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必修2沪教牛津版
【寒假专版】C版写作高级词句
寒假专版
【C版高级词句】创作记叙文记录一次突破
自我的成长经历
写作提分攻略·必修2沪教牛津版
范文一高级词句
一、
高级词汇
challenge∥'t/elds/
含义:挑战
搭配:face a big challenge面临巨大挑战:take on challenges接受挑战
public speaking∥p.blrh'spi:ay/∥
含义:公众演讲
搭配:be nervous about public speaking对公众演讲感到紧张;practice public speaking练习公众演讲
opportunity
∥.vpa tju:nati/l
含义:机会
搭配:take this opportunity抓住这个机会:agood opportunity一个好机会
passionate
∥ocefanat/∥
含义:热情的:热衷的
搭配:feel passionate about对…充满热情:a passionate speech一场充满激情的演讲
tremble∥trembl//
含义:颤抖:发抖
搭配:voice trembled声音颤抖:hands tremble手发抖
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encourage/m kaid3∥
含义:鼓励:激励
搭配:encourage sb.to do sth.鼓励某人做某事;reccive encouragement得到鼓励
audience∥b:dias/∥
含义:观众:听众
搭配:look at the audience看着观众:the audience clapped观众鼓掌
accomplishment //a kunplr/inant//
含义:成就感;成就
搭配:a sense of accomplishment成就感;great accomplishment伟大的成就
confident //kunfidant//
含义:自信的
搭配:be confident to do sth.有信心做某事;feel confident感到自信
overcome
∥ama'ku/∥
含义:克服:战胜
搭配:overcome oneself战胜自己;overcome fears克服恐惧
二、高级句型&万能模板句型
Public speaking had always made me nervous,but I decided to take this opportunity to break through
my limits.
中文意思:公众演讲一直让我感到紧张,但我决定抓住这个机会突破自我。
模板亮点:but连接转折关系,表达面对困难时的决心,适用于描述挑战与应对
英文:To prepare,I practiced every day after school.
中文意思:为了准备,我每天放学后都练习。
模板亮点:T0+动词原形表目的,简洁说明行动目的,适用于介绍准备过程
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As I shared my ideas about protecting our planet,I forgot my nervousness.
中文意思:当我分享关于保护地球的想法时,我忘记了紧张。
模板亮点:As引导时间状语从句,描述行动过程中的状态变化,增强叙事连贯性
This experience taught me that facing our fears can lead to amazing growth.
中文意思:这次经历教会我,直面恐惧能带来惊人的成长。
模板亮点:teach sb.hat.引出从经历中获得的感悟,适用于总结经验教训
Remember,the biggest enemy is yourself,and overcoming yourself is the greatest success.
中文意思:记住,最大的敌人是自己,战胜自己才是最大的成功。
模板亮点:and连接并列句,用排比结构强调观点,适用于结尾升华主题
Last semester,I faced a big challenge when my teacher asked me to give a speech in front of the whole
school.Public speaking had always made me nervous,but I decided to take this opportunity to
(break through my limits).
To prepare,I practiced every day after school.I wrote my speech about environmental protection,a topic
I felt passionate about.At first,my hands shook and my voice trembled when I practiced in front of my
family.My mother encouraged me,saying,"Believe in yourself,and you'll do great!"
On the day of the speech,I stood backstage,feeling both excited and scared.When it was my turn,I
walked onto the stage and looked at the audience.Taking a deep breath,I began speaking.As I shared
my ideas about protecting our planet,I forgot my nervousness.The audience listened carefully,and some
even nodded in agreement.
When I finished,everyone clapped loudly.I felt a sense of pride and accomplishment I had never expe-
rienced before.This experience taught me that facing our fears can lead to amazing growth.Now,I'm
more confident to try new things and challenge myself.Remember,the biggest enemy is yourself,and
overcoming yourself is the greatest success.
范文二高级词句
一、高级词汇
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conquer∥'wkar)∥
含义:征服:克服
搭配:conquer fear克服恐惧;conquer the swimming pool征服泳池
afraid /a frerd/l
含义:害怕的:恐惧的
搭配:afraid of deep water害怕深水;be afraid to do sth.害怕做某事
drown
Ildraun/l
含义:淹没:溺亡
搭配:almost drown差点溺水;d山rown in a lake在湖里溺水
courage∥'kwad3∥
含义:勇气;胆量
搭配:give me courage给我勇气;have the courage to do sth.有勇气做某事
harmony
/'ha:ai/∥
含义:协调:和谐
搭配:in harmony协调地;move in harmony协调地移动
glide
Iglard/l
含义:滑行:滑动
搭配:glide through the water在水中滑行;glide forward向前滑行
absence∥'cebsans/
含义:缺乏;不存在
搭配:the absence of fear没有恐惧;in the absence of在缺乏…的情况下
二、高级句型&万能模板句型
For years,I was afraid of deep water because I almost drowned in a lake when I was little.
中文意思:多年来,我一直害怕深水,因为小时候我差点在湖里溺水。
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模板亮点:for years描述时间跨度,because引导原因状语从句,when I was little交代过去背景,适
用于解释长期状态的成因
After hours of practice,I could finally stay afloat for ten seconds.
中文意思:经过几个小时的练习,我终于能漂浮十秒钟了。
模板亮点:after+-名词短语表时间,could finally体现过程后的结果,适用于描述努力后的初步成就
英文:The hardest part was learning to kick and move forward.
中文意思:最难的部分是学习踢腿和向前移动。
模板亮点:the hardest part was..点明过程中的难点,动名词短语作表语,适用于分析任务中的挑战
英文:But every time I thought about giving up,I remembered my goal.
中文意思:但每当我想放弃的时候,我就想起了我的目标。
模板亮点:every time引导时间状语从句,thought about giving up描述内心挣扎,remembered my
g0al体现坚持的动力,适用于表达克服困难的心理活动
That day,I not only learned to swim but also discovered that courage isn't the absence of fear
中文意思:那天,我不仅学会了游泳,还发现勇气并不是没有恐惧。
模板亮点:not only..but also..连接并列成就,discovered that引导宾语从句揭示道理,适用于总结
经历带来的双重收获
Whenever I face a new challenge,I think of that summer in the pool and tell myself,"If I can swim,
I can do anything.”
中文意思:每当我面临新的挑战时,我就会想起泳池里的那个夏天,告诉自己:“如果我会游泳,我
就能做任何事。”
模板亮点:whenever引导时间状语从句,think of..唤起回忆,直接引语表达决心,适用于结尾升
华主题、表达感悟
I still remember the summer when I finally learned to swim.For years,I was afraid of deep water because
I almost drowned in a lake when I was little.Last July,my parents signed me up for swimming lessons,
and I knew it was time to face my fear.
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On the first day,I stood at the edge of the pool,my legs shaking.The coach,a kind old man,noticed my
fear."Take it slow,"he said gently."We'll start with the basics."He taught me to float first.I held my
breath and tried to relax,but my body kept sinking.After hours of practice,I could finally stay afloat for
ten seconds.That small success gave me courage.
The hardest part was learning to kick and move forward.I swallowed a lot of water and sometimes
wanted to quit.But every time I thought about giving up,I remembered my goal.One afternoon,while
practicing the breaststroke,something clicked.I moved my arms and legs in harmony,and suddenly,I
was gliding through the water!I swam to the other end of the pool without stopping.When I looked up,
my parents and coach were cheering.
That day,I not only learned to swim but also discovered that courage isn't the absence of fear.It's doing
something even when you're scared.Now,swimming has become my favorite sport.Whenever I face a
new challenge,I think of that summer in the pool and tell myself,"If I can swim,I can do anything."
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