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Module 8 Sports life 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“Sports life”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“运动与健康”主题群,核心聚焦“用英语描述体育明星、运动比赛、个人运动经历,运用一般过去时被动语态及单元核心词汇”,提升叙事类与说明类结合的写作能力。常见写作角度包括:① 介绍喜爱的体育明星(事迹、成就、品质);② 分享一次难忘的运动比赛经历;③ 谈论学校运动队的故事;④ 推荐一项喜爱的体育运动。所有内容严格贴合课本话题与语言点,突出“竞技性”和“榜样性”,可直接用于课堂同步训练。
【单元话题】
“我喜爱的体育明星”。请用英语写一篇短文,介绍你喜爱的一位体育明星,包括其身份、主要事迹、成就及你崇拜他/她的原因,词数60-80左右,题目为“My Favourite Sports Star”。
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【范文】
My Favourite Sports Star
My favourite sports star is Liu Xiang, a world-famous hurdler.
He was born in Shanghai in 1983 and started training at a young age. His hurdling ability was noticed by coach Sun Haiping in 1998. In 2004, he was chosen for the Chinese Olympic team and won the first Olympic gold medal for China in 110m hurdles. He also broke the Olympic record then. Though he suffered from foot problems later, he never gave up.
Liu Xiang is a symbol of courage and perseverance. I admire him because he showed the world Asian athletes’ strength.
【译文】
我喜爱的体育明星
我最喜欢的体育明星是刘翔,一位世界著名的跨栏运动员。
他1983年出生于上海,年幼时便开始训练。1998年,他的跨栏天赋被孙海平教练发现。2004年,他被选入中国奥运代表队,夺得中国首枚110米跨栏奥运金牌,同时打破奥运纪录。尽管后来受脚伤困扰,他从未放弃。
刘翔是勇气与毅力的象征,我崇拜他,因为他向世界展现了亚洲运动员的实力。
亮点词块
1.world-famous hurdler 世界著名跨栏运动员
2.hurdling ability 跨栏天赋
3.be chosen for the Olympic team 被选入奥运代表队
4.win the gold medal 夺得金牌
5.break the Olympic record 打破奥运纪录
6.suffer from foot problems 受脚伤困扰
7.never give up 永不放弃
8.a symbol of courage and perseverance 勇气与毅力的象征
9.show one’s strength 展现某人的实力
高分句子
1.His hurdling ability was noticed by coach Sun Haiping in 1998.(运用一般过去时被动语态,贴合单元核心语法)
2.Though he suffered from foot problems later, he never gave up.(用让步状语凸显体育精神,符合单元内涵)
3.I admire him because he showed the world Asian athletes’ strength.(衔接崇拜原因,升华主题)
【拓展1】
你的外国笔友David对中国体育明星很感兴趣,请你写一封邮件,向他推荐乒乓球运动员张怡宁,词数不少于50。
Dear David,
I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese sports stars! I’d like to recommend Zhang Yining, a great table tennis player, to you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear David,
I’m glad you’re interested in Chinese sports stars! I’d like to recommend Zhang Yining, a great table tennis player, to you.
She was noticed by her coach at a young age and was invited to join the national team later. She trained extremely hard and won many gold medals in the Olympic Games and World Championships. Her skills were praised by fans all over the world. She was known as “the Ice Queen” for her calm attitude in matches.
Zhang Yining is a true sports hero. Her perseverance teaches us to keep trying. I’m sure you’ll admire her too!
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的大卫:
很高兴你对中国体育明星感兴趣!我想向你推荐一位伟大的乒乓球运动员——张怡宁。
她年幼时就被教练发掘,后来受邀加入国家队。她训练极为刻苦,在奥运会和世锦赛上赢得了众多金牌。她的技术受到全球球迷的称赞,因比赛中冷静的心态被称为“大魔王”。
张怡宁是真正的体育英雄,她的毅力教会我们坚持尝试。我相信你也会崇拜她的!
你的,
李华
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,写一篇短文,介绍篮球运动员姚明,词数50左右,开头已给出。
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信息
身份
中国前职业篮球运动员,NBA球星
事迹
2002年被休斯顿火箭队选中,成为NBA首位中国状元秀;多次入选NBA全明星;为中国篮球推广做出贡献
品质
勤奋、谦逊、有责任感
影响
成为中外体育文化交流的桥梁
Yao Ming is one of the most influential Chinese sports stars of all time.
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【拓展2范文】
Yao Ming is one of the most influential Chinese sports stars of all time.
He was chosen by the Houston Rockets in 2002, becoming the first Chinese No.1 draft pick in NBA history. He was selected as an NBA All-Star many times. Though he faced great challenges abroad, he remained hard-working and humble. He was respected for promoting Chinese basketball globally and building a bridge between Chinese and foreign sports cultures.
【拓展2译文】
姚明是有史以来最具影响力的中国体育明星之一。
2002年,他被休斯顿火箭队选中,成为NBA历史上首位中国状元秀。他多次入选NBA全明星阵容。尽管在海外面临诸多挑战,他始终勤奋谦逊。他因在全球推广中国篮球、搭建中外体育文化交流桥梁而备受尊敬。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.体育相关(单元重点)
· 运动与运动员:sports star 体育明星;hurdler 跨栏运动员;table tennis player 乒乓球运动员;basketball player 篮球运动员;national team 国家队;NBA All-Star NBA全明星;draft pick 选秀球员
· 比赛与成就:win the gold medal 夺得金牌;break the record 打破纪录;Olympic Games 奥运会;World Championship 世锦赛;be selected as 被选为;be chosen for the team 被选入球队;promote sports 推广体育
· 品质与状态:perseverance 毅力;courage 勇气;hard-working 勤奋的;humble 谦逊的;calm 冷静的;suffer from injuries 受伤病困扰;never give up 永不放弃
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 一般过去时被动语态(核心结构:was/were + 过去分词):
· 肯定式:He was invited to international competitions. 他被邀请参加国际比赛。
· 否定式:She was not chosen for the first match. 她没被选入首场比赛。
· 一般疑问句:Was he trained by a famous coach? 他是由著名教练训练的吗?
· 常用被动表达:
· be noticed by 被……发现:His talent was noticed by a scout. 他的天赋被球探发现。
· be praised for 因……被称赞:She was praised for her excellent skills. 她因出色的技术被称赞。
· be known as 被称为:He was known as the “King of Hurdles”. 他被称为“跨栏王”。
1. 情感与表达(单元基础)
· 崇拜与赞美:admire 钦佩;respect 尊敬;look up to 敬仰;a true sports hero 真正的体育英雄;an inspiration to 对……是一种激励
· 比赛描述:face challenges 面临挑战;remain calm 保持冷静;make great efforts 付出巨大努力;contribute to 为……做贡献;build a bridge 搭建桥梁
二、实用句型积累
1.介绍体育明星基本信息(贴合单元核心)
· [Sports star name] is a famous [sport] player who [achievement]. 某人是一位著名的……运动员,他/她……,例:Liu Xiang is a famous hurdler who won the Olympic gold medal.
· He/She was born in [time/place] and started [training/playing] when he/she was young. 他/她出生于……,年幼时开始……,例:She was born in Beijing and started playing table tennis at the age of five.
· His/Her [ability/talent] was noticed by [someone] in [year]. 他/她的……(能力/天赋)在……年被……发现,例:His basketball talent was noticed by a coach in 1999.
1. 描述事迹与成就(贴合单元主题)
· He/She was chosen for [team] and won [prize] in [event]. 他/她被选入……队,并在……赛事中赢得……,例:He was chosen for the national team and won a gold medal in the World Cup.
· Though he/she suffered from [difficulty], he/she never gave up and finally [achievement]. 尽管他/她遭遇……(困难),但从未放弃,最终……,例:Though she suffered from knee injuries, she never gave up and finally became a champion.
· He/She was praised by fans all over the world for [reason]. 他/她因……被全球球迷称赞,例:He was praised by fans all over the world for his sportsmanship.
1. 表达崇拜理由与影响(贴合单元内涵)
· I admire him/her because he/she is [quality] and has [achievement]. 我钦佩他/她,因为他/她……(品质)且拥有……(成就),例:I admire her because she is hard-working and has won many international prizes.
· He/She is not just a sports star, but also a role model who teaches us [truth]. 他/她不仅是体育明星,更是教会我们……(道理)的榜样,例:He is not just a sports star, but also a role model who teaches us the value of perseverance.
· His/Her story inspires me to [action] when facing difficulties. 他/她的故事激励我在面对困难时……,例:His story inspires me to keep practicing when I fail in sports.
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:Who is your favourite sports star?;What sport does he/she do?;What achievements has he/she made?;Why do you admire him/her?;How has he/she influenced you?
· 回答句型:My favourite sports star is Su Bingtian.;He is a sprinter.;He broke the Asian record in the 100-meter race.;Because he is hard-working and brave.;He inspires me to pursue my dreams.
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