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Unit 4 Review 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元为前三个单元的复习单元，核心整合“挑战与突破” “坚持与成长” “梦想与探索”三大主题，聚焦“用综合语法讲述成长故事、分享多元经历、传递励志精神”，运用使役动词、分词用法、目的状语从句及相关核心词汇，提升写作的语法综合运用能力和主题融合能力。常见写作角度包括：① 结合前三单元话题，用多种语法讲述自己的成长与突破经历；② 给笔友分享前三个单元的学习收获与生活感悟；③ 描述一次融合坚持与追梦的综合经历，整合核心语法；④ 仿写复习任务中的“励志人物”主题，综合运用核心语法与话题词汇。所有内容严格贴合前三单元的知识重点，突出“综合性”和“应用性”，可直接用于课堂复习训练。
【单元话题】
“我的成长蜕变”。请用英语写一篇短文，结合前三单元的话题（如突破局限、坚持追梦、探索未知等），讲述一次让你实现蜕变的综合经历，综合运用至少三种核心语法，词数80-100左右，题目为“My Growth Transformation”。
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【范文】
My Growth Transformation
This year, I experienced a great transformation that combined courage, persistence and dream—just like the inspiring stories in the first three units.
I once thought I was too shy to speak in public. My teacher had me join the English speech club and helped me practice every week. To build confidence, I followed Yang Liwei’s example and set small goals for myself so that I could make steady progress. During the training, I met a classmate who shared the same trouble. We encouraged each other and kept practicing. Finally, I won the school speech contest!
This experience teaches me that growth comes from facing challenges bravely. With persistence and proper methods, we can break our limits and realize our dreams. I’m more confident and brave now.
【译文】
我的成长蜕变
今年，我经历了一次巨大的蜕变，其中饱含勇气、坚持与梦想——就像前三单元中那些鼓舞人心的故事一样。
我曾经认为自己太害羞，不敢在公共场合说话。老师让我加入了英语演讲俱乐部，还每周帮我练习。为了建立自信，我以杨利伟为榜样，为自己设定了小目标，以便能稳步进步。训练期间，我遇到了一位和我有同样困扰的同学，我们互相鼓励，坚持练习。最终，我赢得了学校演讲比赛的冠军！
这次经历让我明白，成长源于勇敢面对挑战。凭借坚持和正确的方法，我们能打破自身局限，实现梦想。现在的我更加自信、勇敢了。
亮点词块
1.growth transformation 成长蜕变
2.steady progress 稳步进步
3.break limits 打破局限
4.English speech contest 英语演讲比赛
5.face challenges bravely 勇敢面对挑战
6.inspiring stories 鼓舞人心的故事
7.realize dreams 实现梦想
高分句子
1.This year, I experienced a great transformation that combined courage, persistence and dream.（运用定语从句，贴合复习语法重点）
2.My teacher had me join the English speech club and helped me practice every week.（运用使役动词had/helped，贴合单元语法整合要求）
3.I followed Yang Liwei’s example and set small goals for myself so that I could make steady progress.（结合目的状语从句，贴合单元核心语法）
【拓展1】
你的外国笔友Peter想了解你近期的成长与学习收获，请你写一封邮件，结合前三单元的话题，分享你的经历、语法学习心得及生活感悟，词数不少于60。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to share my recent growth and study with you. These months, I’ve had a meaningful transformation and mastered useful grammars from the first three units.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to share my recent growth and study with you. These months, I’ve had a meaningful transformation and mastered useful grammars from the first three units.
I used to be afraid of challenges, but I learned from Deng Yaping to never give up. My mom made me practice playing the piano every day, and I joined a music competition. I also learned to use causative verbs, participles and purpose clauses together to describe experiences. For example, “The encouraging words that my teacher said made me more confident so that I kept practicing.”
This journey taught me the power of persistence. If you want to practice comprehensive grammars, I can share more examples. Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的彼得：
很高兴和你分享我近期的成长与学习。这几个月，我经历了一次有意义的蜕变，还掌握了前三单元中实用的语法知识。
我曾经害怕挑战，但从邓亚萍身上学会了永不放弃。妈妈让我每天练习弹钢琴，我还参加了音乐比赛。我也学会了将使役动词、分词和目的状语从句结合起来描述经历，比如“老师说的鼓励话语让我更加自信，所以我坚持练习下去”。
这段旅程让我明白了坚持的力量。如果你想练习综合语法，我可以分享更多例子。期待你的回复！
你的，
李华
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，描述一次“坚持追梦”的综合经历，综合运用至少三种核心语法，词数70左右，开头已给出。
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核心经历
为了实现成为画家的梦想，突破“没天赋”的局限，坚持练习，最终获得比赛奖项
具体内容
描述遇到的困难（分词用法）；说明努力的方式（使役动词）；分享成功的原因（目的状语从句）
期待收获
传递“坚持终有回报”的励志精神
I’ve always dreamed of becoming a painter, but many people said I wasn’t talented enough. However, I didn’t give up and kept chasing my dream.
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【拓展2范文】
I’ve always dreamed of becoming a painter, but many people said I wasn’t talented enough. However, I didn’t give up and kept chasing my dream.
I asked an artist to teach me, and he had me draw sketches every day. To improve my skills, I visited art galleries regularly so that I could learn from famous works. A classmate who also loved painting joined me, and we encouraged each other. Finally, I won the first prize in a school art competition.
This experience shows that talent isn’t everything. With persistence and hard work, we can realize any dream.
【拓展2译文】
我一直梦想成为一名画家，但很多人说我没有足够的天赋。然而，我没有放弃，一直追逐着我的梦想。
我请了一位艺术家教我，他让我每天画素描。为了提高技能，我定期参观艺术画廊，以便能从名作中学习。一位同样热爱绘画的同学加入了我，我们互相鼓励。最终，我在学校的艺术比赛中获得了一等奖。
这次经历表明，天赋并不是一切。凭借坚持和努力，我们能实现任何梦想。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.综合话题相关（整合前三单元）
· 成长与蜕变：growth transformation 成长蜕变；break limits 打破局限；face challenges bravely 勇敢面对挑战；steady progress 稳步进步；realize dreams 实现梦想；persistence 坚持；courage 勇气
· 语法综合相关：使役动词（make/have/let/help）；分词用法（现在分词/过去分词）；目的状语从句（so that）；定语从句（who/which/that）
· 感悟与表达：inspiring stories 鼓舞人心的故事；the power of persistence 坚持的力量；meaningful transformation 有意义的蜕变；talent isn’t everything 天赋不是一切；hard work 努力
· 动作与场景：join the club 加入俱乐部；practice regularly 定期练习；win the contest 赢得比赛；draw sketches 画素描；visit art galleries 参观艺术画廊
1. 语法相关（综合前三单元）
· 使役动词+分词用法+目的状语从句：
· My teacher had me practicing speaking English every day so that I could improve quickly.（老师让我每天练习说英语，以便能快速提高。）
· The inspiring movie made us believe that we can break the limits if we keep trying.（这部鼓舞人心的电影让我们相信，只要坚持尝试，就能打破局限。）
· 定语从句+使役动词+分词：
· The classmate who joined the speech club with me helped me build confidence by practicing together.（和我一起加入演讲俱乐部的同学通过共同练习帮我建立了自信。）
· 综合四种语法：
· I followed the example of Eric Weihenmeyer, who never gave up, and my parents had me train hard so that I could achieve my goal, which made me more persistent.（我以永不放弃的埃里克·魏亨麦尔为榜样，父母让我刻苦训练以便能实现目标，这让我变得更加坚持。）
1. 表达类（单元基础）
· 逻辑连接：just like 就像；and 并且；but 但是；so that 以便；finally 最终；however 然而；with 凭借
· 感悟表达：growth comes from... 成长源于……；the power of persistence 坚持的力量；realize one’s dream 实现梦想；break limits 打破局限
二、实用句型积累
1.讲述成长蜕变经历（贴合单元核心）
· This year, I experienced a... that combined... 今年，我经历了一次……的……，其中包含……，例：This year, I experienced a wonderful journey that combined dream, persistence and courage.
· I once thought I was... but... 我曾经认为自己……但……，例：I once thought I was not good at sports, but I kept practicing and finally made the team.
· This experience teaches me that... 这次经历让我明白……，例：This experience teaches me that nothing is impossible with hard work.
1. 分享学习收获与感悟（贴合单元主题）
· I learned to use... together to... 我学会了将……结合起来去……，例：I learned to use causative verbs and participles together to describe my experiences vividly.
· This journey taught me the power of... 这段旅程让我明白了……的力量，例：This journey taught me the power of never giving up.
· If you want to practice..., I can... 如果你想练习……，我可以……，例：If you want to practice comprehensive grammars, I can share more interesting stories.
1. 描述坚持追梦经历（贴合单元内涵）
· I asked... to teach me, and he had me... 我请……教我，他让我……，例：I asked a coach to teach me, and he had me run 3 kilometers every morning.
· To..., I... so that... 为了……，我……以便……，例：To improve my English, I read English books every night so that I could expand my vocabulary.
· This experience shows that... 这次经历表明……，例：This experience shows that persistence can help us overcome any difficulty.
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型：What grammars have you integrated in this writing?；How did you break your limits in the experience?；What made you keep chasing your dream?；Have you ever used multiple grammars to describe a story?；What’s the most important thing you learned from the experience?
· 回答句型：I have integrated causative verbs, participles and purpose clauses.；I kept practicing and facing challenges bravely to break my limits.；The inspiring stories from the textbook and the support of my friends made me keep chasing my dream.；Yes, I said “My teacher had me practice painting so that I could win the contest, which made me more confident.”；The most important thing I learned is that persistence is the key to success.
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