2026届高考英语读后续写五大主题语料积累课件

（一）个人成长类的读后续写语篇的主题语境一般为“人与自我”。该主题语境下包括两大主题群：生活与学习、做人与做事。因此，此话题下的读后续写语篇的场景设定一般是学校、家庭及工作场所。续写结尾一般应指向个人成长的内容，如：生活方式变得更健康、生活态度变得更积极、品行得到提升、人格得到升华以及能更好地规划接下来的学习、生活及职业道路。 近几年高考中考查过此类故事的有：2023年新课标卷讲了母语非英语的“我”参加英语写作比赛(续写重点：比赛后的获奖情况以及对老师感恩的细节描述)；2022年新课标卷讲了大卫因身体原因不想参加跑步比赛(续写重点：在作者的开导下决定完成比赛的心理斗争以及比赛过程中如何克服困难、凭借坚强的毅力完成比赛)。 考生设计此类故事的续写情节时，要注意对主人公动作行为及心理变化的细节刻画。挑战自我型故事模型通常为： [高分句式] 1.成长前的苦恼(不自信、恐惧) 紧张 My heart beat wildly and my legs trembled. 我的心脏狂跳，双腿颤抖。 My heart beat so violently that I felt on pins and needles.心跳如此剧烈，我感到如坐针毡。 I was about to respond when I felt my tongue tied and palms sweating.我正要回答时，感到舌头被绑住了，手心开始出汗。 困惑 His sudden change in mood completely confused me.他的情绪突然变化完全把我弄糊涂了。 When I stood on the stage in front of the large audience，my mind went blank.我站在舞台上面对大批观众时，我的头脑一片空白。 My heart skipped a beat and disbelief washed over me.我的心一颤，充满了怀疑。 忧虑 Worried about the journey，I was unsettled for the first few days. 由于担心这次旅行，头几天我心神不宁。 I was so nervous about the English test that I lay awake half the night，worrying.我对英语考试感到如此紧张，以至于大半夜都睡不着觉，心神不宁。 On hearing the bad news，she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help crying bitterly.一听到这个坏消息，她被一股悲伤之情控制，忍不住哭泣。 孤独 A wave of loneliness washed over me. 一阵孤独感席卷了我的全身。 Cold with no hope for warmth，I felt like falling into an ice hole.我感到又冷又无取暖的希望，感觉就像掉进冰窟窿里一样。 绝望 He gazed at the confusion around him and was overwhelmed by a feeling of despair. 他凝视着周围一片混乱，感到一阵绝望。 Desperate and helpless，she knelt down，with tears of regret streaming down her cheeks.绝望而无助的她跪了下来，悔恨的泪水顺着面颊流了下来。 疲惫 Exhausted，I slid into bed and fell fast asleep. 我精疲力竭地躺在床上，很快就睡着了。 She felt exhausted and sat by the stream resting her aching feet.她感到精疲力竭，于是坐在溪边，让她疼痛的双脚休息一下。 羞愧 So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face. 她感到非常羞愧，甚至能感觉到满脸通红。 She felt so ashamed of her foolish behavior that she could feel her face burning.她为自己的愚蠢行为感到非常羞愧，以至于感到脸红了。 2.成长中(积极、乐观、自信) 惊讶 Scared and shocked，she couldn’t say a word. 她既害怕又震惊，一句话也说不出来。 Raising her eyebrows in surprise，Mrs Rossi froze，as if rooted to the spot.罗西太太惊讶地扬起眉毛，僵住了，仿佛在原地扎了根一样一动不动。 反思 I reflected on my initial doubts and hesitations.我反思了自己最初的疑虑和犹豫不决。 “That’s not the right way.Patience，Will，Persistence，” a voice echoed in my ears after the boys left. “这不是正确的方式。耐心， 意志，坚持，”男孩们离开后，一个声音在我耳边回响。 希望 A spark of hope kindled in their hearts. 他们心中燃起了希望的火花。 Jayce looked up to him，his eyes sparkling with hope and determination. 杰茜抬头看着他，眼睛里闪烁着希望和决心。 喜悦 A bright smile spread across her face. 她脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。 He was in high spirits，and felt like being on top of the world. 他情绪高涨，感觉自己好像站在了世界之巅。 She laughed，her eyes twinkling with excitement. 她笑了起来，她的眼睛因兴奋而闪闪发光。 感动 With tears streaming down her face，she thanked him again and again.她泪流满面，再三感谢他。 I was deeply moved by what he had done，tears rolling down without control.我被他的所作所为深深打动了，泪水情不自禁地夺眶而出。 Tears dropping from his eyes，he ran to Mum’s warm hug，and said gently “Mum，thank you.” 他热泪盈眶，跑向妈妈温暖的怀抱，温柔地说：“妈妈，谢谢你。” 3.成长后的升华(感激＋感悟＋升华) 感激 His face is glowing with excitement. 他的脸因激动而容光焕发。 I looked at her，tears of love and gratitude welling up in my eyes.我看着她，眼里涌起爱与感激的泪水。 “Thank you.” I replied，with a mixture of gratitude and excitement. “谢谢你。”我带着感激和兴奋的心情回答道。 A shiver of excitement passed through her stomach when she heard the news. 听到这个消息，她激动得胃里直颤抖。 感悟 It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of the gift—patience.这是我第一次真正体会到这份礼物的意义——耐心。 It dawned on Adam that one should stick to his dream no matter what happens.亚当突然明白无论发生什么事，都要坚持自己的梦想。 I was taught that we should lend hand to those in need without hesitation.我被教育我们应该毫不犹豫地去帮助那些有需要的人。 I learned a lesson from this experience that by overcoming fears and self-doubts，we can make a difference.我从这次经历中学到一个教训：通过克服恐惧和自我怀疑，我们可以有所作为。 升华 读后续写常用的结尾升华句型 句型一：It’s...that...(强调句) 句型二：from then on＋行动 句型三：It dawns on sb that... 句型四：Only...(倒装句) It dawns on me that as long as I take the first step and make continuous efforts，I will eventually overcome all difficulties.我明白了，只要我迈出第一步，不断努力，我最终会克服一切困难。 Only when Jenny returned the watch to Lee did she realize it was her hard work and bravery that gave her confidence and brought her success. 当珍妮把手表还给李时，她才意识到是她的努力和勇敢给了她信心，给她带来了成功。 Only then did I realize that it was bravery and determination that could conquer all the difficulties.Hard work paid off eventually.那时我才明白，勇敢和决心可以战胜一切困难。努力工作最终得到了回报。 It was my teacher who encouraged me to realize my potential and thus changed my trajectory of life. 是我的老师鼓励我认识到自己的潜力，从而改变了我的人生轨迹。 It was at that moment that I realized that everything was possible if you put your hear into it and make efforts constantly.就在那一刻，我意识到，只要你用心去做，不断努力，一切皆有可能。 From then on，my teacher’s encouraging words，just like a lighthouse in the mist，would always be lighting in the sky of my life.从此，老师鼓励我的话语，就像薄雾中的灯塔，永远照亮着我生命的天空。 From then on，not only did I have a good command of writing，but I also knew the truth—fear never builds the future，but hope does.从那时起，我不仅熟练掌握了写作技能，而且我也知道了一个真理：恐惧永远不会铸就未来，但希望可以。 （二）家庭生活类的读后续写语篇的主题语境一般为“人与自我”。该主题一般围绕主人公与家人之间发生的日常生活事件展开，通常可分为两大类： 第一类是相亲相爱的锦上添花 常见话题有：纪念重要日子(如举办惊喜生日派对、送生日礼物、母亲节、父亲节等)、父母教孩子学习新技能或孩子为长辈解决困难。这一类整体基调是快乐的、积极的、充满爱的。最后加上收获、开心、感恩等。 第二类是解决小误会/小矛盾的握手言和 此类故事模型通常为： 第一步：冲突构造(误会、犯错等) 只有冲突才能体会亲情的弥足珍贵。冲突原因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合(代沟)、误会等。 第二步：冲突化解(解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等) 第三步：亲情升华(诚实、珍惜等) 该主题下的语篇蕴含浓厚的育人价值，即培养学生的家庭责任感，引导中学生思考与亲人之间的关系，进而领悟到要珍惜平淡、温暖的亲情，意识到家庭和睦、家人间的关爱、尊重和有效沟通非常重要。此类语篇的结尾宜在以上方面进行主题升华。 [高分句式] 1.冲突构造(误会、犯错等) 生气 He folded his fist angrily，but his younger brother waved his hands excitedly. 他生气地握紧拳头，但是弟弟却激动地挥着手。 Jackson kept saying something，but so angry was Carter that he couldn’t even hear a word. 杰克逊不停地说着什么，但卡特太生气了，他一个字也听不进去。 后悔 Filled with guilt，I rushed out to apologize to Tom.我满怀内疚，冲出去向汤姆道歉。 I deeply regret not being more understanding and considerate of your feelings. 我很后悔没有更多地理解和体谅你的感受。 内疚 Thinking about what I had done to him，regret and guilt overwhelmed me like endless tides. 一想到我对他所做的一切，遗憾和内疚就像无休止的潮水一样向我涌来。 Whenever I thought of Henry’s wet book，my face turned red. 每当我想到亨利湿了的书，我的脸都会通红。 烦恼 Watching Shirley’s smile fading away，Peter frowned. 看着雪莉的微笑渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。 I was seized by a sense of being disturbed. 我感到被烦扰了。 伤心 He shook his head sadly，tears rolling down his cheeks.他难过地摇摇头，潸然泪下。 Amanda felt as gray as the sky outside when she looked across the table at her three-year-old sister. 当阿曼达看着桌子对面三岁的妹妹时，她感觉她的心情像外面的天空一样灰暗。 2.冲突化解(解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等) 道歉 “I’m so sorry，” he said，gently petting Jackson’s head. “对不起，”他说道，轻轻地抚摸着杰克逊的头。 He put down his hand，glanced cautiously at Carter and lowered his head.他放下手，小心翼翼地看了卡特一眼，然后低下了头。 原谅 So ashamed did she feel that she was close to tears/she was on the verge of tears.她羞愧到快哭了。 His mother silenced him by gently putting her finger on his lips，gave a soft kiss on his forehead and walked out of the study. 他妈妈把手指放在他嘴唇边让他停止说话，在他额头上吻了一下，然后走出了书房。 开心 “I want to surprise you！” he pointed at a neatly wrapped box with his eyes gleaming. “我想给你一个惊喜！”他指向一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。 Seeing his family sitting together and staying together harmoniously，Carter felt a surge of happiness.看到他的家人围坐着，和谐地待在一起，卡特感觉幸福满满。 Cheerful singing floating in the room，the two sisters immersed themselves in the beauty of the music. 欢快的歌声飘荡在房间里，两姐妹沉浸在音乐的美妙中。 感激 But for Henry’s help，I wouldn’t have finished my performance smoothly.如果没有亨利的帮助，我就不会顺利地完成我的演出了。 Tears of joy welled up in their eyes as the brother and sister hugged tightly together.兄妹俩紧紧拥抱在一起时，他们的眼里涌出喜悦的泪水。 3.亲情升华(诚实、珍惜等) From then on，my father’s words have always sounded in my ears from time to time，guiding the way of my life.从那时起，我父亲的话时不时在我耳边响起，指引着我生活的方向。 It dawned on me that the precious lesson taught by my Dad would definitely guide the way of my future.我突然想到，我父亲教我的宝贵的一课肯定会指引我未来的道路。 It was Henry’s kindness that made me feel the warmth from our family.I will treasure it with all my heart.正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。 Only at that moment did I realize why my father let me have the money—it was his expectation for my future，his encouragement and quiet love.And that was something I might never surpass. 那一刻，我才明白父亲为什么要给我这笔钱——那是他对我未来的期待，是他的鼓励和默默的爱。那是我可能永远无法超越的。 A surge of happiness and warmth running through her，Mom kissed the two sisters gently.一股幸福与温暖流遍全身，妈妈轻轻地亲了两姐妹。 The early morning sunlight streaming in，the whole family was bathed in happiness and love. 清晨的阳光照进来，全家人沉浸在幸福和爱中。 The warm golden sunlight flooded in through the window and warmed us up. 温暖的金色阳光透过窗户照进来温暖了我们。 （三）助人为乐是中华民族的传统美德，也是读后续写常见的故事类型。由于这类语篇非常适合给学生传达积极向上的正能量，因此颇受出题者的偏爱。 2020年的新课标卷读后续写就是这种类型：梅瑞狄斯太太喜欢帮助别人。一天，她去看望一个贫穷家庭的时候，发现这个家里有一个小男孩，他想挣点钱帮助自己的家庭，但不知道怎么做。梅瑞狄斯太太将这个情况告诉自己的孩子们，孩子们帮小男孩想到了一个好主意——自制爆米花，然后利用放学时间去卖。梅瑞狄斯一家乐于助人，而伯纳德一家人恰好需要帮助，双方最终都得偿所愿，情感自然是激动、感激相互交织。 助人为乐类语篇在续写中可能涉及家庭、学校、工作、生活等方方面面，续写的部分主要有：遭遇困难的绝望、无助、尴尬、窘迫、苦恼等；提供帮助的想法、言语、动作等；受到帮助的感激、感动、温暖等；困难得以解决的开心喜悦等；以及最后主题升华的意识领悟等。 此类文章的写作一般分三步： 第一步：困难描写——消极情绪＋困难处境 情感表现：焦虑、紧张、恐惧、绝望、难过…… 肢体动作：心跳加速、手心出汗、双腿发抖…… 第二步：助人过程呈现(想到办法＋动作链) 助他型：发现困境→克服困难→提供帮助 他助型：遇到困境→寻求帮助→给予施救 第三步：皆大欢喜结局(感激＋感动＋升华) 问题解决：欣慰、开心、拥抱、感谢…… 主旨升华：难忘记忆；赠人玫瑰，传递快乐 [高分句式] 1.困难描写 His heart beat so violently that he felt like having butterflies in his stomach. 他的心跳如此剧烈，他感到紧张不安。 Lost in the endless forest，she trembled with fright and helplessness.迷失在一望无际的森林里，她因害怕和无助而发抖。 Fear flooded over her，making her shake all over. 恐惧向她袭来，她吓得浑身发抖。 At the sight of the wolf，I froze with terror，too scared to move an inch. 一看到那只狼，我吓呆了，不敢动弹。 Desperate and helpless，she knelt down，not knowing what to do next. 绝望而无助的她跪了下来，不知道接下来做什么。 2.解决困难后 So grateful to him was the lady that she couldn’t thank him too much. 这位女士非常感激他，她怎么感谢他都不为过。 The driver held my hands tightly，saying in an excited voice，“Thank you.Without your help，I would have been trapped in this abandoned area.” 司机紧紧地握着我的手，激动地说：“谢谢你。没有你的帮助，我就会被困在这个废弃的地方。” She felt her heart racing and her blood rushing. 她感到心跳加速，热血沸腾。 Seeing everything return to normal，he sighed with relief.看到一切恢复正常，他松了一口气。 3.结尾升华句 It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.正是爱让世界转动，伯纳德幼小的心灵深处感受到了这一点。 From then on，I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others.Just as a saying goes，“Roses given，fragrance in hand.”从那以后，我下定决心向别人传递“爱”。俗话说：“玫瑰予人，手留余香。” It dawned on me that a simple act could make the world so much better.我恍然大悟，一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好。 Not until then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful. 直到那时候，我才意识到，正是爱和善意让我们的世界如此温暖美丽。 Not only did he keep in mind the help of Meredith’s family，but he also did whatever he could to help those in need.他不仅把梅瑞狄斯一家的帮助记在心里了，而且他也尽他所能去帮助其他有需要的人。 With grateful tears hanging in her eyes，she kept expressing her gratitude：“Thank you so much！” 她含着感激的泪水，不停地表达感激之情：“太感谢你了！” （四）遇险脱困是读后续写中非常重要的一类故事，它并不只出现在“人与自然”主题语境中，在“人与社会”主题语境下，也会有火灾、洪水、溺水、迷路、交通事故、突发疾病等紧急情况。从最初当事人遇险的惊慌害怕，绝望无助，到救助者想办法救援，再到最后当事人获救的宽慰和感激，涉及一系列的表达。 在往年高考真题中，就曾经考过多次：2016年浙江卷：夫妻吵架，森林迷路；2017年浙江卷：骑车旅行，中途遇狼；2018年浙江卷：农场度假，骑马迷路；2020年浙江卷：给北极熊拍照时遇险。 “遇险类”读后续写解题技巧： 1.总的原则：最终一定脱险。 2.三个鲜明的阶段： 第一阶段：遭遇险境； 第二阶段：出现转机； 第三阶段：脱离危险。 [高分句式] 一、雪山脱险类 1.Exhausted as we were，we didn’t stop.Gritting our teeth，we kept digging the trench. 尽管我们筋疲力尽，但是我们没有停下来，我们咬紧牙关继续挖沟槽。 2.Inch by inch，we dug the snow out.After what seemed a century，we made it. 我们一点一点地把雪挖出来，在经历了似乎一个世纪之后(夸张手法)，我们终于成功了。 二、冰上救援类 He pushed the branch toward me.I grabbed immediately and was dragged out of the icy water by Harry.What a narrow escape! 他把树枝推向我。我立刻抓住它，被哈利从冰冷的水中拖了出来。真是死里逃生！ 三、困洞营救类 1.No sooner had we arrived where the child was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings.Then he inched toward the hole and stretched out to seize the child’s hands，pulling him out without reserve.(动作链) 我们一到孩子被困的地方，那个男人就开始扫视周围的环境，然后慢慢向洞口走去，伸手抓住孩子的手，把他完全拉了出来。 2.Slowly and cautiously，moving forward，we held our hands tightly in order not to be seperated. 慢慢且小心翼翼地往前走，我们紧紧地握着手，不让彼此分开。 四、动物描写类 1.It exposed its sharp teeth，glaring at us as it ran forward.它露出锋利的牙齿，向前跑时怒视着我们。 2.It seemed that his mouth was full of blood，his eyes red with anger and the mouth widely open.他的嘴里似乎满是血，眼睛因愤怒而发红，嘴巴张得很大。 五、自救他救类 1.I shouted for help at the top of my voice，but in vain. 我声嘶力竭地喊叫求助，但都是徒劳。 2.Eyes fixed on the beast，he pulled out the sausages in his backpack，aimed at the furry giant and threw them straight to it，hoping the flavor would attract it.他目不转睛地盯着那只野兽，掏出背包里的香肠，对准这个毛茸茸的庞然大物，直接扔给它，希望香味能够吸引它的注意力。 3.I picked my courage and tried to frighten him away with the pepper spray. 我鼓起勇气，试图用胡椒喷雾把他吓跑。 4.I took out a metal bar from the car at once and started a fight with the wolf. 我立刻从车里拿出一根金属棒，开始与狼搏斗。 5.The wolf jumped up，and rushed towards one of them，but was beaten back.Seeing that he couldn’t win，the wolf ran away down the hill. 狼跳了起来，冲向其中一只，但被击退了。狼看到自己赢不了，就跑下山去了。 6.Terrified by the noises of the helicopter and the shot，the bear was startled to leap into the bush and galloped toward the forest like an arrow. 这只熊被直升机的噪声和枪声吓了一跳，吓得跳进了灌木丛，像箭一样冲向森林。 六、情感描写类 1.Seeing this，she felt terror welling up in her heart and surging through her.当她看到这一幕时，她感到恐惧涌上心头并且贯穿全身。 2.When she saw the beast，so terrified was she that her throat tightened and her knees weakened. 当她看到这只野兽的时候，她是如此害怕以至于喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。 3.Extremely frightened，I found my body was trembling and my palms were sweating.非常害怕，我发现我的身体正在发抖，手心正在冒汗。 4.To my delight，we managed to dig out the trench and took these horses down the mountain with the help of others.令我欣喜的是，在别人的帮助下，我们成功挖好了沟槽，把这些马带到山下。 5.I breathed a sigh of relief，throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.(动作双连链)我如释重负地松了口气，伸出双臂紧紧地抱住了他。 6.Smiling in relief，I felt a rush of gratitude welling up in my heart. 我如释重负地笑了笑，心里涌起一阵感恩之情。 7.With tears filling his eyes，Richard expressed his gratitude in a weak voice.理查德眼里充满泪水，用微弱的声音表达了他的感激之情。 8.With tears of appreciation rolling down his cheeks，Peter said thankfully，“You have saved me today.I couldn’t thank you enough.” 感激的泪水顺着脸颊流下，彼得感激地说：“今天你救了我，我对你感激不尽。” [遇险脱困主题升华] 1.What a narrow escape! It turns out that there is always a way out of any difficult situations as long as we stay calm.真是九死一生啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，任何困境都有出路。 2.Only then did I realize that actions can cure fear and bravery can conquer difficulties.直到那时，我才意识到行动可以治愈恐惧，勇敢可以战胜困难。 3.Never should we give up our hope whatever setbacks we are faced with. 无论遇到什么挫折我们绝不该放弃希望。 4.This painful adventure teaches me not to despair even in the darkest hour，because after every night there is a day.这次痛苦的冒险教会了我即使在最黑暗的时刻也不要绝望，因为黑夜之后就是黎明。 5.“Be patient! The rescue team is on the way.” these words brought a ray of hope to the seemingly hopeless situation. “耐心点！救援队已经在路上了。”这句话给看似绝望的处境带来了一线希望。 （五）在动物类的读后续写语篇中，由于动物类型不同，与人类发生的故事也有所不同。分析近几年的一些高考真题和模拟题发现，人类与可爱动物(包括小狗、小鸟、羊等)发生的故事往往有救助类、温情类、成长类；与危险动物(包括狼、熊、蛇等)发生的故事大多属于遇险类。 [主题词汇] 动物外貌描写 pup/puppy小狗，幼崽，幼畜 muzzle(狗、马等动物的)口鼻 fur/feather/paw n.皮毛/羽毛/爪子 two big round eyes两只圆溜溜的大眼睛 little sparkling/twinkling eyes亮晶晶的小眼睛 a pair of large watery eyes一双水汪汪的大眼睛 beady/sparkling/twinkling eyes小圆珠般亮晶晶的/亮晶晶的/闪闪发亮的眼睛 a nose like a small black gem一个黑宝石般的鼻子 long/muscular/skinny/spindly legs长的/肌肉发达的/皮包骨的/细长的腿 fur is as white as snow皮毛像雪一样洁白 a long little tail一条长长的小尾巴 be coated with brown curly hair披着深棕色卷毛 动物动作描写 roar v./n.(狼、熊、大象等)咆哮，吼叫 howl v./n.(狗、狼等)长嚎，嗥叫 growl v./n.(狗、狼等)低声吼叫 smell/sniff v.闻/嗅 lick/bite v.舔/咬 scratch/rub v.抓挠/摩擦 leap跳跃 whimper v.(狗、猫痛苦地)呜咽 bark madly at sb朝某人疯狂地吠叫 wag its tail merrily/gently开心地/轻轻地摇尾巴 bounce up and down上下弹跳 flap the wings wildly疯狂地拍翅膀 put the ears up把耳朵竖起来 shake the whole body抖动全身 rub their necks and backs with their paws用爪子摩擦它们的脖子和背部 raise its whole body on its hind legs用后腿支起全身 1.I was filled with a sense of satisfaction for knowing I had done just the right thing.我的内心充满了满足感，因为我知道自己做了正确的事。 2.It was on that day that I was aware of the value of responsibility. 正是在那一天，我意识到了责任感的价值。 3.Knowing that they could keep the lovely creature，they gathered around and stroked it gently，their little hearts filled with joy. 得知他们可以拥有那个可爱的小动物，他们环抱在一起，轻轻地抚摸着它，内心充满了喜悦。 [高分句式] 4.It was really an unforgettable experience and luckily we didn’t get hurt and escaped successfully. 这真是一次难忘的经历。幸运的是，我们没有受伤，而且成功地脱险了。 5.Sometimes a little kindness can make our world more glorious and harmonious.有时候，一次小小的善举能让我们的世界变得更加美好与和谐。 $