二、实用句型积累
1.制定假期计划(贴合单元核心)
· I’m really excited about my...plan. 我对我的……计划感到非常兴奋,例:I’m really excited about my summer camp plan.
· We’re going to...and I’ll... 我们打算……而且我会……,例:We’re going to hike in the mountain and I’ll take photos.
· This...will not only...but also... 这次……不仅会……而且会……,例:This trip will not only make me happy but also improve my skills.
1. 发出假期邀请(贴合单元主题)
· Would you like to join me for...? 你愿意和我一起参加……吗?例:Would you like to join me for the camping trip?
· I’ll meet you at...on... 我会在……(时间)……(地点)接你,例:I’ll meet you at the train station on August 5th.
· I’m sure we’ll have an unforgettable... 我相信我们会度过一个难忘的……,例:I’m sure we’ll have an unforgettable summer.
1. 描述户外活动(贴合单元内涵)
· We...and learned to... 我们……并且学会了……,例:We walked into the forest and learned to find water.
· Although we were..., we felt... 虽然我们……但我们感到……,例:Although we were tired, we felt very happy.
· This activity taught me the importance of... 这次活动让我明白……的重要性,例:This activity taught me the importance of teamwork.
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:What are you going to do this summer?;Where will you go camping?;Who will you go with?;What survival skills will you learn?;Are you going to bring a compass?
· 回答句型:I’m going to join a summer camp.;I’ll go camping near a lake.;I’ll go with my family.;I’ll learn to light a fire and read a map.;Yes, I am. It’s very useful.
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