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Module 10 Australia 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“Australia”为话题,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“国家与文化”主题群,核心聚焦“用英语描述国家地理、著名景点、风俗文化、生活方式”,运用that引导的定语从句及单元核心词汇,提升说明类写作的准确性与感染力。常见写作角度包括:① 介绍澳大利亚的地理与著名景点;② 分享澳大利亚的风俗文化与生活习惯;③ 给外国朋友写邮件推荐澳大利亚旅行;④ 描述参观澳大利亚的亲身经历。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点,突出“文化性”和“纪实性”,可直接用于课堂同步训练。
【单元话题】
“介绍澳大利亚”。请用英语写一篇短文,介绍澳大利亚,包括其位置、著名景点、风俗或语言特点,词数60-80左右,题目为“Australia - A Wonderful Country”。
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【范文】
Australia - A Wonderful Country
Australia is a great country in the southern part of the world, and it’s the largest English-speaking country there.
The most famous sight that I want to introduce is Ayers Rock, a magical rock in central Australia. There’s also the Great Barrier Reef that lies off its northeast coast. Australians love sports, and the game that they like most is Australian football. They speak English but with their own way, like “G’day” for “Hello”.
It’s a country full of natural wonders and interesting customs, worth visiting.
【译文】
澳大利亚——一个奇妙的国家
澳大利亚是世界南部的一个伟大国家,也是那里最大的英语国家。
我想介绍的最著名景点是艾尔斯岩,一块位于澳大利亚中部的神奇岩石。还有位于其东北海岸附近的大堡礁。澳大利亚人热爱运动,他们最喜欢的运动是澳式足球。他们说英语但有自己的特色,比如用“G’day”表示“你好”。
这是一个充满自然奇观和有趣风俗的国家,值得一游。
亮点词块
1.the southern part of the world 世界南部
2.largest English-speaking country 最大的英语国家
3.natural wonders 自然奇观
4.lie off the northeast coast 位于东北海岸附近
5.Australian football 澳式足球
6.with one’s own way 有自己的特色
7.worth visiting 值得一游
8.magical rock 神奇的岩石
高分句子
1.The most famous sight that I want to introduce is Ayers Rock, a magical rock in central Australia.(运用that引导的定语从句,贴合单元核心语法)
2.There’s also the Great Barrier Reef that lies off its northeast coast.(结合课本景点表达+定语从句,符合单元主题)
3.It’s a country full of natural wonders and interesting customs, worth visiting.(总结国家特色,升华主题)
【拓展1】
你的外国笔友Lisa计划去澳大利亚旅行,请你写一封邮件,向她推荐必去的景点及注意事项,词数不少于50。
Dear Lisa,
I’m so excited to hear you’re going to Australia! It’s a fantastic country with lots of amazing places to visit.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear Lisa,
I’m so excited to hear you’re going to Australia! It’s a fantastic country with lots of amazing places to visit.
You must visit the Sydney Opera House that looks like a huge sailing boat. Don’t miss the Great Barrier Reef—you can swim with colorful fish there. According to the local people, Ayers Rock is a special place where the colors change at different times of the day. Remember it’s summer in December there, so take sunscreen! Australians are friendly, and you’ll love their casual lifestyle.
Have a wonderful trip!
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的莉萨:
听说你要去澳大利亚,我太兴奋了!这是一个奇妙的国家,有很多令人惊叹的地方值得一游。
你一定要去看看悉尼歌剧院,它看起来像一艘巨大的帆船。别错过大堡礁——你可以在那里和五颜六色的鱼一起游泳。据当地人说,艾尔斯岩是一个特别的地方,它的颜色在一天中的不同时间会变化。记住,那里12月是夏天,所以要带防晒霜!澳大利亚人很友好,你会喜欢他们随性的生活方式的。
祝你旅途愉快!
你的,
李华
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,写一篇短文,介绍澳大利亚的大堡礁,词数50左右,开头已给出。
提示
信息
位置
澳大利亚东北海岸附近
特征
长约2600公里,世界最大珊瑚礁群,海洋生物丰富
意义
自然奇观,吸引全球游客,适合潜水、观鱼
语言
用that引导定语从句
The Great Barrier Reef is one of Australia’s most famous natural wonders.
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【拓展2范文】
The Great Barrier Reef is one of Australia’s most famous natural wonders.
It’s a huge coral reef that lies off Australia’s northeast coast, stretching over 2,600 kilometres. There are many colorful fish and sea plants that make it a magic underwater world. It’s a place that attracts millions of visitors every year—people love diving and watching marine life there. It’s truly a must-see for nature lovers.
【拓展2译文】
大堡礁是澳大利亚最著名的自然奇观之一。
它是一个巨大的珊瑚礁群,位于澳大利亚东北海岸附近,绵延超过2600公里。那里有许多五颜六色的鱼和海生植物,使它成为一个神奇的水下世界。它是一个每年吸引数百万游客的地方——人们喜欢在那里潜水和观赏海洋生物。对于自然爱好者来说,它绝对是必游之地。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.国家与地理(单元重点)
· 国家相关:Australia 澳大利亚;Australian 澳大利亚的/澳大利亚人;English-speaking country 英语国家;southern part of the world 世界南部
· 著名景点:Ayers Rock 艾尔斯岩;Sydney Opera House 悉尼歌剧院;Great Barrier Reef 大堡礁;Bondi Beach 邦迪海滩;central Australia 澳大利亚中部;northeast coast 东北海岸
· 地理表达:lie off 位于(海岸附近);stretch over 绵延;in the centre of 在……中部;off the coast 海岸附近
1. 风俗与生活(单元重点)
· 风俗文化:Aboriginal 澳大利亚土著的;marine life 海洋生物;Australian football 澳式足球;surfing 冲浪;picnic 野餐;casual lifestyle 随性的生活方式
· 语言特色:G’day 你好;No worries 没关系;speak English with one’s own way 用自己的特色说英语
· 自然与环境:natural wonder 自然奇观;coral reef 珊瑚礁;colorful fish 五颜六色的鱼;sunscreen 防晒霜;desert 沙漠;kangaroo 袋鼠
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· that引导的定语从句(修饰人/物,作主语或宾语):
· 修饰物:The Great Barrier Reef is a place that attracts millions of visitors.(作主语)
· 修饰人:Australians are people that are very friendly.(作主语)
· 作宾语(可省略that):I like the Sydney Opera House (that) you mentioned.
二、实用句型积累
1.介绍国家基本信息(贴合单元核心)
· [Country] is a [feature] country that lies in [location]. ……是一个位于……的……国家,例:Australia is a beautiful country that lies in the southern part of the world.
· It is famous for [scenery/customs], and it’s known as [title]. 它以……闻名,被称为……,例:It is famous for its natural wonders, and it’s known as “the Land of Kangaroos”.
· The most famous [sight] that you must visit is [name]. 你必游的最著名景点是……,例:The most famous sight that you must visit is the Sydney Opera House.
1. 描述景点与风俗(贴合单元主题)
· There’s [sight] that [feature], which makes it special. 有……(景点),它……(特征),这让它很特别,例:There’s Ayers Rock that changes colors at different times, which makes it special.
· Australians love [sport/custom], and the [thing] that they like most is [detail]. 澳大利亚人喜欢……,他们最喜欢的……是……,例:Australians love outdoor activities, and the sport that they like most is Australian football.
· According to the local people, [sight] is a magical place that has [meaning]. 据当地人说,……是一个有……(意义)的神奇地方,例:According to the local people, Ayers Rock is a magical place that has special Aboriginal culture.
1. 表达推荐与感受(贴合单元内涵)
· It’s a country full of [feature], and it’s worth [doing]. 这是一个充满……的国家,值得……,例:It’s a country full of natural beauty, and it’s worth traveling to.
· If you visit Australia, don’t miss [sight] because it [advantage]. 如果你去澳大利亚,别错过……,因为它……,例:If you visit Australia, don’t miss the Great Barrier Reef because it offers amazing underwater views.
· I think Australia is a wonderful country that everyone should visit at least once. 我认为澳大利亚是一个每个人都应该至少去一次的奇妙国家。
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:Where is Australia located?;What famous sights are there in Australia?;What do Australians like doing in their free time?;How do Australians greet each other?;Why is Ayers Rock special to local people?
· 回答句型:It’s located in the southern part of the world.;There are the Sydney Opera House and the Great Barrier Reef.;They like surfing and playing Australian football.;They often say “G’day” to greet each other.;Because it has special Aboriginal culture and changes colors.
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