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Unit 10 I remember meeting all of you in Grade 6. 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“I remember meeting all of you in Grade 6”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“成长与回忆”这一主题群。单元核心聚焦“用英语分享初中阶段的回忆与经历、展望未来,运用一般过去时、现在完成时、一般将来时及remember doing 句型,提升叙事连贯性与情感表达能力”,常见写作角度包括:① 回忆初中难忘的人或事;② 分享成长中的改变与收获;③ 写毕业演讲或信件;④ 展望高中生活与未来规划。所有内容严格贴合课本词汇与句型,突出“抒情性”和“纪念性”,可直接用于课堂写作教学与练习。
【单元话题】
“我的初中回忆”。请用英语写一篇短文,回忆初中阶段最难忘的一件事或一位人,分享你的感受与收获,词数60-80左右,题目为“My Unforgettable Junior High Memory”。
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【范文】
My Unforgettable Junior High Memory
Among all my junior high memories, the school sports meet in Grade 8 is the most unforgettable.
I joined the 800-meter race and felt very nervous at first. My classmates cheered for me loudly during the race, which gave me great courage. Although I didn’t win the first prize, I finished the race with their support. I remember hugging my friends tightly after crossing the finish line. That experience taught me the power of teamwork and friendship.
Junior high days are ending, but this memory will stay in my heart forever.
【译文】
我难忘的初中回忆
在我所有的初中回忆中,八年级的校运会是最难忘的。
我参加了800米赛跑,一开始非常紧张。比赛过程中,同学们大声为我加油,这给了我巨大的勇气。虽然我没有获得一等奖,但在他们的支持下我完成了比赛。我记得冲过终点线后,紧紧拥抱了我的朋友们。那次经历让我明白了团队合作和友谊的力量。
初中时光即将结束,但这段回忆将永远留在我心中。
亮点词块
1.junior high memories 初中回忆
2.school sports meet 校运会
3.feel nervous 感到紧张
4.cheer for 为……加油
5.give sb. great courage 给某人巨大勇气
6.finish the race 完成比赛
7.cross the finish line 冲过终点线
8.the power of teamwork 团队合作的力量
9.stay in one’s heart 留在某人心中
10.come to an end 结束
高分句子
1.I remember hugging my friends tightly after crossing the finish line.(运用“remember doing”句型,贴合单元核心语法)
2.My classmates cheered for me loudly during the race, which gave me great courage.(用定语从句补充细节,增强叙事连贯性,符合单元表达习惯)
3.Junior high days are ending, but this memory will stay in my heart forever.(抒情收尾,升华主题,贴合单元纪念性内涵)
【拓展1】
初中即将毕业,你想给最感谢的老师写一封信,表达你的感激之情,分享他/她对你的影响,词数不少于50。
Dear Ms. Lee,
As junior high school is coming to an end, I want to say “thank you” from the bottom of my heart. You are the teacher I want to thank most.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear Ms. Lee,
As junior high school is coming to an end, I want to say “thank you” from the bottom of my heart. You are the teacher I want to thank most.
I still remember when I failed my math exam in Grade 7. I felt so upset, but you patiently helped me find my mistakes and encouraged me not to give up. You always took time to explain difficult problems clearly. Thanks to you, my math has improved a lot, and I’ve become more confident. You taught me not only knowledge but also the spirit of perseverance.
I will miss your classes and your kind smile. Wish you all the best!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的李老师:
初中即将结束,我从心底想对您说一声“谢谢”。您是我最想感谢的老师。
我还记得七年级数学考试失利时,我非常沮丧,但您耐心地帮我找出错误,鼓励我不要放弃。您总是花时间把难题讲得很清楚。多亏了您,我的数学进步很大,也变得更自信了。您不仅教给我知识,还教会我坚持不懈的精神。
我会想念您的课和您友善的笑容,祝您一切顺利!
您真诚的,
李华
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,写一篇毕业演讲的片段,展望高中生活,词数50左右,开头已给出。
提示
信息
开头
感谢老师与同学,回顾初中时光
展望高中
努力学习、结交新朋友、参加社团活动
结尾
珍惜情谊,共同进步
Dear teachers and classmates,
Today, we are graduating from junior high school. Looking back, I have so many sweet memories.
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【拓展2范文】
Dear teachers and classmates,
Today, we are graduating from junior high school. Looking back, I have so many sweet memories.
Thank you, dear teachers, for your guidance and care. Thank you, dear classmates, for your friendship and support. As we enter senior high, I plan to study harder, make new friends and join interesting clubs. Although we may go our separate ways, our friendship will last forever. Let’s keep moving forward and achieve our dreams!
【拓展2译文】
亲爱的老师和同学们:
今天,我们即将初中毕业。回首过去,我有太多美好的回忆。
感谢亲爱的老师,感谢你们的指导与关爱;感谢亲爱的同学,感谢你们的友谊与支持。进入高中后,我计划更加努力学习、结交新朋友、参加有趣的社团。虽然我们可能会各奔东西,但我们的友谊将永存。让我们继续前进,实现自己的梦想!
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.回忆与经历(单元重点)
· 校园相关:junior high school 初中;senior high school 高中;graduation 毕业;school sports meet 校运会;classmates 同学;teachers 老师;club 社团;course 课程;exam 考试;prize 奖品
· 回忆表达:unforgettable memory 难忘的回忆;sweet memories 美好回忆;look back at 回首;remember doing 记得做过;recall 回忆起;stay in one’s heart 留在某人心中;come to an end 结束
· 成长与收获:make progress 取得进步;gain confidence 获得自信;learn from 从……学习;the power of friendship 友谊的力量;teamwork 团队合作;perseverance 坚持不懈;overcome difficulties 克服困难
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 时态运用:
· 一般过去时(描述过去事件):主语 + 过去式 + 其他,例:I joined the 800-meter race.
· 现在完成时(描述成长变化):主语 + have/has + 过去分词 + 其他,例:My math has improved a lot.
· 一般将来时(展望未来):主语 + will/be going to + 动词原形 + 其他,例:I will study harder in senior high.
· 核心句型:
· remember doing sth. 记得做过某事,例:I remember meeting you in Grade 6.
· It’s unforgettable that ... 令人难忘的是……,例:It’s unforgettable that my classmates cheered for me.
· Thanks to sb./sth. 多亏了……,例:Thanks to my teacher’s help, I succeeded.
1. 情感与展望(单元基础)
· 情感表达:thankful 感激的;grateful 感恩的;upset 沮丧的;nervous 紧张的;confident 自信的;proud 自豪的;sad 难过的;excited 兴奋的
· 展望表达:look forward to 期待;plan to 计划;dream of 梦想;achieve one’s dreams 实现梦想;keep moving forward 继续前进;go our separate ways 各奔东西;last forever 永存
二、实用句型积累
1.回忆过去事件(贴合单元核心)
· I still remember + doing sth. + when + 从句 我还记得……时做过某事,例:I still remember cheering for my classmates when they took part in the race.
· One of my most unforgettable memories is + 事件 我最难忘的回忆之一是……,例:One of my most unforgettable memories is the school art festival in Grade 9.
· When I was in Grade ..., I + 过去式 + 事件 当我在……年级时,我……,例:When I was in Grade 7, I made my first good friend at school.
1. 表达感激与收获(贴合单元主题)
· I want to thank + 某人 + for + doing sth. 我想感谢某人做了某事,例:I want to thank my teacher for helping me with my studies.
· This experience taught me that + 道理 这次经历让我明白……,例:This experience taught me that friendship is the most precious thing.
· Thanks to + 某人/某事, I + 现在完成时 + 收获 多亏了……,我……,例:Thanks to my classmates’ support, I have become more brave.
1. 展望未来与毕业祝福(贴合单元内涵)
· As we graduate from junior high, I plan to + 动作 初中毕业之际,我计划……,例:As we graduate from junior high, I plan to join the English club in senior high.
· I’m looking forward to + doing sth. 我期待……,例:I’m looking forward to making new friends and learning more knowledge.
· Wish + 某人 + 祝福 祝愿某人……,例:Wish all teachers healthy and happy, and all classmates a bright future!
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:What’s your most unforgettable junior high memory?;Who do you want to thank most?;How have you changed since Grade 6?;What are your plans for senior high?
· 回答句型:My most unforgettable memory is ...;I want to thank my teacher most because ...;I have become more confident since Grade 6.;I plan to ... in senior high.
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