内容正文:
Module 4 Rules and suggestions 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“Rules and suggestions”为话题,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“安全与规则”主题群,核心聚焦“用英语谈论安全规则、给出建议、描述危险场景”,运用情态动词(must/mustn’t/should/shouldn’t等) 及安全相关核心词汇,提升应用类写作的实用性和指导性。常见写作角度包括:① 介绍户外活动(登山、露营等)的安全规则;② 给旅行者提安全建议;③ 描述一次意外事件及应对方法;④ 制定校园/社区安全规则。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点,突出“安全性”和“建议性”,可直接用于课堂同步训练。
【单元话题】
“户外活动安全规则”。请用英语写一篇短文,介绍参加登山活动的安全规则及相关建议,词数60-80左右,题目为“Safety Rules for Mountain Climbing”。
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【范文】
Safety Rules for Mountain Climbing
Mountain climbing is exciting but needs strict safety rules to follow.
First, you must wear strong shoes and thick socks to protect your feet. You should always stay with your group and mustn’t go off on your own, or you may get lost. Be careful of falling stones and don’t walk too close to the edge of the path. You’d better bring enough water and don’t drink it all in one go.
Following these rules can keep you safe and make the trip enjoyable.
【译文】
登山安全规则
登山很刺激,但需要遵守严格的安全规则。
首先,你必须穿结实的鞋子和厚袜子来保护双脚。你应该一直和团队待在一起,绝对不能单独行动,否则可能会迷路。要小心落石,不要太靠近路边行走。你最好带足够的水,不要一口气喝完。
遵守这些规则能保障你的安全,让旅途愉快。
亮点词块
1.mountain climbing 登山
2.strict safety rules 严格的安全规则
3.strong shoes and thick socks 结实的鞋子和厚袜子
4.go off on your own 单独行动
5.be careful of falling stones 小心落石
6.the edge of the path 路边
7.enough water 足够的水
8.in one go 一口气
9.keep you safe 保障你的安全
高分句子
1.Mountain climbing is exciting but needs strict safety rules to follow.(开篇点题,突出规则的重要性,贴合单元主题)
2.You should always stay with your group and mustn’t go off on your own, or you may get lost.(连用should/mustn’t情态动词,明确建议与禁止,符合单元语法重点)
3.Following these rules can keep you safe and make the trip enjoyable.(总结规则的意义,升华主题,简洁有力)
【拓展1】
你的外国笔友Peter计划来中国参加户外露营活动,请你写一封邮件,向他提供安全建议,词数不少于50。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad you’re coming to China for camping! Camping is fun but you need to follow some safety rules.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m glad you’re coming to China for camping! Camping is fun but you need to follow some safety rules.
First, you should put up your tent on flat ground and keep it away from trees. You mustn’t make open fires in the forest to avoid fires. Bring a flashlight and some first-aid supplies in case of emergencies. You should also keep the camp clean, as food waste may attract wild animals.
Follow these suggestions and you’ll have a safe and great camping experience!
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的彼得:
很高兴你要来中国露营!露营很有趣,但你需要遵守一些安全规则。
首先,你应该把帐篷搭在平坦的地面上,远离树木。绝对不要在森林里明火,以防火灾。带一个手电筒和一些急救用品,以备不时之需。你还应该保持营地干净,因为食物垃圾可能会吸引野生动物。
遵守这些建议,你会拥有一次安全又愉快的露营经历!
你的,
李华
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,写一篇短文,介绍校园安全规则,词数50左右,开头已给出。
提示
信息
规则1
上下楼梯靠右行,不追逐打闹
规则2
不在走廊奔跑,不攀爬窗户
规则3
遇紧急情况听从老师指挥,有序撤离
建议
遵守规则,保护自己和他人安全
Safety Rules in Our School
Safety is very important in our school, so we have some strict rules to follow.
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【拓展2范文】
Safety Rules in Our School
Safety is very important in our school, so we have some strict rules to follow.
We must keep to the right when going up and down stairs and mustn’t run or fight. You shouldn’t run in the corridors or climb the windows. If there’s an emergency, follow the teachers’ instructions and evacuate in order.
Following these rules helps protect ourselves and others. Let’s all remember them.
【拓展2译文】
我们学校的安全规则
安全在我们学校至关重要,所以我们有一些严格的规则需要遵守。
上下楼梯时必须靠右行,禁止奔跑打闹。不要在走廊里奔跑,也不要攀爬窗户。如果遇到紧急情况,听从老师的指示,有序撤离。
遵守这些规则有助于保护自己和他人,让我们都记住它们。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.安全与规则相关(单元重点)
· 活动与场景:mountain climbing 登山;camping 露营;hiking 徒步旅行;school corridors 校园走廊;flat ground 平坦地面;edge of the path 路边
· 规则与动作:follow rules 遵守规则;keep to the right 靠右行;go off on your own 单独行动;put up a tent 搭帐篷;evacuate in order 有序撤离;avoid fires 避免火灾
· 安全用品:first-aid supplies 急救用品;flashlight 手电筒;strong shoes 结实的鞋子;thick socks 厚袜子
· 危险提示:falling stones 落石;wild animals 野生动物;emergency 紧急情况;open fires 明火
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 情态动词用法:
· 表命令/必须:must(必须);have to(不得不),例:You must wear safety gear.
· 表禁止:mustn’t(绝对禁止),例:You mustn’t climb the fence.
· 表建议:should(应该);shouldn’t(不应该);had better(最好),例:You should bring enough water.
· 常用结构:
· 提建议:It’s important to + 动词原形;You’d better + 动词原形
· 表目的:to protect...;in case of...(以防……)
1. 表达类(单元基础)
· 规则描述:strict safety rules 严格的安全规则;follow the instructions 听从指示;keep...safe 保障……安全;avoid danger 避免危险
· 场景描述:put up a tent 搭帐篷;keep away from 远离;in the forest 在森林里;go up and down stairs 上下楼梯
二、实用句型积累
1.介绍规则的重要性(贴合单元核心)
· [Activity] is fun but needs strict safety rules to follow. ……很有趣,但需要遵守严格的安全规则,例:Camping is fun but needs strict safety rules to follow.
· Safety is very important in [place], so we have some rules to follow. 在……(地方)安全至关重要,所以我们有一些规则要遵守,例:Safety is very important in the mountains, so we have some rules to follow.
· Following these rules can keep you safe and make the trip/activity enjoyable. 遵守这些规则能保障你的安全,让旅途/活动愉快,例:Following these rules can keep you safe and make the hiking enjoyable.
1. 提出具体规则与建议(贴合单元主题)
· First, you must/should + 动作 + to + 目的. 首先,你必须/应该……来……,例:First, you must wear a helmet to protect your head.
· You mustn’t + 危险动作 + because + 原因. 你绝对不能……,因为……,例:You mustn’t swim in the river because the water is deep.
· You’d better + 建议动作 + in case of + 意外. 你最好……,以防……,例:You’d better take a phone in case of emergency.
· Don’t + 危险动作 + or + 后果. 不要……,否则……,例:Don’t run on wet floors or you may fall.
1. 总结与呼吁(贴合单元内涵)
· Let’s all follow these rules to keep ourselves and others safe. 让我们都遵守这些规则,保护自己和他人的安全,例:Let’s all follow these rules to keep ourselves and others safe.
· Following these suggestions will help you have a safe and great experience. 遵守这些建议会让你拥有一次安全又愉快的经历,例:Following these suggestions will help you have a safe and great camping trip.
· Remember: safety always comes first! 记住:安全永远是第一位的!
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:What safety rules do you know for hiking?;What mustn’t we do when camping?;Why is it important to follow safety rules?;What should we bring for a mountain trip?;How can we keep safe in school?
· 回答句型:We must stay with the group when hiking.;We mustn’t make open fires in the forest.;Because it can avoid accidents.;We should bring water and first-aid supplies.;We can keep to the right and not run in corridors.
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