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Unit 8 I’ve had this bike for three years. 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“I’ve had this bike for three years.”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活物品与成长记忆”这一主题群。单元核心聚焦“用英语谈论物品拥有时长、分享旧物背后的故事,运用现在完成时(含 for/since 标志词) ,提升叙事类写作的情感表达与逻辑连贯性”,常见写作角度包括:① 描述一件珍藏的旧物及背后的成长故事;② 记录庭院旧货出售(yard sale)的经历与感受;③ 分享捐赠旧物帮助他人的过程;④ 探讨家乡变化中不变的记忆载体。所有内容严格贴合课本词汇与句型,突出“情感性”和“生活化”,可直接用于课堂写作教学与同步训练。
【单元话题】
“我的旧物,我的回忆”。请用英语写一篇短文,介绍一件你珍藏多年的旧物,包括它的来历、你拥有它的时长、背后的故事及你的感受,词数60-80左右,题目为“My Treasured Old Thing”。
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【范文】
My Treasured Old Thing
My treasured old thing is a teddy bear. I’ve had it since I was five years old.
My grandma gave it to me on my fifth birthday. It’s white with big black eyes. When I was little, I slept with it every night. Whenever I felt sad, I would hug it and feel better. I’ve kept it for eight years, and it’s a bit worn out now, but I can’t part with it.
This teddy bear holds many sweet childhood memories. It reminds me of my grandma’s love. I’ll keep it forever.
【译文】
我珍爱的旧物
我珍爱的旧物是一只泰迪熊,从我五岁起我就拥有它了。
它是奶奶在我五岁生日时送给我的,全身雪白,长着大大的黑眼睛。小时候,我每晚都抱着它睡觉。每当我难过时,只要抱住它就会感觉好很多。这只熊我已经保存了八年,现在虽然有些破旧,但我舍不得扔掉它。
这只泰迪熊承载着我许多美好的童年回忆,它让我想起奶奶的爱,我会永远珍藏它。
亮点词块
1.treasured old thing 珍爱的旧物
2.worn out 破旧的
3.part with 放弃;割舍
4.hold sweet memories 承载美好回忆
5.remind sb. of 使某人想起
6.sleep with 抱着……睡觉
7.feel better 感觉好起来
8.on one’s birthday 在某人生日那天
高分句子
1.I’ve had it since I was five years old.(运用现在完成时+since,贴合单元核心语法)
2.Whenever I felt sad, I would hug it and feel better.(描述旧物的意义,情感真挚)
3.This teddy bear holds many sweet childhood memories.(总结旧物价值,升华主题,贴合单元内涵)
【拓展1】
你的班级计划举办一场庭院旧货出售活动,所得款项将捐赠给儿童之家。请你写一则通知,号召同学们参与,词数不少于50。
Notice
Dear classmates,
We’re going to have a yard sale in our classroom this Saturday morning.
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Class 2, Grade 8
October 15th
【拓展1范文】
Notice
Dear classmates,
We’re going to have a yard sale in our classroom this Saturday morning.
We hope you can bring things you no longer use, such as old books, toys, clothes or stationery. You’ve had these things for a long time, but they might be useful to others. All the money we raise will be donated to the Sunshine Home for Children. It’s a good chance to share love and clear out your old things. Please come and join us. Remember to bring your old items at 9 a.m. See you then!
Class 2, Grade 8
October 15th
【拓展1译文】
通知
亲爱的同学们:
本周六上午,我们将在教室举办一场庭院旧货出售活动。
希望大家能带来自己不再使用的物品,比如旧书、玩具、衣物或文具。这些东西你们已经拥有很久了,但对别人可能还有用。活动所得款项将全部捐赠给儿童之家,这是一个分享爱心、清理旧物的好机会。欢迎大家积极参与,请于上午9点携带旧物到场,我们不见不散!
八年级二班
10月15日
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,写一篇短文,描述家乡的变化与不变的记忆,词数50左右,开头已给出。
提示
信息
变化
新学校、宽马路、新商场
不变
村头的老槐树、奶奶家的老房子、邻里情谊
你的感受
家乡更便利了,但温暖的记忆从未改变
My hometown has changed a lot over the years, but some things will never change.
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【拓展2范文】
My hometown has changed a lot over the years, but some things will never change.
We now have a new school, wide roads and a big shopping mall. Life is more convenient than before. However, the old locust tree at the village entrance is still there. My grandma’s old house has stood for over 30 years, and neighbors still help each other. I’ve lived here since I was born, and these unchanged things hold my dearest memories. I love my hometown’s changes and its lasting warmth.
【拓展2译文】
这些年来,我的家乡变化很大,但有些东西永远不会改变。
现在我们有了新学校、宽阔的马路和大型商场,生活比以前便利多了。然而,村头的老槐树依然矗立在那里,奶奶家的老房子已经有30多年历史了,邻里之间也依然互相帮助。我从出生起就住在这儿,这些不变的事物承载着我最珍贵的回忆,我爱家乡的变化,也爱它永恒的温暖。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.旧物与拥有(单元重点)
· 物品类:teddy bear 泰迪熊;bike 自行车;book 书;toy 玩具;clothes 衣物;stationery 文具;old house 老房子;locust tree 槐树
· 拥有与处置:have had 拥有(持续);own 拥有;keep 保存;collect 收集;clear out 清理;give away 捐赠;sell 出售;part with 割舍;no longer use 不再使用
· 时长表达:for three years 三年;since 2015 自从2015年;since I was a child 从我小时候起;over the years 这些年来;for a long time 很长时间
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 现在完成时+for/since(描述持续拥有):
· for + 时间段:例:I’ve had this book for five years.(这本书我已经有五年了。)
· since + 过去时间/从句:例:He has owned the toy since his sixth birthday.(这个玩具他从六岁生日就拥有了。)
· 常用结构:
· It’s been + 时间段 + since + 从句:例:It’s been ten years since we moved here.(我们搬到这儿已经十年了。)
· I haven’t + 动作(过去分词)+ for + 时间段:例:I haven’t played with the doll for three years.(这个娃娃我已经三年没玩了。)
1. 情感与记忆(单元基础)
· 情感类:treasured 珍爱的;sweet 甜蜜的;warm 温暖的;dear 珍贵的;sad 难过的;happy 开心的
· 记忆类:hold memories 承载回忆;remind sb. of 使某人想起;childhood memories 童年回忆;dearest memories 最珍贵的回忆;lasting warmth 永恒的温暖
二、实用句型积累
1.介绍旧物与拥有时长(贴合单元核心)
· My most treasured old thing is + 物品. I’ve had it for / since + 时长/过去时间. 我最珍爱的旧物是……,我已经拥有它……了,例:My most treasured old thing is a notebook. I’ve had it since I entered middle school.
· It was given to me by + 某人 + on + 场合. 它是……在……场合送给我的,例:It was given to me by my best friend on my thirteenth birthday.
· I’ve kept it for + 时长, and it’s still important to me. 这东西我已经保存了……,对我来说依然很重要,例:I’ve kept it for four years, and it’s still important to me.
1. 描述旧物故事与意义(贴合单元主题)
· Whenever I + 情绪/场景, I would + 动作 + with it. 每当我……,我就会用它……,例:Whenever I felt lonely, I would talk to the toy bear with it.
· It holds many sweet memories of + 人/时光. 它承载着许多关于……的美好回忆,例:It holds many sweet memories of my primary school life.
· Although it’s + 状态(如 worn out/old), I can’t part with it. 虽然它……,但我舍不得扔掉它,例:Although it’s a bit broken, I can’t part with it.
1. 表达感受与感悟(贴合单元内涵)
· This old thing reminds me of + 人/道理. 这件旧物让我想起……,例:This old bike reminds me of my father’s love.
· The changes in + 事物 + make life better, but the warm memories never fade. ……的变化让生活更美好,但温暖的回忆从未褪色,例:The changes in my hometown make life better, but the warm memories never fade.
· It’s not just a(n) + 物品, but a symbol of + 情感/回忆. 它不仅仅是……,更是……的象征,例:It’s not just a book, but a symbol of our friendship.
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:What old thing have you had for a long time?;How long have you owned it?;Who gave it to you?;Why do you treasure it?;What changes have you seen in your hometown?
· 回答句型:I’ve had a teddy bear for eight years.;I’ve owned it since I was five.;My grandma gave it to me.;Because it holds my childhood memories.;There are new roads and buildings, but the old tree is still there.
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