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译林版英语七年级上册 Unit 7 Be wise with money 写作专项
写作目标
结合本单元“理性管理金钱”的核心主题,能用some/any、there be句型及相关词汇,介绍自己的压岁钱使用方式,内容包括:压岁钱的来源时间、消费方向、储蓄习惯等,体现“理性用钱”的单元主题。
1. 能正确使用some/any(肯定/否定/疑问句)和there be(单复数/不可数名词),符合本单元语法要求;
2. 能用本单元核心词汇(如lucky money、save、budget等)及短语描述金钱管理;
3. 能以短文形式清晰介绍压岁钱的使用细节,篇幅控制在90-100词,体现“理性用钱”的单元主题。
题目解析
1. 体裁:说明文(压岁钱使用介绍),要求介绍自己的压岁钱管理方式,契合本单元“金钱管理”的写作任务。
2. 人称:以第一人称(I)为主,符合个人金钱管理分享的视角。
3. 时态:核心用一般现在时,描述固定的金钱使用习惯(本单元重点语境),适配七年级学生水平。
4. 核心要求
○ 内容:写清压岁钱的获取时间、消费方向、储蓄习惯,用some/any和there be体现语法点。
○ 字数:90-100词,以简单句为主,适当用连接词(and/so)衔接内容。
典型例题
班级正在开展“理性用钱小达人”分享活动,请以“What I Do with My Lucky Money”为题,写一篇短文,介绍你对压岁钱的管理,内容包括:
1. 你什么时候能拿到压岁钱?
2. 你会用压岁钱买哪些东西?
3. 你会储蓄压岁钱吗?有没有做预算的习惯?
思路点拨
1. 开头引入:点明压岁钱的获取时间,总述对压岁钱的管理态度。
2. 细节描述:分消费和储蓄两部分介绍,运用some/any描述消费内容,用there be补充相关物品,贴合本单元语法点。
3. 结尾总结:说明理性管理金钱的好处,呼应“Be wise with money”的主题。
写作模板(逐段拆解,贴合单元目标)
第一段:引入压岁钱(约20词)
• 写作目的:点明压岁钱的获取时间,总述管理态度。
• 必写要素:获取时间 + 管理态度
• 基础句式:Every year, I get some lucky money at the Spring Festival. I try to be wise with it.
• 示例:Every year, I get some lucky money at the Spring Festival. I try to manage it well.
第二段:描述消费与储蓄(约50词)
• 写作目的:介绍消费方向(用some)和储蓄习惯,加入there be描述相关物品。
• 必写要素:消费内容 + 储蓄方式
• 基础句式:I spend some of it on [物品1,如school things] and [物品2,如storybooks]. There are [物品,如new pens and notebooks] in my bag after I buy them. I save the rest in my piggy bank—there isn’t any waste of money.
• 示例:I spend some of it on school things and storybooks. There are new pens and interesting books in my room after I buy them. I save the rest in my piggy bank—there isn’t any waste of money.
第三段:总结管理习惯(约25词)
• 写作目的:说明预算习惯及管理好处,呼应单元主题。
• 必写要素:预算习惯 + 管理好处
• 基础句式:I make a small budget for my lucky money every year. It helps me have good spending habits.
• 示例:I make a small budget for my lucky money every year. It helps me keep good spending habits and save for things I really need.
范文
英文
What I Do with My Lucky Money
Every year, I get some lucky money from my relatives at the Spring Festival. I always plan it carefully.
I spend some of the money on school things like notebooks and pens—there are new stationery on my desk after I buy them. I also buy some storybooks sometimes. I save the rest in my bank account, so there isn’t any unnecessary spending.
I make a budget for my lucky money every year. It helps me be wise with money and learn to save for important things. I think this is a good habit!
中文翻译
我如何使用我的压岁钱
每年春节,我都会从亲戚那里拿到一些压岁钱,我总是仔细规划它。
我用一部分钱买笔记本、钢笔之类的学习用品——买完后我的书桌就会有新文具。有时我也会买一些故事书。剩下的钱我存在银行账户里,所以不会有不必要的开销。
我每年都会给压岁钱做预算,这帮我理性用钱,还学会为重要的东西储蓄。我觉得这是个好习惯!
素材积累
短语
1. lucky money — 压岁钱
2. be wise with money — 理性用钱
3. spend...on — 把……花在……上
4. piggy bank — 存钱罐
5. make a budget — 做预算
6. good spending habits — 良好的消费习惯
7. save for — 为……储蓄
8. unnecessary spending — 不必要的开销
基础句型
基础句型
仿写句子
I get some lucky money at the Spring Festival.
I get some pocket money from my parents every month.
I spend some of it on school things.
I spend some of it on sports shoes.
There are new pens in my bag.
There is a new book on my desk.
I make a budget for my lucky money.
I make a budget for my pocket money.
好句集锦
1. Being wise with money doesn’t mean not spending—it means spending on the right things.(理性用钱不是不花钱,而是把钱花在对的地方。)
2. Saving even a little money every time helps us prepare for unexpected needs.(每次存一点钱,能帮我们应对意外需求。)
3. A small budget can stop us from buying things we don’t really need.(一份小预算能阻止我们买不需要的东西。)
4. Managing money well is a useful skill for our future life.(管理好金钱是未来生活的一项实用技能。)
学生写作填空练习版
What I Do with My Lucky Money
Every year, I get some lucky money at [时间,如the Spring Festival]. I try to use it wisely.
I spend some of it on [物品1,如snacks] and [物品2,如toys]. There are [物品,如delicious candies and new toys] in my room after I buy them. I save the rest in [储蓄方式,如my piggy bank]—there isn’t any waste.
I [习惯,如always make a budget] for my lucky money. It helps me [好处,如learn to save] and have good habits. I like this way of managing money!
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