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选择性必修3沪教版(上外版)
【寒假专版】C版写作高级词句
寒假专版
【话题3】写短文分享珍贵的友谊故事
写作提分攻略·沪教版(上外版)选择性必修3
范文一高级词句
一、高级词汇
transfer
/trcens f:(r)/
含义:转学:转移
搭配:transfer to a new school转学到新学校;transfer to another class转到另一个班
adapt /a'dcept/
含义:适应
搭配:adapt to the new environment适应新环境;adapt to life适应生活
struggle /'stragl/
含义:挣扎:努力:艰难地做
搭配:struggle with math数学学习有困难;struggle to do sth.努力做某事
hesitation hezr'terfn/
含义:犹豫
搭配:without hesitation毫不犹豫:have hesitation in doing sth.做某事有犹豫
grateful /'grertfl/
含义:感激的
搭配:be grateful to sb.对某人感激:be grateful for sth.因某事而感激
cherish /'tferif
含义:珍惜:珍爱
搭配:cherish friendship珍惜友谊;cherish every moment珍惜每一刻
选择性必修3沪教版(上外版)
【寒假专版】
C版写作高级词句
二、高级句型&万能模板句型
My most precious friendship began in Grade 7 when I transferred to a new school.
中文意思:我最珍贵的友谊始于七年级,当时我转学到了一所新学校。
模板亮点:began.when.用于引出故事发生的时间和背景,使叙事更有条理
She helped me adapt to the new environment by introducing me to her friends and explaining the
school rules
中文意思:她通过把我介绍给她的朋友以及解释学校规则,帮助我适应新环境。
模板亮点:help sb.do sth.by doing sth.结构,清晰表达帮助的方式和内容
When I struggled with math,she spent her lunch breaks teaching me patiently.
中文意思:当我数学学习遇到困难时,她花午休时间耐心地教我。
模板亮点:When.,sb.spent.doing sth.描述特定情境下的行为,体现人物品质
Lily visited me every weekend,bringing me my favorite books and homework notes.
中文意思:莉莉每个周末都来看我,给我带来我最喜欢的书和作业笔记。
模板亮点:主句+现在分词短语结构,丰富句子层次,补充说明伴随动作
Friendship is like a bright light that guides us through dark times.
中文意思:友谊就像一盏明灯,指引我们度过黑暗的时光。
模板亮点:.is like..hat.运用比喻修辞,使抽象概念更形象生动,适合结尾升华主题
I am grateful to have such a precious friend in my life,and I will cherish this friendship forever.
中文意思:我很感激在我的生命中有这样一位珍贵的朋友,我会永远珍惜这份友谊。
模板亮点:I am grateful to..and I will..表达感激之情并表明未来的态度,用于总结情感和决心
My most precious friendship began in Grade 7 when I transferred to a new school.It was my first
day,and I felt nervous standing alone in the classroom.Suddenly,a girl with a warm smile walked up to
me and said,"Hi,I'm Lily.You must be the new student.Let me show you around."
Lily became my first friend in the new school.She helped me adapt to the new environment by
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选择性必修3沪教版(上外版)
【寒假专版】
C版写作高级词句
introducing me to her friends and explaining the school rules.When I struggled with math,she
spent her lunch breaks teaching me patiently.Once,I forgot my lunch at home,and she shared her
meal with me without hesitation.
Last year,I had a serious illness and had to stay in the hospital for a month.Lily visited me every
weekend,bringing me my favorite books and homework notes.She even recorded the lessons I
missed so that I wouldn't fall behind.Her care and support made me feel so during that difficult
time.
Friendship is like a bright light that guides us through dark times.Lily has taught me the true
meaning of friendship:it's about trust,support,and being there for each other.I am grateful to have
such a precious friend in my life,and I will cherish this friendship forever.
范文二高级词句
一、高级词汇
assigned /a 'samd/
含义:分配:指派
搭配:be assigned to被分配给;assigned to the same group被分到同一组
anxiety
lcey zarati/
含义:焦虑:忧虑
搭配:feel anxiety感到焦虑;notice my anxiety注意到我的焦虑
gently
/'d3entli/
含义:温和地:轻柔地
搭配:said gently温和地说;smile gently温柔地微笑
formulas
/为:rmjala/
含义:公式(formula的复数)
搭配:physics formulas物理公式;understand formulas理解公式
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选择性必修3沪教版(上外版)
【寒假专版】C版写作高级词句
diagrams /'daragrcm/
含义:图表:图解
搭配:draw diagrams画图表:help with diagrams通过图表帮助
twisted /'trstrd/
含义:扭伤:扭曲
搭配:twisted my ankle扭伤脚踝;twisted while running跑步时扭伤
encouraging /m'ks:nd3m/
含义:鼓励的:振奋人心的
搭配:encouraging words鼓励的话语;handwritten encouraging notes手写的鼓励便条
treasure /tre3ar/
含义:珍惜:珍视
搭配:treasure friendship珍惜友谊;treasure it all my life一生珍视它
二、高级句型&万能模板句型
英文:I will always remember the day I met Tom in Grade8.
中文意思:我永远记得八年级遇到汤姆的那一天。
模板亮点:will always remember the day+定语从句,用于开篇回忆关键事件
英文:Tom noticed my anxiety and said gently,'Don'twoy,we can do this together:.”
中文意思:汤姆注意到我的焦虑,温和地说:“别担心,我们可以一起做。”
模板亮点:notice+情绪名词+said gently+直接引语,生动描写人物互动
When I had trouble understanding physics formulas,he would draw diagrams to help me.
中文意思:当我难以理解物理公式时,他会画图表帮助我。
模板亮点:When.had trouble doing sth,sb.would do sth.to help,用于描述朋友互助场景
He said,"True friendship isn't about being together every day,but about caring for each other no
matter the distance.”
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选择性必修3沪教版(上外版)
【寒假专版】
C版写作高级词句
中文意思:他说:“真正的友谊不在于每天在一起,而在于无论距离多远都互相关心。”
模板亮点:引用名言'isn't about..but about..”,增强文章哲理深度
Tom has taught me that a good friend is like a mirror-helping you see your strengths and weaknesses.
中文意思:汤姆教会我,好朋友就像一面镜子一帮助你看到自己的优点和缺点。
模板亮点:teach sb.hat+比喻句+现在分词作状语,用于总结友谊的意义
I will always remember the day I met Tom in Grade 8.We were assigned to the same group for a
science project,and I was worried because I'm not good at experiments.Tom noticed my anxiety and
said gently,"Don't worry,we can do this together."
From that day on,Tom and I became close friends.Every afternoon,we would study in the library.
When I had trouble understanding physics formulas,he would draw diagrams to help me.During
the school sports meet,I twisted my ankle while running.Tom carried my books to the classroom every
day and helped me take notes in class.
Last summer,my family moved to another city.I was sad to leave Tom.On the day I left,he gave
me a notebook with all our memories:photos of our project,ticket stubs from the science museum we
visited,andhis handwritten notes with encouraging words.He said,"True friendship isn't about being
together every day,but about caring for each other no matter the distance."
Now we keep in touch by video call every weekend.Tom has taught me that a good friend is like a
mirror-helping you see your strengths and weaknesses.This friendship has made me a better person,
and I will treasure it all my life.
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