Module 4 Home alone 作文学案 2025-2026学年外研版（2012）九年级英语上册

Module 4 Home alone 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Home alone”为话题，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“生活技能与个人体验”主题群，核心聚焦“用英语描述独自在家的经历、能力与感受，运用让步状语从句（although）和结果状语从句（so…that） 及单元核心词汇”，提升叙事类写作的逻辑连贯性与情感真实性。常见写作角度包括：① 分享一次独自在家的难忘经历；② 介绍自己独自生活的能力与不足；③ 给父母写留言条说明独自在家的安排；④ 制定独居安全与生活规划。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，突出“生活化”和“实用性”，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “我的独自在家经历”。请用英语写一篇短文，描述一次你独自在家的经历，包括准备、发生的事情及你的感受，词数60-80左右，题目为“My Experience of Being Home Alone”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 My Experience of Being Home Alone Last month, my parents went on business, so I stayed home alone for two days. I prepared simple meals like eggs and noodles, and kept the house tidy. Although I was a bit nervous at night, I locked the door and turned on the night light. My alarm clock rang so loudly that I woke up on time the next morning. I even finished my homework before watching TV. This experience taught me to look after myself. I felt proud and more independent. 【译文】 我的独自在家经历 上个月，父母出差了，所以我独自在家待了两天。 我做了鸡蛋、面条这类简单的饭菜，还保持了屋子整洁。虽然晚上有点紧张，但我锁好了门，打开了夜灯。我的闹钟响得特别大声，第二天早上我准时醒了过来。我甚至在看电视前就完成了作业。 这次经历教会我照顾自己，我感到很自豪，也变得更独立了。 亮点词块 1.go on business 出差 2.stay home alone 独自在家 3.prepare simple meals 做简单的饭菜 4.keep the house tidy 保持屋子整洁 5.turn on the night light 打开夜灯 6.wake up on time 准时醒来 7.look after oneself 照顾自己 8.feel proud 感到自豪 9.more independent 更独立 高分句子 1.Although I was a bit nervous at night, I locked the door and turned on the night light.（运用让步状语从句，贴合单元核心语法） 2.My alarm clock rang so loudly that I woke up on time the next morning.（用so…that结构描述结果，符合单元表达习惯） 3.This experience taught me to look after myself.（总结经历收获，升华主题） 【拓展1】 你的父母要外出半天，你需独自在家。请给他们写一张留言条，说明你在家的安排，词数不少于50。 Dear Mum and Dad, I know you have to go out this afternoon. Don’t worry about me—I can look after myself well. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Mum and Dad, I know you have to go out this afternoon. Don’t worry about me—I can look after myself well. First, I’ll finish my homework carefully after lunch. Then I’ll tidy up my bedroom and wash the dishes. I won’t watch too much TV, but I’ll read a book for a while. Although I can’t cook complex meals, I’ll make some sandwiches if I’m hungry. I’ll lock the door when I go to the supermarket to buy some milk. I’ll call you as soon as you need. See you this evening! Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的爸爸妈妈： 我知道你们今天下午要外出。别担心我——我能把自己照顾得很好。 午饭后我会认真完成作业，然后整理卧室、洗碗。我不会看太久电视，但会读一会儿书。虽然我不会做复杂的饭菜，但如果饿了，我会做些三明治。去超市买牛奶时，我会锁好门。 你们需要的话，我会马上给你们打电话。晚上见！ 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，介绍你独自在家的能力与需要改进的地方，词数50左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 擅长的事 按时起床、整理房间、做简单饭菜、完成作业 需改进的事 不敢独自晚上出门、偶尔忘记关电器 感受 独自在家有挑战但能锻炼能力 Being home alone is a great chance to practice life skills. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 Being home alone is a great chance to practice life skills. I can wake up on time and tidy my room every day. I can also cook simple meals like fried rice. Although I finish my homework on time, I dare not go out alone at night. Sometimes I forget to turn off the lights, which is not safe. It’s not always easy, but being home alone makes me more capable. 【拓展2译文】 独自在家是锻炼生活技能的好机会。 我能每天按时起床、整理房间，还会做蛋炒饭这类简单的饭菜。虽然我能按时完成作业，但我不敢晚上独自出门。有时我会忘记关灯，这并不安全。独自在家并不总是容易的，但它让我变得更能干了。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.生活技能（单元重点） · 日常事务：tidy up 整理；wash the dishes 洗碗；cook simple meals 做简单饭菜；wake up on time 准时起床；lock the door 锁门；turn off the lights 关灯；finish homework 完成作业 · 能力表达：look after oneself 照顾自己；prepare meals 准备饭菜；deal with problems 处理问题；be able to 能够；dare to do 敢于做；make sandwiches 做三明治；go to the supermarket 去超市 · 安全相关：night light 夜灯；keep safe 保持安全；don’t open the door to strangers 不给陌生人开门；turn off electrical appliances 关掉电器 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 让步状语从句（although/though）： · Although it was dark, I felt safe with the night light on. · Though I’m young, I can cook simple food. · 结果状语从句（so…that）： · The clock rings so loudly that I can’t sleep late. · I was so busy that I forgot to call my parents. · 常用结构： · I can…, although I can’t… 我能……，虽然我不能…… · It’s + 形容词 + to do sth. 做某事是……的，例：It’s important to lock the door when alone. 1. 情感与感受（单元基础） · 情感类：nervous 紧张的；proud 自豪的；independent 独立的；capable 能干的；worried 担心的；confident 自信的 · 感受表达：feel proud of 为……感到自豪；become more independent 变得更独立；have a great experience 有一次很棒的经历；learn a lot 学到很多；face challenges 面对挑战 二、实用句型积累 1.介绍独自在家的能力与准备（贴合单元核心） · I can + 技能 + when I’m home alone. 独自在家时，我能……，例：I can wash clothes and tidy my room when I’m home alone. · Before my parents leave, I always + 准备动作. 父母离开前，我总会……，例：Before my parents leave, I always check the door and keep the phone handy. · Although I + 不足, I + 优势. 虽然我……，但我……，例：Although I can’t cook complex meals, I can make healthy sandwiches. 1. 描述独自在家的经历与事件（贴合单元主题） · When I was home alone last week, + 事件. 上周独自在家时，我……，例：When I was home alone last week, I accidentally burnt the rice but fixed it by making noodles. · Something unexpected happened: + 具体事件. 发生了一件意外的事：……，例：Something unexpected happened: the power went out, but I found the flashlight quickly. · My alarm clock + 动作 + so loudly that + 结果. 我的闹钟……得如此大声，以至于……，例：My alarm clock rang so loudly that I woke up even earlier than planned. 1. 表达感受与收获（贴合单元内涵） · Being home alone taught me that + 道理. 独自在家教会我……，例：Being home alone taught me that I can depend on myself. · I felt + 情感 + because + 原因. 我感到……，因为……，例：I felt proud because I finished all housework and homework by myself. · It’s not easy to be home alone, but it helps me + 成长. 独自在家并不容易，但它帮助我……，例：It’s not easy to be home alone, but it helps me become more independent. 三、课堂实用句型 · 提问句型：Have you ever been home alone?；What can you do when you’re home alone?；Did anything interesting happen?；What did you learn from the experience?；Are you afraid when you’re home alone at night? · 回答句型：Yes, I have. I was home alone last month.；I can cook simple meals and tidy my room.；Yes, the power went out but I handled it.；I learned to look after myself.；No, I’m not. I lock the door and turn on the night light. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $