读后续写：kindness主题类续写解析 讲义-2026届高三英语一轮复习专项

Kindness主题类读后续写语料与练习 善行义举是中华民族传统美德，也是读后续写常见的故事类型。善行义举类语篇在续写中涉及到话题可能涉及到家庭、学校、工作、生活等方方面面。 描写的部分主要有以下： 1. 遭遇困难的绝望、无助、尴尬、窘迫、苦恼等等 2. 提供帮助的想法、言语、动作等等， 3. 受到帮助的感激、感动、温暖等等， 4. 困难得以解决的开心喜悦等等， 5. 最后主题升华的意识领悟等。 【六个写作步骤】 第一步：提炼六个要素，获取主旨大意 第二步：理清故事脉络，把握情感变化 第三步：分析段落首句，精心设计问题 第四步：设计结尾情节，拔高价值取向 第五步：列出关键词汇，续写连贯句群 第六步：升格低级词句，誊写完善成文 第一步：困难描写（情绪+困难处境） a flush of =a wave of...=a sense of..+ 情绪名词+固定动词+sb +as/when sb do sth “当某人做某事时，一股……情绪涌上心头” 情绪名词 固定动词 happiness/joy/delight 开心 gratitude/appreciation 感激 admiration 钦佩/赞赏 anger/rage/fury 狂怒 sadness/sorrow 悲伤 fear/terror/panic 害怕 guilt/regret/grief/shame 愧疚悔恨 astonishment/shock/surprise 震惊 nervousness/anxiety/stress 不安/焦虑/压力 seized/caught 抓住 took hold of 控制 wash over=flooded over sb=swept over (情绪)突然而深刻地袭来 enveloped 笼罩 overwhelmed(感情或感觉)充溢，难以禁受 welled up 涌出，涌上 trembled/shivered/shook颤抖 (with fear, panic excitement, rage...) 我感到不安: I felt anxious. (换无灵主语): Anxiety seized me. (加介短): A wave of anxiety seized me. (加副词): Instantly, a strong wave of anxiety seized me. (加时间状从): 听到这个坏消息，我立刻感到一阵强烈的焦虑。 Instantly, a strong wave of anxiety seized me as I heard the good news. 绝望无助： be sunk into hopelessness 陷入绝望 in despair 在绝望中 with one’s head hanging down 耸拉着头 尴尬窘迫： flush with embarrassment 尴尬得脸发红 lower one’s head 低下头 feel one’s face burning 脸上滚烫 悲伤难过： in low spirits 情绪低落 with a heavy heart 怀着沉重的心情 a burst of sadness 一阵悲伤 流泪： Tears blur one's eyes. 泪水模糊了眼睛(blurred) One's eyes got misty. __泪眼模糊___ ...be close to tears几乎要哭了 Tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下 adj, sb did sth, 独立主格 她深深地感动了，紧紧抱住那个孩子，泪水模糊了她的双眼。 Deeply touched, She held the child tightly in her arms, tears blurring her eyes. so+adj...that（倒装句） 她非常感动，紧紧地抱着那个孩子，喜悦的泪水夺眶而出。 So touched was she that she hugged the child tightly, ,tears of joy welling up in her eyes. 第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链） 突然有了一个想法： 典型表达：某人想到/明白...; 有了主意 1. It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned on sb that 从句 2. (idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb.=...came/flashed into one's mind=...crowded in one's mind 3. One's mind began to race 提供帮助： do sb a favor 帮某人一个忙 give/lend sb a hand 帮助某人(lent) spare no effort to help不遗余力地帮助 动作链 动作链 = 动作1 + 方式/工具 + 动作2 + 动作3 + ...（伴随情感状态） 情景1：帮助陌生人 Seeing the old man struggling with his heavy groceries, she stepped forward without hesitation(毫不犹豫地走上前).With a warm smile (微笑着), she stretched out her hand (伸出手) and asked, "May I give you a hand?" 情景2：分享与安慰 Noticing her friend looked upset, Lily placed her hand gently on her shoulder (轻轻地把手放在她的肩膀上). Then, she pulled out (从书包里拿出) her favorite chocolate bar and laid it softly (轻轻地放在) her friend's desk. 情景3：慷慨解囊 He saw the homeless man shivering in the cold.Sliding his hand into his pocket (把手伸进口袋), he pulled out (掏出) all the coins he had. squatting down (蹲下身), he tucked the coins into (将钱放进) the man's cup. 第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华） （1）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折 过了一段时间 1. not long after that,...=shortly afterwards, ...=before long, ...=It didn't take long before 从句=It took some time before从句不久, ... 2. for an instant/moment一瞬间 没过多久，丢失的小狗就被找到并与主人团聚了，他们紧紧地拥抱在一起，眼中闪烁着喜悦的泪水。 It didn't take long before the lost puppy was found and reunited with its owner, and they hugged each other tightly, with tears of joy in their eyes. （2）有了结果 1. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句 2. But on second thoughts, ...但是转而一想，... 3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙 令我惊讶的是，是我完全误解了整个情况。 To my surprise, it turned out that I had misunderstood the whole situation. （3）感谢 Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she says she couldn’t thank him enough and everyone involved in for what they did for her.  我非常感激她对我伸出了援手 I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand. （4）感动 拥抱： give sb a hug 拥抱某人 be grateful for 对.....表示感激 express/extend one’s heartfelt gratitude 表达衷心感谢 hold/hug sb tightly in the arms 把某人紧紧抱在怀里 温暖： be moved to tears 感动得流泪 a warm current well up in one’s heart一股暖流涌上心头 melt the ice in my heart 融化了我内心的冰川 开心喜悦： flash/wear a bright smile挂着灿烂的微笑 One’s face light up 满脸喜色（lit） One’s eyes twinkled with pleasure. 眼里闪耀着快乐 1. He was touched that I, a complete stranger, cared so much about him and said he was willing to work. 2. Stunned and moved(惊讶又感动), I stared at the note, feeling a wave of guilt about my previous thought that all people were indifferent. 一瞬间，泪水涌上我的眼眶，我感激得说不出话来。 In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, ,I was touched beyond words /was speechless with gratitude/couldn't utter a word . 动作+情绪 那个男人真诚地握着我的手，眼中充满感激，对我悉心照顾他心爱的狗表达了由衷的感谢。 The man held my hand sincerely , his eyes filled with gratitude , and expressed his heartfelt thanks for my kind care of his beloved dog. （5）升华 be aware of 意识到 be overcome with emotion 心中百感交集 hold the firm belief that ... 坚信..... 1.强调句it was....that It is love that makes the world go round （是爱让世界运转）and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart. 2.from then on + 行动 From then on, I made up my mind to 下定决心pass on “love” to others（传递爱给其他人）. Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand （赠人玫瑰，手有余香）. ” From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness （希望传递善意）that Mexican family offered me. 3.It dawned on sb. that... 我意识到一个小小的善举也足以带来巨大的改变。 It dawned on me that a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference . 4.Only...（倒装句） 直到那时候，我才意识到，正是爱和善意让我们的世界如此温暖美丽。 Only then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful. 5..环境描写： 清晨的阳光洒进来，全家人沐浴在爱和幸福之中。 The early sunlight streaming in, the whole family were bathed in love and happiness. 6.主题句：永远不要低估你的行为的力量，即便一个小小的表示，也可能不仅传播了爱，还对别人的生命产生了积极影响。 Never underestimate the power of your action. With one small gesture, you may not only spread love, but also positively influenced others' lives. 实战演练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jim Fraser would observe a little girl selling flowers beside a street on his way from work every day. She sat by a large green board and a banner that read, “Brighten your day with these flowers, and your help can brighten mine.” Every time Jim crossed that specific street, he noticed that the girl was there. Unfortunately, few paid attention to her and she rarely sold anything. Jim always wanted to help her, and one day he got his chance. One of his office’s clerk was retiring. He wanted to get her something, and he thought a bouquet (花束) would be a great idea. He stopped by the little girl that day, “Hello there,” he said, smiling, “could you please make me a fresh bouquet of roses?” The girl raised her head, shyly, “Thank you for buying flowers from me. Please select the flowers and I will tie them together for you.” He picked up the flowers and handed them to her. The little girl reached for a sheet and a ribbon beside her, and she skillfully made a lovely bouquet and extended to Jim. Jim was blown away by the girl’s abilities. “Wow! That’s lovely. Thank you again for the bouquet. What’s your name, by the way?” “I’m Cassy, and I’m 11 years old,” she said brightly, lowering her head again. “I hope you like the flowers, Please come for more!” “I love them, Cassy. Thank you! I’m Jim. It is nice to meet you!” Jim smiled at her shyness. The next day, Jim was on his way from work. However, he didn’t see Cassy in her usual spot. And she didn’t show up for several days in a row. Jim was afraid that something horrible had happened to her. He asked the shops nearby and people around if they knew anything about Cassy, but regrettably, nothing came of it. Thankfully, after a week on his way from work, Cassy had returned with her flowers! However, she appeared incredibly skinny and pale, as if she hadn’t eaten and washed up in days, if not weeks. 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Jim asked why she hadn’t been here in days. ________________________________________________________________________________ To assist Cassy and her mother, Jim created a GoFundMe page online. ________________________________________________________________________________ 实战演练 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jim Fraser would observe a little girl selling flowers beside a street on his way from work every day. She sat by a large green board and a banner that read, “Brighten your day with these flowers, and your help can brighten mine.” Every time Jim crossed that specific street, he noticed that the girl was there. Unfortunately, few paid attention to her and she rarely sold anything. Jim always wanted to help her, and one day he got his chance. One of his office’s clerk was retiring. He wanted to get her something, and he thought a bouquet (花束) would be a great idea. He stopped by the little girl that day, “Hello there,” he said, smiling, “could you please make me a fresh bouquet of roses?” The girl raised her head, shyly, “Thank you for buying flowers from me. Please select the flowers and I will tie them together for you.” He picked up the flowers and handed them to her. The little girl reached for a sheet and a ribbon beside her, and she skillfully made a lovely bouquet and extended to Jim. Jim was blown away by the girl’s abilities. “Wow! That’s lovely. Thank you again for the bouquet. What’s your name, by the way?” “I’m Cassy, and I’m 11 years old,” she said brightly, lowering her head again. “I hope you like the flowers, Please come for more!” “I love them, Cassy. Thank you! I’m Jim. It is nice to meet you!” Jim smiled at her shyness. The next day, Jim was on his way from work. However, he didn’t see Cassy in her usual spot. And she didn’t show up for several days in a row. Jim was afraid that something horrible had happened to her. He asked the shops nearby and people around if they knew anything about Cassy, but regrettably, nothing came of it. Thankfully, after a week on his way from work, Cassy had returned with her flowers! However, she appeared incredibly skinny and pale, as if she hadn’t eaten and washed up in days, if not weeks. 1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Jim asked why she hadn’t been here in days. ________________________________________________________________________________ To assist Cassy and her mother, Jim created a GoFundMe page online. ________________________________________________________________________________ 班级：_____________ 姓名：_______________ 座位号：______________ “She stole my purse! So much for acts of kindness,” I thought. ______________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was speechless as I handed him his grandma’s purse. ____________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 班级：_____________ 姓名：_______________ 座位号：______________ “She stole my purse! So much for acts of kindness,” I thought. ______________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I was speechless as I handed him his grandma’s purse. ____________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文: Jim asked why she hadn’t been here in days. With sadness, Cassy shared her experience with Jim. Her father passed away when she was a baby and her mother made a living by selling flowers. Whenever Cassy was available, she would join her mother. Unfortunately, her mother fell on the floor and hurt seriously last week, so she had to stop selling flowers to look after her. To make the matters worse, her mother couldn’t afford to receive operation. That’s why she showed up again selling flowers to earn money for her mother’s treatment. Hearing that, Jim considered doing something. To assist Cassy and her mother, Jim created a GoFundMe page online. He emphasized in the description that people could brighten a poor family’s day if they were generous enough to donate. When he awoke the next morning to check on the donations, he couldn’t believe his eyes! The total donations were far more than what the family would require. When Jim arrived at Cassy’s house with the good news, Cassy and her mother burst into tears. They were beyond grateful to Jim and those who offered help. 【详解】 1.段落续写 ①根据第一段首句可知下文可描写小女孩告诉了吉姆自己家里遇到的困境——家庭贫困、父亲去世、母亲生病，吉姆决定做点什么。 ②根据第二段首句可知，下文可描写很多人都慷慨解囊，这些善款解决了他们的问题，小女孩一家都很感动，也非常感激吉姆和那些帮助他们的人。 2. 续写线索：问原因——了解女孩家的困难——吉姆决定帮助——建立GoFundMe——人们慷慨捐款——问题得以解决——小女孩一家感动并感激 2 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $