2026年中考英语作文热点素材 part 15 购物与天气

该初中英语学习任务单聚焦购物与天气两大中考写作核心主题，构建“词汇-句型-篇章”三级知识体系，通过范文解析、炫词归类、酷句赏析及开头/中间/结尾好句分类，系统梳理写作要素，引导学生自主完成“主题词汇积累-经典句型仿写-篇章结构搭建”递进任务，建立完整写作知识网络。 亮点在于“主题素材模块化”和“能力训练阶梯化”设计，如提供“购物经历词汇表”“天气描写句型库”等自测工具，学生可通过好句填空、酷句改写等活动自主诊断薄弱点，培养语言能力与思维品质。教师可依据学生仿写作品调整教学重点，支持个性化复习，助力提升自主写作与应试能力。

初中英语作文热点素材 part 15 购物与天气 I Like Shopping I'm a junior high school student from Jiangxi. In my spare time, I like shopping. There is a supermarket in my town. Lots of things are being sold there. So I often go there with my mother to buy school things, food and drinks. Of course, sometimes I want to buy something expensive. An iPad is what I want most, but I can't afford it now. I'm going to work for an English club during this summer holiday and make some money for it. We teenagers should not always ask our parents for money. As for shopping online, I like it, because things there are much cheaper and I didn't need to walk to the shop, which helps me save time. No matter where to shop, I enjoy it because it's really relaxing. 炫词 of course当然 afford买得起 as for至于 shopping online网上购物 no matter where无论在哪里 酷句 As for shopping online, I like it, because things there are much cheaper and I didn't need to walk to the shop, which helps me save time. 至于网上购物, 我喜欢它, 因为有便宜得多的东西而且我不必步行到商店去, 这样帮我节省时间。 （because things there are much cheaper and I didn't need to walk to the shop, which helps me save time. 是原因状语从句, 其中which helps me save time是非限制性定语从句。） 译文 我喜欢购物 我是一名来自江西的初中生。在我空闲时间, 我喜欢购物。我在的小镇上有一家超市, 销售很多东西。所以我经常和妈妈去那里买学习用品、食物和饮料。 当然, 有时候我想买一些贵重的东西。iPad是我最想要的, 但是我现在买不起。在这个暑假期间为了买它我要去一个英语俱乐部打工挣钱。我们青少年不应该总是向我们的父母要钱。 至于网上购物, 我喜欢它, 因为有便宜得多的东西而且我不必步行到商店去, 这样可帮我节省时间。不管在哪里购物, 我都喜欢, 因为它确实使我很放松。 The Weather Report Here is the weather report for the next 24 hours in Qinghai. Xining will be rainy and the lowest temperature will fall to fourteen again. The highest temperature is twenty-six. A strong wind will reach Ge, ermu and the temperature will be ten to twenty. There will be cloudy in Delingha. It'll stay above zero and the temperature will be nine to eighteen. There will snow in Yushu. It will be quite cold and the temperature will be below zero. The weather in Qinghai Lake will be sunny. Its temperature will be thirteen to twenty-one. It's a beautiful place for people to go there in summer. 炫词 temperature温度, 气温 above超过, 在……以上 below 在下面, 低于 酷句 Xining will be rainy and the lowest temperature will fall to fourteen again. 西宁将会有雨, 最低温度将会重新跌至14度。 （连词and表示前后句是并列关系, 使前后句连贯。） 译文 天气预报 现在是青海未来24小时的天气预报。西宁将会有雨, 最低温度将会重新跌至14度, 最高温度是26度。大风会到达格尔木, 气温将会是10到20度。德令哈将会多云, 温度在0度以上, 气温将会是9到18度。玉树会下雪, 天气很冷, 气温将会在0度以下。青海湖的天气将会是晴天。它的气温将会是13到21度。对人们来说, 它是夏季的一个好去处。 Money is a good servant but a bad master. 要做金钱的主人, 莫做金钱的奴隶。 好句 ∗开头句∗ 1.I went to the market near my home to buy some fruits one morning. 一天早上我去我家附近的集市买水果。 2.In spring, the climate is mild and the air is invigorating. 春天, 气候温和, 空气清爽宜人。 3.One day, it was so hot that I felt as if I was in a food steamer though the electric fan was on. 一天天气很热, 尽管家里的电扇开着, 我还是感到好像在蒸笼里。 4.It gradually turns cool. The sunlight is no longer so strong and the cicadae have stopped crying. 天气逐渐变冷了, 阳光也不那么强烈, 蝉也停止了鸣叫。 5.It snowed last night. This morning everything outside was covered with snow. 昨晚下了一场雪。今早外面一片银装素裹。 ∗中间句∗ 1.It was a very busy time in the market. 集市很繁忙。 2.I forced my way to the fruits stall, and sorted out some good apples and bananas. 我用力挤到水果摊前, 挑选了一些很不错的苹果和香蕉。 3.After you leave your hotel, walk straight along the High Street till you come to a flower shop on the right, where you can buy some flowers. 离开旅馆后, 沿着高速路直走直到走到你右手边的一个花店, 你可以在那里买花。 4.Opposite the flower shop is a fruit shop. There you can get different kinds of fruits. 花店对面是一个水果店, 你可以在那里买各种水果。 5.In summer, you can buy tomatoes everywhere. 夏天, 在任何地方都能买到西红柿。 6.In winter, tomatoes are fewer, but you can still buy them on the market. 在冬天, 西红柿相对少一些, 但在市场上还是可以买到的。 7.And to my great sadness, I could not afford to buy one. 而且最令我伤心的是我买不起它。 8.With money, we can buy many things indeed, but we can't buy knowledge, precious time, true love and so on. 金钱能买到许多东西, 但买不到知识, 也买不到宝贵的时间、真正的爱情等。 9.These are the most precious things in the world. If a person has none of them, he is still poor, though he has a great deal of money. 这些都是世界上最宝贵的东西。这些宝贵的东西, 如果一个人一样都没有, 纵然再有钱, 他也是贫穷的。 10.As is shown in the graph, people buy fewer shoes as the price of shoes goes up. 就像图中显示一样, 鞋价上涨, 销售量下降。 11.On the contrary, a decrease in the price causes an increase in demand. 相反, 价格下降, 买鞋的人增多。 12.It is getting cool at dusk. The wind blows, the moonlight shines on the ground, the frogs croak and insects chirp in the fields. 黄昏时分, 天气越来越凉爽, 微风轻拂, 月光轻轻洒在地面上。青蛙呱呱的叫声, 和田间昆虫啾唧之声混合在一起。 13.One day he had a letter with a wrong address to send, and it happened to be raining heavily outside. But he set out without hesitation. 一天, 他有一封地址不详的信要送, 碰巧天正下着大雨, 他毫不迟疑地就出发了。 14.After school, Li Hua and Wang Ming were doing homework when suddenly the rain poured down. 放学后, 李华和王明正在写作业, 突然大雨瓢泼而下。 15.Strong branches and thick leaves of the huge tree kept the family safe from the wind and rain. 大树茂密的枝叶为小棚屋挡风遮雨。 16.When there is a strong wind, the webs are often broken, but spiders still go on building their“bridges”. They are not afraid of difficulties. 当有大风吹来的时候, 蜘蛛网就会被刮坏, 但蜘蛛继续建造它们的“架桥”, 它们不怕困难。 17.A cool wind came through the window and kissed my face tenderly. 凉爽的清风从窗户吹进来, 轻柔地亲吻着我的脸。 18.After a heave snow, the trees and flowers in the park were covered with snow as if they were made of jade. 大雪过后, 公园里玉树琼花。 19.Dark clouds were gathering in the sky. Heavy rain would come soon. 乌云密布, 大雨就要来临。 20.The clear and boundless sky is as blue as the calm sea. 天上晴空万里, 蓝得像平静的大海。 ∗结尾句∗ 1.After paying for them, I came back home from the market. 付了账后, 我就从市场回家了。 2.I think the market is really an interesting place. 我觉得市场真是个吸引人的地方。 3.And strong winds blew away the roofs of both the old and new cabins, because the tree was no longer there to protect the place from the wind. 来了一场暴风雨。因为没有大树的阻挡, 大风吹走了新旧两间棚屋的屋顶。 好段 My wife, Beth, is a born shopper. She loves to look at the things and to touch them. She loves to compare prices between the same items in different stores. She will never think of buying anything without looking around in several stores. On the other hand, I'm not a shopper. I regard shopping as boring and unpleasant. If I like something and can afford it, I buy instantly. I never take the time to look around for a good sell or for better deal. Bargains don't interest me. Needless to say, Beth and I never go shopping together. Experience will be painful for both of us. When we come to a shop, we go our separate ways. 点评 本段讲述了一对夫妻, 在购物时有着不同的习惯, 所以每次去购物, 都是各自去买各自的东西。句中固定搭配的用法恰如其分, 如look at, think of, regard. . . as, look around 等；另 外, 连 接 词on the other hand的应用也十分巧妙。 译文 我妻子, 贝丝, 是一个天生的购物者。她喜欢边看边摸商品。她喜欢把在不同商店中的同种货物的价格进行比较。她不看好几个商店是不会想到买它们的。 另一方面我不太喜欢购物, 我认为购物既枯躁又令人不愉快。如果我喜欢某个东西而且能买得起, 我立刻就买。我从不为了更低的价格或更好的交易而花时间去到处逛。我不喜欢讨价还价。更不用说, 我和贝丝从来不一块儿买东西。对我们两个人来说, 那些经历是痛苦的。当我们来到商店时, 我们分开走各自的路。 ∗∗∗∗∗ The market was full of people. They were jostling with each other in front of the stalls. Everywhere people were buying, selling and bargaining. Some people looked very pleased with themselves, having made a good bargain. I could hear all kinds of noises in the market. Some vendors were shouting to attract passing-by customers, while other stood bargaining and haggling for prices with customers. Business was booming in the meat stalls and some sellers just kept on cutting out pieces of meat to the amounts the customers asked for. 点评 本段采用总分的写法描写集市。运用了jostling with each other, having made a good bargain, keep on cutting out. . . 等句子。把买东西的人和卖东西的人的动作描写得很细致。 译文 整个市场都挤满了人, 他们在货架前推推挤挤。到处都是买东西、卖东西、讨价还价的人, 有些人因买到了廉价商品而对自己很满意, 我听着市场上的各种噪声。一些小贩大声叫卖以吸引过路人, 而另外的一些则站在那儿与顾客讨价还价, 肉摊上生意兴隆, 卖主不停地按照顾客要的数量砍下肉。 ∗∗∗∗∗ I work at the Hanwen Bookstore on Shengli Road. You often come there buy books. The other day when you bought a dictionary at our bookstore, I made a mistake about the price. You looked at two different dictionaries, one costing 50 yuan and the other 31 yuan. You took the 31-yuan one but I accepted 50 yuan from you. I didn't find out my mistake until you had left. Will you please come to the bookstore to get your change or to return your dictionary and get a 50-yuan edition instead?I apologize to you. 点评 本段是一封道歉信。时间状语从句until的运用是本段的成功之处。本段还较好地运用了make a mistake犯错误, apologize to（向……道歉）等短语。 译文 我在胜利路翰文书店工作, 您经常在那儿买书。几天前, 您来买字典时, 在价格上我出了错, 您看了两本不同的字典, 一本50元而另一本是31元。您拿走了31元, 我却收了您50元。您走后我才发现错误。请您来书店把零钱拿回去或者换50元的那种版本好吗？ 我向您道歉。 ∗∗∗∗∗ I bought your peeler on October 18, 2012 in Big Red Gate Supermarket. That night when I used it to peel carrots for supper, I discovered that it was too dull to remove peels. I tried to return the peeler to the supermarket the following day. Although I showed the clerk Mr. Li the 90 days guarantee and my sales receipt, he refused to refund my money. I am unable to use this peeler for carrots. I have enclosed copies of the sales receipt, the 90 days guarantee. I would like the＄2, 70 plus tax, refunded within the next two weeks. 点评 本段是一篇投诉信, 语言精炼。写这类信时, 要注意言辞不能过于激烈, 要提出解决问题的建议, 态度要坚定而彬彬有礼。 译文 我于2012年10月18日在大红门超市买了这个削皮器。当晚, 当我用它来削胡萝卜皮准备晚饭时, 我发现它太钝了, 削不下皮来。第二天, 我到这个超市退货。尽管我给店员李先生看了90天的保修单和购物收据, 他仍然拒绝退钱。我不能使用削皮器来削胡萝卜。 我寄上了购物收据及90天的保修单。我要求在两周内退还我的2.70美元及附加税。 ∗∗∗∗∗ Maybe you forget you had spent the money on something else yesterday afternoon. It's also possible a pickpocket stole your money while you were shopping. Or maybe you lost it on your way home. And the last possibility is you haven't lost it at all― You put it on a different jacket this morning, and you happened to leave 10 yuan in the jacket earlier. So the missing money must be still in the other jacket, the one you were wearing yesterday! 点评 本段语言通顺, 用词恰当。运用and, so, or等词使文章衔接更显自然, 条理清晰。 译文 昨天下午, 你也许买了别的东西把钱花了又忘了。也许在你买东西的时候, 小偷偷了你的钱。或者也许在回家的路上钱掉了。最后一种可能是钱根本就没有丢失。今天早上你换了夹克衫, 你碰巧把10元钱先装入衣袋。其余的钱一定仍在昨天穿的那件衣服的口袋里。 ∗∗∗∗∗ Today I took a walk with mother in the small garden. Although it is sunny in March, it's still very cold. All was bare in the garden, a view of the last days of winter. 点评 本段描述与母亲在小花园里散步时看到的风景。用词较为考究, 行文流畅, 使一个很有文学气息的小孩的形象跃然纸上。文中运用了连词although, 使文章的表达流畅。a view of the last days of winter丰富了文章的表达方式。 译文 今天我和妈妈在小花园里散步。3月份的天气虽然阳光很好, 但还是很冷。小花园里的一切还是光秃秃的, 一幅残冬的景象。 ∗∗∗∗∗ I was very excited because it had been a long time since I saw such a heavy snowfall. So I decided to call my friends to go out to play with snow together. We made some snowmen and rolled some snowballs and we enjoyed the fun of playing fighting games. Just then we noticed that the buses and cars moved very slowly because of the heavy snow. So we went to clean the snow so as to help the traffic go safely. After the whole morning's hard work, we cleaned the snow on the road, and we went home happily. 点评 本段叙述了打雪仗、清扫路上的雪的过程, 文中运用了that引导的宾语从句, because引导的原因状语从句, 还有连接词so, just then连接句子, 全文层次分明, 描写生动。 译文 很久没下这么大的雪了, 我非常激动。于是, 我决定喊上朋友们一起出去玩雪。我们堆了一些雪人, 滚了一些雪球, 沉浸在打雪仗的乐趣之中。就在这时, 我们注意到因为大雪, 车辆行驶得很慢, 于是就去清扫路上的雪帮助车辆安全通行。经过一整个早晨的努力, 我们清扫了路上的积雪, 然后高高兴兴地回了家。 ∗∗∗∗∗ If seasons have colors, spring is green. When spring comes, willow trees begin to bud, and the grass stretches its head out of the land. It is really a green world. It is also the color of hope. What about summer? When I look at flowers of almost all kinds in blossom, I understand that summer is the red color like fire. Comparing with summer, autumn is another kind of color. The corn in the fields and fruits on the branches are the colors of autumn. It is the color filled with ripeness. Golden is the symbol of harvest. Winter is the world of snow. All the land is covered with silver white snow. Flying snowflakes are the color of winter. 点评 本段运用willow trees, green world, blossom, the color filled with ripeness, covered with silver white snow 等大量的词汇描写了四季的典型景色, 观察细致, 描述准确贴切。 译文 如果季节有色彩, 春天就是绿色的。春天来到时, 柳树发芽, 小草钻出地面。这真是个绿色的世界。这也是个充满希望的色彩。 夏季是什么色彩呢？ 当我看到各种各样的花竞相开放时, 我感到夏季是红色的, 像火一样。 与夏季相比, 秋季是另一种色彩。田野里的稻谷和树枝上的果实都是秋季的色彩。秋季是果实成熟的季节金色是丰收的象征。 冬季是雪的世界, 大地上铺着银白色的雪, 飘飞的雪花是冬季的色彩。 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $