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Unit 1 What’s your style? 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“What’s your style?”为话题,属于“时尚与生活”主题范畴中“服饰与风格”主题群,核心聚焦“用英语描述服饰、谈论穿搭风格、撰写照片描述”,运用现在进行时、一般现在时与现在进行时的混合使用及服饰、风格相关核心词汇,提升描述类写作的逻辑性和画面感。常见写作角度包括:① 描述自己或他人的穿搭风格;② 撰写照片中人物的服饰与场景描述;③ 分享购物时的对话与选择;④ 介绍不同文化中的特色服饰。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点,不超纲,可直接用于课堂同步训练。
【单元话题】
“描述一张难忘的合影”。请用英语写一篇短文,描述一张你印象深刻的合影,包括照片中的人物、服饰、场景及当时正在做的事情,词数80-100左右,题目为“A Memorable Group Photo”。
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【范文】
A Memorable Group Photo
My favorite group photo was taken at our school fashion show last month—it always brings back happy memories.
In the photo, my classmates and I are standing on the playground. I’m wearing a blue blouse with a white belt and jeans. My best friend Lily is in a pink dress and white trainers—she looks so pretty! Our teacher Ms. Wang is beside us, wearing a gray jacket and a scarf. We are all smiling and waving at the camera. Some girls are holding small flags, and Tom is adjusting his cap. Everyone’s style is different, but we look great together.
This photo reminds me of the wonderful time we spent. I love it because it shows our unique styles and friendship.
【译文】
一张难忘的合影
我最喜欢的合影是上个月学校时装秀时拍的——它总能唤起美好的回忆。
照片里,我和同学们正站在操场上。我穿着一件蓝色女衬衫,搭配白色腰带和牛仔裤。我最好的朋友莉莉穿着粉色连衣裙和白色运动鞋——她看起来真漂亮!我们的王老师在我们旁边,穿着灰色夹克,围着一条围巾。我们都在微笑着向镜头挥手。有些女孩拿着小旗子,汤姆正在调整他的帽子。每个人的风格都不一样,但我们在一起看起来很棒。
这张照片让我想起了我们共度的美好时光。我喜欢它,因为它展现了我们独特的风格和友谊。
亮点词块
1.group photo 合影
2.fashion show 时装秀
3.bring back memories 唤起回忆
4.unique styles 独特风格
5.adjust one’s cap 调整帽子
6.wave at the camera 向镜头挥手
7.pink dress 粉色连衣裙
高分句子
1.In the photo, my classmates and I are standing on the playground.(用现在进行时描述照片中的动作,贴合单元语法重点)
2.My best friend Lily is in a pink dress and white trainers—she looks so pretty!(结合服饰描述与感受,贴合单元核心话题)
3.Everyone’s style is different, but we look great together.(对比风格并升华主题,体现友谊与包容,贴合单元内涵)
【拓展1】
你的外国笔友Emma想了解你的日常穿搭风格,请你写一封邮件,向她分享你的穿搭喜好、常穿服饰及不同场合的穿搭选择,词数不少于60。
Dear Emma,
I’m glad you’re interested in my dressing style! I’d like to share it with you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear Emma,
I’m glad you’re interested in my dressing style! I’d like to share it with you.
I usually wear comfortable clothes. On schooldays, I often put on a T-shirt, jeans and trainers—they’re easy for sports. At weekends, I like wearing a jacket and shorts. My favorite color is blue, so most of my clothes are blue. When there’s a party, I’ll wear a nice blouse and a skirt. I also have a red scarf that my grandma made for me—I love it very much.
What’s your dressing style? Do you like wearing dresses or jeans? I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的艾玛:
很高兴你对我的穿搭风格感兴趣!我想和你分享一下。
我通常穿舒适的衣服。上学的时候,我经常穿T恤、牛仔裤和运动鞋——它们适合运动。周末,我喜欢穿夹克和短裤。我最喜欢的颜色是蓝色,所以我的大部分衣服都是蓝色的。有派对的时候,我会穿一件漂亮的女衬衫和裙子。我还有一条奶奶为我织的红围巾——我非常喜欢它。
你的穿搭风格是什么样的?你喜欢穿连衣裙还是牛仔裤?期待你的回复!
你的,
李华
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,写一篇短文,介绍中国的特色服饰,词数70左右,开头已给出。
提示
信息
核心内容
介绍一种中国特色服饰(如汉服、苗族服饰等),包括颜色、款式、特点及穿着场合
语言要求
运用单元核心语法(一般现在时、现在进行时),贴合单元主题
Traditional Chinese clothes are full of cultural charm. Among them, Hanfu is my favorite.
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【拓展2范文】
Traditional Chinese clothes are full of cultural charm. Among them, Hanfu is my favorite.
Hanfu has a long history. It usually has bright colors like red and blue. The blouses are loose, and the skirts are wide. Many girls like wearing Hanfu with scarves. Now, more and more young people are wearing Hanfu to traditional festivals or trips. They look elegant and graceful in it.
Hanfu shows the beauty of Chinese culture. I hope more people will love this traditional style.
【拓展2译文】
中国传统服饰充满文化魅力。其中,汉服是我最喜欢的。
汉服有着悠久的历史。它通常有红色、蓝色等鲜艳的颜色。上衣宽松,裙子宽大。很多女孩喜欢搭配围巾穿汉服。现在,越来越多的年轻人在传统节日或旅行时穿汉服。他们穿上汉服看起来优雅又端庄。
汉服展现了中国文化的美。我希望更多人会喜欢这种传统风格。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.服饰与风格相关(单元重点)
· 服饰名称:blouse 女衬衫;jacket 夹克;jeans 牛仔裤;trainers 运动鞋;T-shirt T恤;skirt 裙子;dress 连衣裙;scarf 围巾;belt 腰带;cap 帽子;sunglasses 太阳镜
· 语法相关:现在进行时(am/is/are + doing,描述正在进行的动作);一般现在时(描述习惯、喜好、事实);时间状语(now, at the moment, usually, often, every day等)
· 动作与描述:wear 穿着(状态);put on 穿上(动作);adjust 调整;wave at 向……挥手;smile 微笑;look pretty 看起来漂亮;loose 宽松的;wide 宽大的;comfortable 舒适的
· 场景与风格:fashion show 时装秀;playground 操场;traditional festival 传统节日;unique style 独特风格;cultural charm 文化魅力;elegant 优雅的
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 现在进行时用法:
· 肯定式:She is wearing a pink dress. / They are waving at the camera.
· 否定式:He isn’t wearing a cap. / We aren’t standing indoors.
· 疑问式:Is she in jeans? / What are they doing?
· 一般现在时与现在进行时混合使用:
· 习惯(一般现在时)+ 正在进行的动作(现在进行时):She usually wears trainers, but today she is wearing boots.(她通常穿运动鞋,但今天她穿着靴子。)
· 事实(一般现在时)+ 场景动作(现在进行时):Hanfu has bright colors, and many people are wearing it now.(汉服颜色鲜艳,现在很多人都在穿。)
1. 表达类(单元基础)
· 逻辑连接:and 并且;but 但是;so 因此;among them 在其中;now 现在;when 当……时
· 感悟表达:memorable 难忘的;happy memories 美好回忆;cultural charm 文化魅力;unique 独特的;elegant 优雅的;bring back 唤起
二、实用句型积累
1.描述照片与穿搭(贴合单元核心)
· In the photo, ... are + doing sth. 照片里,……正在做某事,例:In the photo, we are taking part in a fashion show.
· ... is wearing ..., and ... looks ... ……穿着……,而且看起来……,例:She is wearing a red scarf, and she looks very warm.
· Everyone’s style is different, but ... 每个人的风格都不一样,但……,例:Everyone’s style is different, but we all look fashionable.
1. 分享穿搭喜好(贴合单元主题)
· I usually wear ... on ... 我通常在……穿……,例:I usually wear a jacket on cold days.
· My favorite clothes are ... because ... 我最喜欢的衣服是……因为……,例:My favorite clothes are jeans because they’re comfortable.
· When there’s ..., I’ll wear ... 当有……的时候,我会穿……,例:When there’s a party, I’ll wear a nice dress.
1. 介绍特色服饰(贴合单元内涵)
· ... is a kind of traditional Chinese clothes with ... ……是一种有着……的中国传统服饰,例:Miao costumes are a kind of traditional Chinese clothes with colorful patterns.
· More and more people are wearing ... 越来越多的人正在穿……,例:More and more young people are wearing Hanfu to show their love for culture.
· ... shows the beauty of ... ……展现了……的美,例:This traditional style shows the beauty of Chinese culture.
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:What are you wearing today?;What does your favorite outfit look like?;Who is in the memorable group photo with you?;What are you doing in the photo?;Do you like traditional Chinese clothes?
· 回答句型:I’m wearing a T-shirt and shorts today.;My favorite outfit is a blue blouse with jeans—it’s comfortable.;My classmates and our teacher are in the photo.;We are smiling and waving at the camera.;Yes, I do. I like Hanfu best.
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