内容正文:
冀教英语七下Unit1作文:Introduce a place to your friend
旅行计划写作专项讲练
一、单元核心主题:介绍旅行·邀请同行
本单元写作围绕“向朋友介绍旅行计划、邀请同行”展开,核心目标是用一般现在时描述地点特点,用一般将来时规划行程,清晰表达“时间、地点、交通、活动”等信息,符合书信体的交际语气。
二、高频词汇梳理(写作必备)
分类
词汇/短语
时间
this weekend, the coming holiday, summer holiday, in two days
地点
the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, Terra Cotta Warriors, ancient city
出行方式
by bus/train/plane, take a taxi, ride a bike
具体活动
take photos, visit places of interest, enjoy local dishes, learn about history
三、经典句式积累(高分套用)
1. 开篇邀请/点题
· I want to invite you to visit...with me this...(我想邀请你这……和我一起去……)
· The summer holiday is coming. I will have a...trip to...with...(暑假要来了,我会和……去……进行一次……旅行)
2. 地点介绍
· ...is very famous in China. It's...and has a long history.(……在中国很有名,它……且历史悠久)
3. 行程安排
· We plan to take...to get there.(我们计划乘……去那里)
· At the trip's start, we will...(旅行开始时,我们会……)
· And then, we will...(之后,我们会……)
· Next, we will...(接下来,我们会……)
4. 结尾期望
· I'm sure we will have a great time!(我确定我们会玩得很开心!)
· I'm looking forward to your reply.(期待你的回复)
四、教材佳句仿写(巩固训练)
教材原句
仿写句子
I'm looking forward to visiting the Mogao Caves.
I'm looking forward to climbing the Great Wall with you.
We will learn about the history and culture along the way.
We will learn about the old stories of the Palace Museum.
五、写作典例+解析(邀请朋友游长城)
写作任务
给朋友Tom写邮件,邀请他周末一起游长城,介绍行程(80-100词)。
佳作展示
Dear Tom,
How are you these days? I want to invite you to visit the Great Wall with me this Saturday.
The Great Wall is very famous in China. It's long and has a long history, so many people from different places come to visit it every year. We plan to take a bus to get there—my mom will help us prepare bread, fruits and water for the trip. At the trip's start, we will climb the wall and take photos of the beautiful mountain views. And then, we can walk and chat happily along the way. Next, we will rest and share snacks at the top.
I'm sure we will have an interesting time! Do you want to come with me? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
亮点解析
1. 体裁契合:书信体语气亲切,符合“向朋友介绍”的主题;
2. 时态准确:用一般现在时介绍长城特点,一般将来时规划行程;
3. 细节充实:增加“prepare snacks”“chat happily”等内容,让行程更生动。
六、实战演练(西安两日游·分享给朋友)
写作任务
给朋友Lily写邮件,分享你和家人的西安两日游计划(80-100词)。
参考范文
Dear Lily,
The summer holiday is coming, and I will have a two-day trip to Xi'an with my family. I really wish you could join us!
Xi'an is an ancient city with a long history. We plan to take a train there. At the trip's start, we will walk along the old City Wall and take photos of the city. And then, we will enjoy the famous biangbiang noodles for lunch. Next, we will visit the amazing Terra Cotta Warriors and learn about the Qin Dynasty. On the second day, we will go to the Drum Tower to watch traditional shows before coming back.
I'm sure it will be a great trip! What about your holiday plans?
Yours,
Li Hua
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