内容正文:
Unit 9 It’s important to have good habits. 作文学案
【写作导引】
本单元以“It’s important to have good habits”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“健康生活与习惯养成”这一主题群。单元核心聚焦“用英语谈论良好习惯的重要性、对比不同习惯与行为,运用不定式(to do)作主语/宾语及**“the+比较级,the+比较级”句型**,提升健康意识与语言表达能力”,常见写作角度包括:① 介绍自己的好习惯及益处;② 分析不良习惯的危害并提出改进建议;③ 探讨青少年应养成的核心习惯;④ 分享养成好习惯的经历与感悟。所有内容严格贴合课本词汇与句型,突出“实用性”和“指导性”,可直接用于课堂写作教学与练习。
【单元话题】
“我的好习惯与成长”。请用英语写一篇短文,介绍你养成的一个好习惯,说明养成过程、给你带来的益处,词数60-80左右,题目为“A Good Habit That Helps Me Grow”。
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【范文】
A Good Habit That Helps Me Grow
Among all my habits, reading every day is the one that benefits me most.
I started this habit when I was in Grade 6. At first, I read short stories for 15 minutes a day. Gradually, I fell in love with reading and extended the time to 30 minutes. Reading not only broadens my knowledge but also improves my writing skills. When I feel stressed, reading helps me relax. It’s also a great way to learn new words and expressions.
This good habit teaches me persistence and enriches my mind. I believe it will continue to help me grow in the future.
【译文】
助力我成长的一个好习惯
在我所有的习惯中,每天阅读是让我受益最多的一个。
我从六年级开始养成这个习惯,起初每天读15分钟短篇故事,渐渐地我爱上了阅读,把时间延长到了30分钟。阅读不仅拓宽了我的知识面,还提高了我的写作能力。当我感到有压力时,阅读能帮助我放松,也是学习新单词和表达的好方法。
这个好习惯教会我坚持,丰富了我的思想,我相信它会在未来继续助力我成长。
亮点词块
1.benefit sb. most 让某人受益最多
2.start this habit 养成这个习惯
3.fall in love with 爱上
4.extend the time 延长时间
5.broaden one’s knowledge 拓宽知识面
6.improve writing skills 提高写作能力
7.feel stressed 感到有压力
8.learn new words and expressions 学习新单词和表达
9.teach sb. persistence 教会某人坚持
10.enrich one’s mind 丰富某人的思想
高分句子
1.Reading not only broadens my knowledge but also improves my writing skills.(运用“not only...but also...”句型,贴合单元核心表达)
2.It’s important to keep this habit because it helps me become a better person.(用不定式作主语,突出习惯的重要性,符合单元语法重点)
3.The more I read, the more I realize the value of knowledge.(用“the+比较级,the+比较级”句型,增强表达效果,贴合单元语法)
【拓展1】
你的朋友Kim有熬夜玩手机的不良习惯,影响了学习和健康,请你写一封信,劝他改掉这个习惯并给出建议,词数不少于50。
Dear Kim,
Hi! I’m worried about you because I know you often stay up late playing mobile phones. It’s really bad for you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1范文】
Dear Kim,
Hi! I’m worried about you because I know you often stay up late playing mobile phones. It’s really bad for you.
Staying up late makes you tired in class and you can’t focus on your studies. It also harms your eyes and affects your health. To change this habit, you should set a time to put down your phone, like 9:30 p.m. You can read a book or listen to soft music before bed instead. Also, going to bed early and getting enough sleep will make you more energetic the next day.
I hope you can follow these suggestions and develop a good sleeping habit. You’ll feel much better soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【拓展1译文】
亲爱的Kim:
嗨!我很担心你,因为我知道你经常熬夜玩手机,这对你真的很不好。
熬夜会让你在课堂上犯困,无法集中精力学习,还会伤害眼睛、影响健康。要改掉这个习惯,你应该设定放下手机的时间,比如晚上9点半。睡前你可以看书或听舒缓的音乐来替代玩手机。而且,早睡并保证充足睡眠会让你第二天更有精力。
希望你能采纳这些建议,养成良好的睡眠习惯,很快你就会感觉好多了!
你的,
李华
【拓展2】
请根据以下提示,谈谈青少年应养成的核心习惯,词数50左右,开头已给出。
提示
信息
核心习惯
1. 规律锻炼;2. 均衡饮食;3. 主动沟通
理由
1. 锻炼增强体质;2. 健康饮食提供能量;3. 沟通缓解压力
总结
好习惯助力健康成长
For teenagers, developing good habits is crucial for our growth.
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【拓展2范文】
For teenagers, developing good habits is crucial for our growth.
First, we should exercise regularly—it strengthens our bodies and keeps us healthy. Second, eating a balanced diet with more fruits and vegetables provides us with enough energy. Third, talking to parents or friends when we’re upset helps relieve stress. The more we stick to these habits, the healthier and happier we’ll be. Good habits are the key to a bright future.
【拓展2译文】
对青少年来说,养成良好习惯对我们的成长至关重要。
首先,我们应该规律锻炼——它能增强体质、让我们保持健康;其次,均衡饮食,多吃水果蔬菜,能为我们提供充足能量;最后,难过时和父母或朋友沟通,有助于缓解压力。我们越坚持这些习惯,就会越健康快乐。好习惯是美好未来的关键。
本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累
一、核心主题词汇
1.习惯相关(单元重点)
· 好习惯:good habits 好习惯;regular exercise 规律锻炼;balanced diet 均衡饮食;daily reading 每日阅读;get enough sleep 充足睡眠;time management 时间管理;active communication 主动沟通;persistence 坚持
· 不良习惯:bad habits 不良习惯;stay up late 熬夜;play mobile phones too much 过度玩手机;eat junk food 吃垃圾食品;be addicted to 沉迷于;procrastinate 拖延
· 习惯养成:develop/form a habit 养成习惯;stick to a habit 坚持习惯;break a bad habit 改掉坏习惯;gradually 逐渐地;step by step 一步步地
1. 语法相关(单元重点)
· 不定式(to do)用法:
· 作主语:It’s important to do sth. 做某事很重要,例:It’s important to get enough sleep.
· 作宾语:need to do sth. 需要做某事;want to do sth. 想要做某事;decide to do sth. 决定做某事,例:We need to exercise every day.
· “the+比较级,the+比较级”句型:
· 例:The more you exercise, the healthier you’ll be.(你锻炼越多,身体越健康)
· 例:The earlier you go to bed, the better you’ll feel the next day.(你睡得越早,第二天感觉越好)
1. 健康与成长相关(单元基础)
· 健康表达:strengthen the body 增强体质;relieve stress 缓解压力;improve memory 提高记忆力;protect eyes 保护眼睛;provide energy 提供能量;keep fit 保持健康
· 成长表达:broaden knowledge 拓宽知识面;improve skills 提升技能;enrich the mind 丰富思想;promote growth 促进成长;build confidence 建立自信
二、实用句型积累
1.介绍习惯与重要性(贴合单元核心)
· It’s important/necessary for teenagers to do sth. 对青少年来说,做某事很重要/必要,例:It’s necessary for teenagers to eat healthily.
· Developing a good habit helps sb. (to) do sth. 养成好习惯帮助某人做某事,例:Developing a reading habit helps us improve our English.
· I have a good habit of doing sth., which benefits me a lot. 我有做某事的好习惯,这让我受益匪浅,例:I have a good habit of exercising every morning, which benefits me a lot.
1. 分析习惯的影响(贴合单元主题)
· Doing sth. is good for... 做某事对……有好处,例:Eating more vegetables is good for our health.
· Doing sth. is bad for... 做某事对……有害,例:Staying up late is bad for our eyes and brain.
· The more we do sth., the more we will... 我们越做某事,就越会……,例:The more we read, the more knowledge we will gain.
1. 提出建议与总结(贴合单元内涵)
· To develop a good habit, we should... 要养成好习惯,我们应该……,例:To develop a good sleeping habit, we should go to bed early.
· We’d better give up bad habits and stick to good ones. 我们最好戒掉坏习惯,坚持好习惯。
· Good habits are the foundation of a healthy and successful life. 好习惯是健康成功生活的基础。
三、课堂实用句型
· 提问句型:What good habits do you have?;Why is it important to exercise regularly?;How can we break bad habits?;What habits do you think teenagers should develop?
· 回答句型:I have a habit of reading every day.;It’s important because it strengthens our bodies.;We can set small goals to break bad habits.;I think teenagers should develop the habit of time management.
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