Unit 6 When disaster strikes 作文学案- 2025-2026学年外研版英语八年级上册

Unit 6 When disaster strikes 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“When disaster strikes”为话题，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“灾害与防护”主题群，核心聚焦“用英语谈论自然灾害、讲述灾难中的故事、介绍防灾自救方法”，运用过去进行时及灾害相关核心词汇，提升叙事类与说明类写作的逻辑性和实用性。常见写作角度包括：① 描述一次自然灾害经历；② 给笔友分享灾难中的暖心故事；③ 介绍一种自然灾害的防护知识；④ 论述灾难中勇气与互助的意义。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，突出“纪实性”和“指导性”，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “一次难忘的灾害经历”。请用英语写一篇短文，描述一次你经历或听闻的自然灾害，包括灾害发生时的情景、人们的反应及你的感受，词数60-80左右，题目为“An Unforgettable Disaster Experience”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 An Unforgettable Disaster Experience Last summer, a heavy rainstorm hit my city, and it left a deep impression on me. I was doing my homework at home when the wind began to roar. Soon, the rain poured down heavily, and the power went out. My family lit candles and stayed together. Outside, trees were blown down, and some roads were flooded. Neighbors helped each other move important things to higher places. Although the storm was scary, the warmth of mutual help made me feel safe. I learned that unity is powerful in the face of disasters. 【译文】 一次难忘的灾害经历 去年夏天，一场暴雨袭击了我的城市，给我留下了深刻的印象。 我正在家写作业时，大风开始呼啸。很快，大雨倾盆而下，电力也中断了。我们一家人点燃蜡烛，待在一起。屋外，树木被吹倒，一些道路被淹没。邻居们互相帮忙，把重要物品搬到高处。 尽管暴风雨很可怕，但互助的温暖让我感到安全。我明白了，面对灾害时，团结的力量是强大的。 亮点词块 1.heavy rainstorm 暴雨 2.leave a deep impression 留下深刻印象 3.roar 呼啸 4.pour down heavily 倾盆而下 5.power goes out 电力中断 6.blow down 吹倒 7.flooded 被淹没 8.mutual help 互助 9.in the face of disasters 面对灾害 10.unity is powerful 团结的力量是强大的 高分句子 1.I was doing my homework at home when the wind began to roar.（运用过去进行时+when结构，贴合单元语法重点） 2.Neighbors helped each other move important things to higher places.（描述灾难中互助场景，符合单元“灾害中的人间温情”主题） 3.Although the storm was scary, the warmth of mutual help made me feel safe.（让步状语从句总结感受，升华主题，贴合课本“Iron girl”传递的勇气与互助精神） 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友Peter想了解中国应对自然灾害的方法，请你写一封邮件，向他分享相关知识和故事，词数不少于50。 Dear Peter, I’m glad you’re interested in how China deals with natural disasters! We have effective ways and warm stories during difficult times. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Peter, I’m glad you’re interested in how China deals with natural disasters! We have effective ways and warm stories during difficult times. When earthquakes happen, we hide under desks or run to open areas quickly. The government sends warnings via text messages and TV. Last year, a flood hit a village, and volunteers came to help people move to safety. Local people shared food and water, showing great kindness. We also learn disaster safety at school to stay prepared. China always stands together in disasters. If you want to know more, I can share more stories with you! Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的彼得： 很高兴你对中国应对自然灾害的方式感兴趣！我们有有效的方法，在困难时期也有很多暖心故事。 当地震发生时，我们会躲在课桌下或迅速跑到开阔地带。政府通过短信和电视发布预警。去年，一场洪水袭击了一个村庄，志愿者赶来帮助人们转移到安全地带。当地人分享食物和水，展现了极大的善意。我们还在学校学习灾害安全知识，做好准备。 中国在灾害面前始终团结一致。如果你想了解更多，我可以给你分享更多故事！ 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，介绍海啸的防护知识，词数50左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 预警信号 海水异常退去、地震频发 防护措施 远离海岸、向高处转移、听从预警通知 注意事项 不贪恋财物、保持通讯畅通 Tsunamis are dangerous natural disasters, but we can protect ourselves with proper knowledge. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 Tsunamis are dangerous natural disasters, but we can protect ourselves with proper knowledge. If seawater retreats abnormally or earthquakes happen often, it may be a warning. We must stay away from the coast and move to higher places immediately. Follow official warnings and don’t take time to get valuables. Keep your phone charged to stay in touch with others. Remember these tips, and you can increase your chances of survival. 【拓展2译文】 海啸是危险的自然灾害，但掌握正确的知识就能保护自己。 如果海水异常退去或频繁发生地震，这可能是预警信号。我们必须远离海岸，立即向高处转移。听从官方预警，不要花时间拿财物。保持手机电量充足，以便与他人保持联系。 记住这些技巧，就能提高生存几率。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.灾害相关（单元重点） · 自然灾害类型：rainstorm 暴雨；earthquake 地震；tsunami 海啸；volcanic eruption 火山喷发；flood 洪水；hurricane 飓风；wildfire 野火 · 灾害场景：roar 呼啸；pour down 倾盆而下；power outage 停电；blow down 吹倒；flooded 被淹没；collapse 倒塌；ash 火山灰；seawater retreat 海水退去 · 防护与互助：hide under desks 躲在课桌下；move to higher places 向高处转移；follow warnings 听从预警；mutual help 互助；volunteer 志愿者；survival skills 生存技能；stay in touch 保持联系 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 过去进行时结构： · 肯定式：was/were + 动词现在分词（I was studying; They were helping） · 否定式：was/were not + 动词现在分词（He wasn’t sleeping; We weren’t watching） · 疑问式：Was/Were + 主语 + 动词现在分词（Were you working? Was she running?） · 常用句型：主语 + was/were + doing + when + 一般过去时从句（描述过去正在做某事时另一件事发生） 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 感受与评价：scary 可怕的；dangerous 危险的；unforgettable 难忘的；warm 温暖的；powerful 强大的；brave 勇敢的 · 行动描述：run to open areas 跑到开阔地带；share food and water 分享食物和水；move to safety 转移到安全地带；stay prepared 做好准备；increase survival chances 提高生存几率 二、实用句型积累 1.描述灾害发生时的情景（贴合单元核心） · I was + 过去进行时动作 + when the disaster suddenly happened. 我正在……时，灾害突然发生了，例：I was walking home when the earthquake suddenly happened. · While people were + 过去进行时动作, the + 灾害 + began to + 灾害动作. 当人们正在……时，……灾害开始……，例：While people were having dinner, the flood began to rise quickly. · The + 灾害 + was so + 形容词 + that + 结果从句. ……灾害如此……以至于……，例：The rainstorm was so heavy that many roads were blocked. 1. 讲述灾害中的故事（贴合单元主题） · During the disaster, people + 互助动作, showing great + 品质. 灾害中，人们……，展现了极大的……，例：During the earthquake, teachers helped students escape first, showing great responsibility. · A lot of volunteers came to + 帮助动作. They + 具体行动, which made people feel + 感受. 很多志愿者赶来……，他们……，让人们感到……，例：A lot of volunteers came to clear the roads. They worked day and night, which made people feel warm. · After the disaster, people + 恢复动作 together. It taught me that + 感悟. 灾后，人们一起……，这让我明白……，例：After the flood, people rebuilt their homes together. It taught me that unity is strength. 1. 介绍防灾知识（贴合单元内涵） · To protect yourself from + 灾害, you should + 防护动作. 为了保护自己免受……灾害伤害，你应该……，例：To protect yourself from tsunamis, you should move to higher places quickly. · When you notice + 预警信号, remember to + 应对动作 immediately. 当你发现……预警信号时，记得立即……，例：When you notice abnormal seawater retreat, remember to leave the coast immediately. · The most important thing is to + 核心防护动作, and never + 危险动作. 最重要的是……，千万不要……，例：The most important thing is to follow official warnings, and never go back for valuables. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：Have you ever experienced a natural disaster?；What were you doing when it happened?；How did people help each other during the disaster?；What safety tips do you know for earthquakes?；Why is it important to learn disaster knowledge? · 回答句型：Yes, I experienced a heavy rainstorm last year.；I was reading a book when the storm came.；People shared food and helped move things to safety.；We should hide under desks and stay away from windows.；Because it can help us stay safe when disasters happen. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $