Unit 9 A Volunteer 作文学案 -2025-2026学年教科版五四制英语八年级上册

该初中英语作文学案以“志愿服务”为核心主题，聚焦“用英语讲述经历、分享感悟、论述价值”的学习目标，通过写作导引、话题任务、范文解析、拓展练习及词汇句型积累的递进设计，构建从基础表达到综合运用的完整学习路径。 亮点在于主题探究与核心素养的深度融合，如“给外国笔友分享志愿服务经历”“论述志愿服务让世界更美好”等任务，既提升语言表达能力，又培养逻辑思维与公益精神（文化意识）。提供的亮点词块、高分句子及拓展范文，为学生深度学习提供支架，也为教师实施单元复习提供系统、可操作的教学指导。

Unit 9 A Volunteer 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“A Volunteer”为话题，属于“爱心与奉献”主题范畴中“志愿服务”主题群，核心聚焦“用英语讲述志愿服务经历、分享奉献的快乐、论述志愿服务的价值”，运用定语从句（who/which/that） 及志愿服务相关核心词汇，提升叙事类与议论类写作的逻辑性和感染力。常见写作角度包括：① 讲述一次难忘的志愿服务经历；② 给笔友分享参与志愿活动的感悟；③ 论述“志愿服务让世界更美好”；④ 仿写苏珊母女的对话传递公益精神。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，突出“公益性”和“正能量”，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “我的第一次志愿服务”。请用英语写一篇短文，讲述你第一次参与志愿服务的经历，包括活动内容、过程中的感受、遇到的困难及收获，词数80-100左右，题目为“My First Volunteer Experience”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 My First Volunteer Experience Last weekend, I joined a volunteer activity at a nursing home—this experience made me understand the meaning of kindness, just like Susan’s mother in the textbook. At first, I was shy and didn’t know how to talk to the elderly. But an old lady who smiled warmly encouraged me to share stories. I helped clean their rooms, read newspapers for them, and listened to their life experiences. There was a grandpa who couldn’t walk easily; I pushed his wheelchair and showed him around the garden. Though I felt tired, seeing their happy faces made me full of joy. This experience teaches me that volunteering is not about being paid. It’s about showing love and care to those in need. I will keep doing volunteer work because it makes the world a warmer place. 【译文】 我的第一次志愿服务 上周末，我参加了养老院的一项志愿活动——这段经历让我明白了善意的意义，就像课本里苏珊的妈妈一样。 一开始，我很害羞，不知道如何与老人们交流。但一位笑容温暖的老奶奶鼓励我分享故事。我帮他们打扫房间、读报纸，还倾听他们的人生经历。有一位爷爷行动不便，我推着他的轮椅，带他在花园里散步。虽然我感到很累，但看到他们开心的笑容，我心里充满了喜悦。 这次经历让我明白，志愿服务不是为了获得报酬，而是向有需要的人表达关爱。我会继续做志愿工作，因为它让世界变得更温暖。 亮点词块 1.nursing home 养老院 2.volunteer activity 志愿活动 3.share stories 分享故事 4.push the wheelchair 推轮椅 5.show love and care 表达关爱 6.those in need 有需要的人 7.full of joy 充满喜悦 高分句子 1.But an old lady who smiled warmly encouraged me to share stories.（用who引导定语从句修饰人，贴合单元语法重点） 2.There was a grandpa who couldn’t walk easily; I pushed his wheelchair and showed him around the garden.（细节生动，呼应课本志愿服务场景，贴合单元主题） 3.It’s about showing love and care to those in need. I will keep doing volunteer work because it makes the world a warmer place.（升华主题，体现志愿服务的核心价值，贴合单元内涵） 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友Peter对中国的志愿服务很感兴趣，想了解相关活动并计划参与，请你写一封邮件，分享你的志愿服务经历及推荐的志愿活动，词数不少于60。 Dear Peter, I’m glad you’re interested in volunteer work in China! I had a wonderful experience last weekend and want to share it with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Peter, I’m glad you’re interested in volunteer work in China! I had a wonderful experience last weekend and want to share it with you. I volunteered at a community library. We helped sort books that were scattered and guided children who came to read. A little girl who didn’t know how to find storybooks thanked me warmly, which made me very happy. I recommend you try community service or environmental protection activities—they are meaningful. Volunteering lets you meet kind people and make a difference. If you come to China, I’ll join you in volunteer work. Let me know if you need more information! Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的彼得： 很高兴你对中国的志愿工作感兴趣！上周末我有一段很棒的经历，想和你分享。 我在社区图书馆做了志愿者。我们帮忙整理散落的书籍，还为前来阅读的孩子们指路。一个不知道如何找故事书的小女孩热情地感谢了我，这让我非常开心。我推荐你尝试社区服务或环保志愿活动——它们都很有意义。 志愿服务能让你遇到善良的人，还能为世界带来改变。如果你来中国，我会和你一起参与志愿工作。需要更多信息的话随时告诉我！ 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，论述“志愿服务让世界更美好”，词数70左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 核心观点 志愿服务是连接爱心的桥梁，能传递温暖、帮助他人、促进社会和谐，让世界更美好 理由 志愿服务帮助有需要的人；志愿服务传递正能量；志愿服务拉近人与人之间的距离 呼吁 积极参与志愿服务，用微小的行动传递大爱 Volunteering is a bridge of love that connects people’s kindness. It brings warmth to the world and makes life better for everyone. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 Volunteering is a bridge of love that connects people’s kindness. It brings warmth to the world and makes life better for everyone. Volunteers help those in need—like taking care of the elderly in nursing homes or helping children who lack books. They pass on positive energy and shorten the distance between people. Every small act of volunteer work, which seems ordinary, can make a big difference. We should actively join volunteer activities. With our love and efforts, we can make the world a more harmonious and warmer place for everyone. 【拓展2译文】 志愿服务是连接人们善意的爱心桥梁，它为世界带来温暖，让每个人的生活都更美好。 志愿者帮助有需要的人——比如照顾养老院的老人或帮助缺少书籍的孩子。他们传递正能量，拉近人与人之间的距离。每一次看似平凡的志愿服务，都能产生巨大的影响。 我们应该积极参与志愿活动，用我们的爱心和努力，为每个人打造一个更和谐、更温暖的世界。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.志愿服务相关（单元重点） · 志愿活动：volunteer activity 志愿活动；nursing home 养老院；community library 社区图书馆；environmental protection activities 环保志愿活动；sort books 整理书籍；guide children 引导孩子；push the wheelchair 推轮椅 · 定语从句相关：who（指代人）；which/that（指代事物）；whose（指代所属关系） · 感受与价值：kindness 善意；warmth 温暖；positive energy 正能量；meaningful 有意义的；full of joy 充满喜悦；make a difference 产生影响；those in need 有需要的人 · 动作与表达：join in 参与；share stories 分享故事；read newspapers 读报纸；listen to 倾听；take care of 照顾；pass on 传递；shorten the distance 拉近距离 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 定语从句（指代人，who/that）： · The girl who/that helped the elderly is my classmate.（帮助老人的那个女孩是我的同学。） · An old man who/that likes reading asked me for help.（一位喜欢读书的老爷爷向我求助。） · 定语从句（指代事物，which/that）： · The volunteer activity which/that we joined was meaningful.（我们参加的志愿活动很有意义。） · The books which/that we sorted were for children.（我们整理的书籍是给孩子们的。） · 定语从句（作宾语，可省略关系代词）： · The stories（that/which）she shared touched everyone.（她分享的故事感动了所有人。） · The wheelchair（that/which）I pushed was comfortable.（我推的那辆轮椅很舒适。） 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 逻辑连接：just like 就像；though 虽然；because 因为；and 并且；which 指代前文内容；with 用…… · 感悟表达：the meaning of kindness 善意的意义；bridge of love 爱心桥梁；pass on positive energy 传递正能量；make the world warmer 让世界更温暖；harmonious 和谐的 二、实用句型积累 1.讲述志愿服务经历（贴合单元核心） · Last... I joined a volunteer activity at...—this experience made me... 去年……我参加了……的志愿活动——这段经历让我……，例：Last month, I joined a volunteer activity at a primary school—this experience made me love children more. · There was a... who... I... 有一位……，我……，例：There was a little boy who couldn’t read. I taught him simple words. · Though I felt..., seeing... made me... 虽然我感到……，但看到……让我……，例：Though I felt busy, seeing the children’s smiles made me satisfied. 1. 分享志愿感悟与推荐（贴合单元主题） · I recommend you try...—they are meaningful. 我推荐你尝试……——它们很有意义，例：I recommend you try animal rescue volunteer work—they are meaningful. · Volunteering lets you... and... 志愿服务能让你……并且……，例：Volunteering lets you learn new skills and make new friends. · If you come to..., I’ll join you in... 如果你来……，我会和你一起……，例：If you come to my city, I’ll join you in community volunteer work. 1. 论述志愿服务的重要性（贴合单元内涵） · Volunteering is a bridge of... that... 志愿服务是……的桥梁，能……，例：Volunteering is a bridge of care that connects people from different places. · Volunteers help those in need—like... 志愿者帮助有需要的人——比如……，例：Volunteers help those in need—like providing food for the homeless. · With our love and efforts, we can... 用我们的爱心和努力，我们能……，例：With our love and efforts, we can build a better world. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：What volunteer work did Susan’s mother do?；What did you do in your first volunteer experience?；Why is volunteering meaningful?；What difficulties did you meet when doing volunteer work?；Have you ever helped the elderly or children as a volunteer? · 回答句型：She worked in schools, nursing homes and helped neighbors in America.；I cleaned rooms for the elderly and read newspapers for them.；Because it helps others and passes on love.；I was shy to communicate with strangers at first.；Yes, I once helped children who couldn’t do their homework. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $