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2026年1月22日河南南阳高三上学期期末英语写作精解(推荐信+读后续写生态保护)
假设你是国际学校学生李华。学校体育节将至,计划新增“特色团队项目”,现有两个备选方案:A. Traditional Chinese Games(如拔河 Tug of War 等)B. Popular Global Sports(如趣味足球 fun soccer 等),向同学们征集建议,请给活动负责人 Mr. Evans 写一封邮件,。
内容包括:
1. 你推荐的方案;
2. 说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
Dear Mr. Evans,
I really like the idea of adding a new team project to our sport festival. ___________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hu
Dear Mr. Evans,
I really like the idea of adding a new team project to our sport festival. What I’d like to recommend most is the traditional Chinese game Tug of War, for it is both culturally meaningful and great for team building.
Tug of War, requiring all teammates to pull in the same direction, is a sport that bridges cultural gaps and boosts team cohesion. Never have we had a chance to experience such a simple yet powerful game that connects us so closely, which will surely make our festival more memorable.
It is hoped that this game will bring us more fun and stronger bonds. I sincerely hope you will consider my suggestion.
Yours,
Li Hua
语法亮点标注
1. 主语从句:What I’d like to recommend most is the traditional Chinese game Tug of War…
2. 非谓语(现在分词作定语):Tug of War, requiring all teammates to pull in the same direction...
3. 定语从句:a sport that bridges cultural gaps and boosts team cohesion…
4. 倒装结构:Never have we had a chance to experience such a simple yet powerful game...
高分句子默写版
1. 我最想推荐的是中国传统游戏拔河,因为它既有文化内涵,又非常适合团队建设。
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2. 拔河要求所有队员齐心协力朝同一个方向拉,是一项能拉近文化距离、增强团队凝聚力的运动。
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3. 我们从未有机会体验这样一个简单却有力量的、能让我们紧密相连的游戏,这一定会让我们的节日更加难忘。
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4. 希望这个游戏能为我们带来更多乐趣,让彼此的联系更加紧密。
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
读后续写
Kia and I left our jobs and went on a round-the-world trip. The Arctic Circle trail(北极圈步道) had been on my bucket list for 10 years. I loved the outdoors and escaping into a simple routine of food, water and sleep.
I had two weeks to spare, so I booked the trip. Greenland is 80% ice sheet, but the trail was in the ice-free 20% in the summer, when there's 24-hour daylight.
There were no trees, which I found quite strange -- mostly low bushes and brush, and mountains like the Scottish Highlands but higher, different from what I had learnt about Greenland. The trail went through rocky valleys and small rivers. I'd never encountered such pure wilderness.
I’d prepared carefully. I was carrying all my food, maps, medicines, satellite phone and equipment. I knew, because of my travelling, I was part of the problem when it came to the environment, so I tried to leave no waste behind, and follow a plant-based diet. I stayed in locally run campsites, free huts(木屋) and hotels. I even packed my thickest raincoat. Wildfire never even crossed my mind: It wasn't California, after all.
By the seventh day of the holiday, we were ahead of schedule and in a green area between two huge, still lakes that reflected the mountains, cloudless blue sky and bright red huts. I stopped often, taking photos. I was heading for the next overnight hut and thinking about sleeping in an ice hotel at the end of the trail. It was so hot that I had my scarf tied under my cap to keep the sweat from my eyes.
At about 3 pm, I spotted some smoke ahead. Then I met two American hikers coming from that direction. They said a tiny peat fire (泥炭火灾) had broken out because the Arctic was warming two to three times faster than the global average. The smoke got a bit thicker, but didn't think I'd need to change my direction. I carried on.
注意:续写词数应为150左右
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But within minutes the smoke covered us. ______________________________________________
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I later learned that the dry Arctic was perfect for the peat fires.______________________________
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一、主题分析
核心主题是气候变化下北极生态的脆弱性,同时交织着“旅行中的意外危机”与“个人环保意识的觉醒与深化”。
伏笔呼应:前文作者认为“北极不会有野火”(Wildfire never even crossed my mind),与后文突发泥炭火灾形成强烈反差,凸显气候变暖的现实冲击。
情感线索:作者从“享受自然”到“遭遇危机”,最终升华为“对生态保护的深刻反思”。
二、续写思路
Paragraph 1(危机突发与应对)
1. 火势升级:烟雾变浓→视线受阻→温度飙升,呼应前文“天气炎热”的铺垫。
2. 行动反应:与Kia协作,用卫星电话求救,借助雨衣遮挡烟雾,体现“准备充分”的伏笔。
3. 转折求生:找到湖边避难,用水浸湿衣物,增加紧张感与真实感。
Paragraph 2(事后反思与升华)
1. 火灾原因:解释北极干旱与泥炭火灾的关联,紧扣“北极变暖2-3倍于全球平均水平”的原文信息。
2. 环保反思:联系作者前文“零废弃”的环保行为,深化主题,比如回国后分享经历、倡导低碳生活。
3. 情感落点:从“旅行冒险”到“生态责任”,升华个人感悟,符合高考“积极价值观”的导向。
三、高分范文
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But within minutes the smoke covered us. The acrid fumes stung my eyes, and the heat became so intense that I could feel it scorching my cheeks. Kia and I scrambled to pull on our raincoats—once packed for cold, now a shield against smoke—and fumbled for the satellite phone. The trail ahead was invisible, so we retreated to the shore of the nearest lake, dipping our scarves in the icy water to cover our mouths. For an hour, we huddled by the lakeside, watching as the fire crept closer, its orange flames devouring the low bushes that had seemed so harmless hours before. It was a stark reminder that even the Arctic, once a symbol of frozen stillness, was vulnerable.
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I later learned that the dry Arctic was perfect for the peat fires. The region’s warming had dried out the organic soil, turning it into tinder that ignited at the slightest spark. This experience shattered my original belief that the Arctic was immune to climate chaos. When we finally reached the ice hotel at the trail’s end, I spent hours writing about the fire, determined to share my story with friends and family. What began as a dream trip became a wake-up call: my small, eco-friendly choices—leaving no waste, eating plant-based meals—were not enough. I returned home with a new mission: to urge others to act, for the Arctic, and for every corner of our fragile planet.
高分亮点(适配高考评分标准)
1. 语法亮点:非谓语(turning it into tinder)、定语从句(that had seemed so harmless)、倒装(so intense that I could feel it)。
2. 词汇升级:acrid fumes(刺鼻烟雾)、scorch(灼烧)、tinder(易燃物),均为高考高频进阶词汇。
3. 情感连贯:从“恐慌求生”到“反思行动”,情感逻辑清晰,主题升华自然。
4. 伏笔呼应:雨衣、卫星电话等前文装备的使用,紧扣原文细节,增强故事真实性。
续写高分句子默写
一、描写类(侧重场景与感官体验)
1. 刺鼻的烟雾刺痛了我的眼睛,热度变得如此强烈,我能感觉到它灼烧着我的脸颊。
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2. 前方的小径已经看不见了,于是我们退到最近的湖边,把围巾浸在冰冷的水里,然后捂住口鼻。
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3. 这是一个鲜明的警示:即便是曾经象征着冰封寂静的北极,也变得脆弱不堪。
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二、感悟类(侧重思想与行动转变)
1. 这段经历打破了我原本的观念——我曾以为北极不会受到气候混乱的影响。
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2. 我带着新的使命回到了家乡:呼吁所有人行动起来,为了北极,也为了我们这颗脆弱星球的每一个角落。
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续写默写答案
一、描写类(侧重场景与感官体验)
1. The acrid fumes stung my eyes, and the heat became so intense that I could feel it scorching my cheeks.
2. The trail ahead was invisible, so we retreated to the shore of the nearest lake, dipping our scarves in the icy water to cover our mouths.
3. It was a stark reminder that even the Arctic, once a symbol of frozen stillness, was vulnerable.
二、感悟类(侧重思想与行动转变)
1. This experience shattered my original belief that the Arctic was immune to climate chaos.
2. I returned home with a new mission: to urge others to act, for the Arctic, and for every corner of our fragile planet.
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