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选择性必修4人教版
【寒假专版】C版写作高级词句
寒假专版
【C版高级词句】科幻小说创作(时间胶囊
与机器人朋友)
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范文一高级词句
一、高级词汇
time capsule //'tam kcepsju:l//
含义:时间胶囊
搭配:discover a time capsule发现一个时间胶囊;create a time capsule制作一个时间胶囊
ruins∥r:c/∥
含义:废墟:遗迹
搭配:old city ruins古城废墟;explore the ruins探索废墟
hologram∥'hplagreem/
含义:全息图:全息影像
搭配:a hologram appeared出现一个全息影像;portable holographic recorder便携式全息记录仪
glowing∥'glay∥
含义:发光的:发亮的
搭配:glowing blue symbols发光的蓝色符号;glowing lights发光的灯光
harmony
∥'ha:nani/∥
含义:和谐:融洽
搭配:live in harmony和谐共处:harmony between people and nature人与自然的和谐
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restore /r'sto:r/∥
含义:恢复;修复
搭配:environment had been restored环境已被修复;restore the old building修复建筑
solar panels∥'saula poenal∥
含义:太阳能电池板
搭配:flying cars with solar panels带太阳能电池板的飞行汽车;install solar panels安装太阳能电池
板
portable∥pp:tabl/
含义:便携式的:手提的
搭配:portable holographic recorder便携式全息记录仪:portable device便携式设备
generation Idsena rerfnll
含义:一代人:代
搭配:your generation你们这一代人;the younger generation年轻一代
二、高级句型&万能模板句型
When he touched it,a hologram suddenly appeared-a video message from a girl about his age.
中文意思:当他触摸它时,一个全息影像突然出现一一段来自一个和他年龄相仿的女孩的视频信
息。
模板亮点:whe引导时间状语从句,破折号补充说明,用于描述动作发生时的意外发现
In my world,we worried a lot about climate change and pollution.But we also dreamed about a
better future.
中文意思:在我的世界里,我们非常担心气候变化和污染。但我们也梦想着一个更美好的未来。
模板亮点:but连接转折关系,用于表达对比或相反的情况
Using his portable holographic recorder,he showed Mia his city-flying cars with solar panels,
buildings covered in green plants,and children playing in parks with clear lakes.
中文意思:他用便携式全息记录仪向米娅展示了他的城市—带有太阳能电池板的飞行汽车、被绿
色植物覆盖的建筑物,以及在有清澈湖泊的公园里玩耍的孩子们。
模板亮点:usg现在分词作状语,破折号后用并列结构列举具体事物,用于详细描述场景
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As Leo wrote his letter,he realized that the future was built by the choices we make today.
中文意思:当利奥写信时,他意识到未来是由我们今天所做的选择构建的。
模板亮点:s引导时间状语从句,hat引导宾语从句,用于表达在某个过程中的感悟或认识
Together,they decided to create their own time capsule,filled with stories of their world,so that
someone in the future could know about their lives too.
中文意思:他们一起决定制作自己的时间胶囊,里面装满他们世界的故事,以便未来的人也能了解
他们的生活。
模板亮点:filled with过去分词短语作定语,so that引导目的状语从句,用于表达做某事的目的和
具体内容
In the year 2142,15-year-old Leo discovered a strange metal box while exploring the old city ruins near
his home.The box was covered with glowing blue symbols that seemed to move like flowing water.
When he touched it,a hologram suddenly appeared-a video message from a girl about his age.
"Hello,future friend,"she said with a smile."My name is Mia,and I lived in 2023.If you're watching
this,you've found our time capsule.In my world,we worried a lot about climate change and pollution.
But we also dreamed about a better future.I hope you're living in a world where people and nature live
in harmony."
Leo was shocked.In his time,the environment had been restored,and clean energy powered everything.
He decided to send a message back.Using his portable holographic recorder,he showed Mia his city-
flying cars with solar panels,buildings covered in green plants,and children playing in parks with clear
lakes.
"I want to thank you,"Leo said."Your generation worked hardto change things.Now we're living your
dream.”
When he finished recording,the time capsule hummed and disappeared,taking hismessage back to 2023
Leo smiled,knowing that even across time,people were connected by hope.
The next day,Leo told his classmates about the time capsule.Together,they decided to create their own
time capsule,filled with stories of their world,so that someone in the future could know about their lives
too.As Leo wrote his letter,he realized that the future was built by the choices we make today.
范文二高级词句
一、高级词汇
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expressive /k'spresr∥
含义:富有表现力的:表达清晰的
搭配:expressive eyes富有表情的眼睛;an expressive face表情丰富的脸
hologram∥'hplagrce∥
含义:全息图;全息影像
搭配:a hologram of planets行星的全息影像;show a hologram展示全息图
built-.in∥bilt m//
含义:内置的:嵌入式的
搭配:built-in flashlight内置手电筒;built-in drill内置钻头
rescuer∥e.skju:a∥
含义:救援者;救助者
搭配:praised by rescuers被救援者称赞;search and rescue rescuers搜救救援人员
explore /hk'spl:∥
含义:探索:探究
搭配:explore parks探索公园;explore space探索太空
二、高级句型&万能模板句型
Unlike other robots that only followed orders,K-9 could learn emotions and even tell jokes.
中文意思:与其他只会服从命令的机器人不同,K-9能够学习情感,甚至会讲笑话。
模板亮点:Unlike.that.对比句型,用于突出事物的独特性
英文:Mistakes are like stars in the sky—they help us find the right path at night.
中文意思:错误就像天空中的星星一它们帮助我们在夜晚找到正确的道路。
模板亮点:…are like..比喻句型,用熟悉事物解释抽象概念
K-9 used its built-in flashlight and drill to make a small hole in the door
中文意思:K-9用它的内置手电筒和钻头在门上钻了一个小孔。
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模板亮点:use..to do sth.表达工具用途,清晰说明动作与目的
True friendship wasn't about being human or robot-it was about caring and being there for each
other.
中文意思:真正的友谊无关于是人类还是机器人一它关乎关怀和彼此陪伴。
模板亮点:wasn't about..一it was about.强调句型,突出核心观点
In 2077,14-year-old Lila received a special birthday gift from her parents-a small robot named K-9
with a round body and big,expressive eyes.Unlike other robots that only followed orders,K-9 could
learn emotions and even tell jokes.
One rainy day,Lila was sad because she failed a science test.K-9rolled over,blinked its eyes softly,and
said,"Mistakes are like stars in the sky-they help us find the right path at night."Then it showed
her a hologram of planets,explaining space facts in a funny way.Lila laughed and forgot her sadness.
Weeks later,a strong earthquake hit their city.The power went out,and Lila wastrapped in her room.K-9
used its built-in flashlight and drill to make a small hole in the door."Follow me!"it said,leading
her through the dark hallway safely.Outside,rescuers praised K-9 for saving Lila.
Are you just a machine?"Lila asked K-9 that night.
"I'm your friend,"K-9replied,its eyes glowing warm yellow."Friendshelp each other,now and always."
From then on,Lila and K-9 explored parks,solved math problems,and even planted a garden together.
Lila realized that true friendship wasn't about being human or robot-it was about caring and being
there for each other.
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