Module 11 Photos 作文学案 2025-2026学年外研版（2012）九年级英语上册

Module 11 Photos 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Photos”为话题，属于“人与生活”主题范畴中“生活记录与表达”主题群，核心聚焦“用英语描述照片、拍摄场景、人物事物，运用who/which引导的定语从句及单元核心词汇”，提升说明类与叙事类结合的写作能力。常见写作角度包括：① 介绍一张喜爱的照片（内容、拍摄背景、意义）；② 撰写摄影比赛参赛作品说明；③ 给朋友推荐一张有特殊意义的照片；④ 描述一次拍照经历。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点，突出“纪实性”和“情感性”，可直接用于课堂同步训练。 【单元话题】 “我喜爱的一张照片”。请用英语写一篇短文，介绍你喜爱的一张照片，包括其拍摄时间、地点、内容、背后的故事及你喜爱它的原因，词数60-80左右，题目为“My Favourite Photo”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 My Favourite Photo My favourite photo is one which was taken on the Great Wall last summer. In the photo, there is a little girl who is holding a red flag and smiling brightly. She is my little sister. We went to Beijing with our parents, and my dad took this photo when we reached the top. The Great Wall, which looks grand in the sun, is a symbol of China. Every time I see it, I remember the happy time we spent together. I love this photo because it records our wonderful trip and my sister’s lovely smile. 【译文】 我喜爱的一张照片 我最喜欢的照片是去年夏天在长城上拍的那一张。 照片里有个小女孩，她举着红旗，笑得特别灿烂，那是我的小妹妹。我们和父母一起去了北京，到达山顶时爸爸拍下了这张照片。阳光下的长城看起来格外宏伟，它是中国的象征。每次看到这张照片，我都会想起我们一起度过的快乐时光。 我喜爱这张照片，因为它记录了我们美好的旅行，也定格了妹妹可爱的笑容。 亮点词块 1.take a photo 拍照 2.hold a red flag 举着红旗 3.reach the top 到达山顶 4.a symbol of China 中国的象征 5.wonderful trip 美好的旅行 6.record the moment 定格瞬间 7.smile brightly 笑得灿烂 8.grand in the sun 阳光下宏伟 高分句子 1.My favourite photo is one which was taken on the Great Wall last summer.（运用which引导的定语从句，贴合单元核心语法） 2.In the photo, there is a little girl who is holding a red flag and smiling brightly.（用who引导定语从句描述人物，符合单元表达习惯） 3.The Great Wall, which looks grand in the sun, is a symbol of China.（非限制性定语从句补充说明，丰富句式） 【拓展1】 你的外国笔友Peter对中国的风景很感兴趣，请你写一封邮件，向他推荐一张你拍摄的中国风景照，词数不少于50。 Dear Peter, I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese scenery! I’d like to share my favourite photo with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Peter, I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese scenery! I’d like to share my favourite photo with you. It’s a photo which I took by the West Lake in Hangzhou last spring. The lake, which is surrounded by green trees and pink peach blossoms, looks like a painting. There are some boats on the water that are rowed by local people. I took it at sunrise, so the sky is filled with golden light. This photo shows the beauty of Chinese nature. I’m sure you’ll love the West Lake if you see it in person! Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的彼得： 很高兴你对中国风景感兴趣！我想和你分享我最喜欢的一张照片。 这是我去年春天在杭州西湖边拍的照片。西湖被绿树和粉色桃花环绕，看起来就像一幅画。水面上有一些当地人划的小船。我在日出时拍下了它，所以天空布满了金光。 这张照片展现了中国大自然的美，我相信你如果亲眼见到西湖，一定会爱上它的！ 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示，写一篇短文，介绍一张班级活动照片，词数50左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 照片主题 班级运动会接力赛夺冠 拍摄时间 去年秋季 内容 同学们拥抱庆祝，班主任在旁微笑鼓掌 意义 记录团结与胜利，难忘的班级记忆 This is my favourite class photo, which was taken during our school sports meeting. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 This is my favourite class photo, which was taken during our school sports meeting last autumn. In the photo, my classmates who won the relay race are hugging each other excitedly. Our head teacher, who always supports us, is smiling and clapping. The joy on everyone’s face shows our teamwork and victory. It’s a memory that I will never forget. 【拓展2译文】 这是我最喜欢的班级照片，它是去年秋天学校运动会期间拍的。 照片里，赢得接力赛的同学们正兴奋地互相拥抱，一直支持我们的班主任在一旁微笑鼓掌。每个人脸上的喜悦展现了我们的团队合作与胜利。这是一段我永远不会忘记的回忆。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.照片相关（单元重点） · 拍照与摄影：take a photo 拍照；take photos of 拍摄……；photo competition 摄影比赛；record 记录；shoot 拍摄；capture the moment 定格瞬间 · 照片元素：scenery 风景；portrait 肖像；group photo 合影；background 背景；subject 主题；light 光线；blossom 花；boat 小船；relay race 接力赛 · 相关人物：photographer 摄影师；classmate 同学；head teacher 班主任；local people 当地人；little sister 小妹妹 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · who引导的定语从句（修饰人）： · The girl who is in red is my cousin. 穿红衣服的女孩是我的表妹。 · The teacher who helped us is very kind. 帮助我们的老师很善良。 · which引导的定语从句（修饰物）： · The photo which I took is very special. 我拍的那张照片很特别。 · The lake which surrounds the city is beautiful. 环绕城市的湖很美。 · 常用结构： · 主句 + who/which + 从句（作主语）：He is the boy who won the photo competition. · 主句 + who/which + 从句（作宾语，可省略）：This is the camera (which) my father bought for me. 1. 表达类（单元基础） · 拍摄背景：on the Great Wall 在长城；by the West Lake 西湖边；at sunrise 日出时；during the sports meeting 运动会期间；last spring 去年春天 · 情感与意义：wonderful memory 美好回忆；special meaning 特殊意义；teamwork and victory 团队合作与胜利；love at first sight 一见钟情；never forget 永远难忘 二、实用句型积累 1.介绍照片基本信息（贴合单元核心） · My favourite photo is one which/who + 从句. 我最喜欢的照片是……的那一张，例：My favourite photo is one which was taken at my birthday party. · It was taken + 时间 + by + 人 + 地点. 它是……时间由……在……拍的，例：It was taken last winter by my mother in my hometown. · In the photo, there is/are + 人/物 + who/which + 从句. 照片里有……，例：In the photo, there are some children who are playing in the snow. 1. 描述照片内容与故事（贴合单元主题） · The person who + 动作 + in the photo is + 身份. 照片里……的人是……，例：The person who is playing the guitar in the photo is my brother. · The place which + 特征 + in the photo is + 地点. 照片里……的地方是……，例：The place which is covered with flowers in the photo is my grandma’s garden. · I took this photo because + 原因. 我拍这张照片是因为……，例：I took this photo because it shows the beautiful sunset over the sea. 1. 表达喜爱理由与意义（贴合单元内涵） · I love this photo because it records + 内容. 我喜爱这张照片，因为它记录了……，例：I love this photo because it records my first trip to Beijing. · It is a memory that + 从句. 这是一段……的回忆，例：It is a memory that I will cherish forever. · The photo which + 特征 + makes me + 感受. ……的这张照片让我……，例：The photo which my friend took makes me feel happy every time I see it. 三、课堂实用句型（教学专用） · 提问句型：What’s your favourite photo about?；Who took it?；When and where was it taken?；What can you see in the photo?；Why do you like it? · 回答句型：It’s about my family trip to Guilin.；My father took it.；It was taken last summer by the Li River.；I can see my parents and me standing by the river.；Because it reminds me of the happy time we spent together. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $