Unit 6 Sad movies make me cry. 作文学案 2025-2026学年鲁教版五四学制（2012）英语九年级全册

Unit 6 Sad movies make me cry. 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Sad movies make me cry”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“情绪表达与情感体验”这一主题群。单元核心聚焦“用英语谈论事物对情绪的影响、表达自身感受,运用make + sb. + adj. / make + sb. + do sth. 句型及相关情绪词汇,提升情感表达与逻辑描述能力”,常见写作角度包括:① 描述不同事物(音乐、电影、场景等)对自己情绪的影响;② 分享一次引发强烈情绪的经历及感悟;③ 探讨情绪调节的方法;④ 分析幸福、成功等主题的真正含义。所有内容严格贴合课本词汇与句型,突出“情感性”和“实用性”,可直接用于课堂写作教学与练习。 【单元话题】 “影响我情绪的事物”。请用英语写一篇短文,介绍两种对你情绪影响较大的事物(如音乐、电影、天气等),说明它们如何影响你,词数60-80左右,题目为“The Things That Affect My Mood”。 _ 【范文】 The Things That Affect My Mood Many things around us can influence our mood, and two of them have a great effect on me. Soft piano music always makes me relaxed. When I feel stressed from study, listening to it helps me calm down quickly. On the other hand, rainy days make me a bit sad. The grey sky and wet ground make me want to stay at home and think about unhappy things. However, I’ve learned to cheer myself up by reading books on rainy days. It’s important to understand how things affect us so we can adjust our mood wisely. 【译文】 影响我情绪的事物 我们身边很多事物都会影响情绪,其中有两样对我影响很大。 轻柔的钢琴曲总能让我放松。当我因学习感到压力时,听它能让我快速平静下来。另一方面,雨天会让我有点难过,灰蒙蒙的天空和潮湿的地面让我想待在家里,想起不开心的事。不过,我已经学会在雨天通过看书让自己振作起来。 了解事物如何影响自己很重要,这样我们才能明智地调节情绪。 亮点词块 1.influence our mood 影响我们的情绪 2.have a great effect on 对……有很大影响 3.soft piano music 轻柔的钢琴曲 4.feel stressed from study 因学习感到压力 5.calm down 平静下来 6.grey sky 灰蒙蒙的天空 7.wet ground 潮湿的地面 8.cheer myself up 让自己振作起来 9.adjust our mood 调节情绪 10.wisely 明智地 高分句子 1.Soft piano music always makes me relaxed.(运用“make + sb. + adj.”句型描述情绪影响,贴合单元核心语法) 2.The grey sky and wet ground make me want to stay at home and think about unhappy things.(用“make + sb. + do sth.”句型补充影响,符合单元表达习惯) 3.It’s important to understand how things affect us so we can adjust our mood wisely.(总结观点,升华主题,突出单元内涵) 【拓展1】 你经历过一次因失误而感到沮丧的事,请写一篇短文,描述事情经过、你的情绪变化及从中获得的感悟,词数不少于50。 _ 【拓展1范文】 A Lesson from a Mistake Last month, I missed a key goal in the school soccer final. It made our team lose the game, and I felt really angry with myself. I kept thinking I had let my teammates down, which made me sad and worried for days. Then my father talked to me. He said, “Mistakes make us grow. Don’t be too hard on yourself.” His words made me realize I shouldn’t give up. I apologized to my teammates, and they forgave me. This experience taught me that teamwork is more important than winning, and facing mistakes bravely can make us stronger. 【拓展1译文】 一次失误带来的教训 上个月,我在学校足球决赛中错失了一个关键进球,这导致我们队输掉了比赛,我对自己感到非常生气。我一直觉得自己让队友失望了,这让我难过担忧了好几天。 后来爸爸和我谈了话,他说:“错误让我们成长,别对自己太苛刻。”他的话让我意识到不该放弃。我向队友们道歉,他们原谅了我。这次经历让我明白,团队合作比胜利更重要,勇敢面对错误能让我们变得更强大。 【拓展2】 请根据以下提示,谈谈你对“幸福”的理解,词数50左右,开头已给出。 提示 信息 观点 幸福不在于金钱和名声,而在于简单的小事 具体事例 1. 和家人一起吃饭让我感到温暖;2. 帮助朋友解决困难让我有成就感;3. 努力后取得进步让我快乐 结论 珍惜身边的小事就是幸福 Many people think happiness comes from money and fame, but I don’t agree. _ 【拓展2范文】 Many people think happiness comes from money and fame, but I don’t agree. Happiness is hidden in simple things around us. Eating dinner with my family makes me feel warm and loved. Helping friends solve problems gives me a sense of achievement. When I make progress after hard work, it makes me really happy. In my opinion, cherishing these small things is true happiness. We don’t need much to be happy. 【拓展2译文】 很多人认为幸福来自金钱和名声,但我不这么认为。 幸福隐藏在我们身边的小事中。和家人一起吃晚饭让我感到温暖和被爱;帮助朋友解决困难让我有成就感;当我努力后取得进步时,我会非常开心。在我看来,珍惜这些小事就是真正的幸福,我们不需要太多东西就能感到幸福。 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.情绪与感受(单元重点) 积极情绪:happy 开心的;relaxed 放松的;excited 兴奋的;proud 自豪的;pleased 高兴的;joyful 快乐的;cheerful 愉快的 消极情绪:sad 难过的;nervous 紧张的;angry 生气的;stressed 有压力的;worried 担忧的;unhappy 不开心的;upset 沮丧的;embarrassed 尴尬的 情绪表达:feel like doing 想要做;cheer up 振作起来;calm down 平静下来;be stressed out 压力过大;have a sense of achievement 有成就感;feel warm and loved 感到温暖和被爱 1. 语法相关(单元重点) make 相关句型: make + sb. + adj. 使某人感到……,例:Loud music makes me nervous. make + sb. + do sth. 使某人做某事,例:The movie makes me cry. 被动结构:sb. be made to do sth. 某人被迫做某事,例:He was made to apologize. 其他核心句型: The more ..., the more ... 越……越……,例:The more we help others, the happier we feel. It’s + adj. + to do sth. 做某事是……的,例:It’s important to express our feelings. 1. 影响与感悟(单元基础) 事物影响:influence 影响;affect 影响;have an effect on 对……有影响;change one’s mood 改变某人的情绪;cheer sb. up 让某人振作;let sb. down 让某人失望 感悟表达:realize 意识到;understand 明白;learn a lesson 吸取教训;cherish 珍惜;value 重视;bravely face 勇敢面对;grow from mistakes 从错误中成长 二、实用句型积累 1.描述事物对情绪的影响(贴合单元核心) [事物] makes me + 情绪adj. 某物让我感到……,例:Sunny days make me happy. [事物] makes me want to + 动词原形 某物让我想要……,例:Sad songs make me want to cry. When I + 场景,[事物] helps me + 情绪变化 当我……时,某物帮助我……,例:When I’m tired, quiet music helps me relax. Unlike [事物A], [事物B] makes me + 情绪adj. 不像某物A,某物B让我感到……,例:Unlike scary movies, comedies make me laugh. 1. 分享情绪经历与感悟(贴合单元主题) I once + 经历,which made me + 情绪adj. 我曾经……,这让我感到……,例:I once failed an exam, which made me worried. At first, I felt + 情绪adj., but later + 转变 起初我感到……,但后来……,例:At first, I felt upset, but later my friends cheered me up. This experience taught me that + 道理 这次经历让我明白……,例:This experience taught me that persistence brings success. In my opinion, the key to + 情绪调节 is to + 做法 在我看来,……的关键是……,例:In my opinion, the key to staying happy is to cherish small things. 1. 表达观点与结论(贴合单元内涵) I think / In my opinion, + 观点 我认为……,例:In my opinion, happiness comes from daily life. It’s not + 事物 + that makes us + 情绪, but + 事物 不是……让我们感到……,而是……,例:It’s not money that makes us happy, but love and friendship. We should learn to + 做法 to deal with + 情绪 我们应该学会……来应对……,例:We should learn to communicate to deal with sadness. 三、课堂实用句型 提问句型:What makes you happy/ sad/ nervous?;How does music affect your mood?;What do you usually do to cheer yourself up?;Do you think money can make people happy? 回答句型:Soft music makes me relaxed.;Loud noise makes me angry.;I usually listen to music to cheer myself up.;No, I don’t. Because happiness comes from simple things. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $