Unit 4 Section Ⅳ Writing about an artwork-【优学精讲】2024-2025学年高中英语必修第三册教用Word(外研版)

本讲义聚焦高中英语“艺术品写作”核心知识点，通过“品范文（梵高《向日葵》分析）—析手法（语言技巧如被动语态、介词短语，结构框架引言-主体-结论）—背佳句（开头、主体、结尾模板）”的脉络，结合写作任务（介绍徐悲鸿《奔马图》）及审题谋篇、要点陈述、句间衔接等步骤，构建完整写作学习支架。 该资料以结构化写作策略为特色，通过范文解析与手法归纳培养学生思维品质（分析、归纳能力），融入中外艺术家及作品（梵高、毕加索、徐悲鸿等）提升文化意识，提供多样化语言素材（佳句、句型改写）增强语言能力。课中辅助教师系统教学，课后通过翻译、连句练习帮助学生巩固写作技能，有效查漏补缺。

Section Ⅳ　Writing about an artwork Step 1　品教材范文 　　This sunflower painting is an oil painting by Vincent van Gogh， a great painter from the Netherlands.It was completed in Arles in 1889 and is among his most famous works. 　　It shows sunflowers in a vase， mostly in three shades of yellow， from bright yellows to brownish yellows.I can see the flowers are at different stages of life — some are just starting to bloom and some are starting to wither. The painting leaves a great impression on me.I think it shows the meaning of life.Each of the flowers is trying its best to grow and show its beauty， no matter which stage of life it is at.The painting gives me a deeper understanding of life. Step 2　析写作手法 学语言： 1.使用一般过去时的被动语态介绍这幅画的完成时间。 2.使用两个介词短语介绍这幅画的用色，非常简洁、明了。 3.使用leave a great impression on这一短语，表达了这幅画给“我”留下了深刻的印象。 4.让步状语从句的使用使表达语气更强，情感更浓。 学结构： Introduction： give basic information about the artist and the artwork→Main body： describe the artwork→Conclusion： give your own comments Step 3　背出彩佳句 精彩开头 1.The craft yacht on my desk is unique in shape and in the national style of Venice， Italy. 在我的书桌上放着的工艺品游艇造型别致且具有意大利威尼斯的民族风格。 2.This is a painting by the Spanish artist， Pablo Picasso， considered to be one of the greatest Western artists of the twentieth century. 这是一幅西班牙艺术家巴勃罗·毕加索的画，他被认为是二十世纪最伟大的西方艺术家之一。 3.The works of “Clay Figurine Zhang” are handicrafts of folk coloured sculpture. “泥人张”的作品是民间彩塑的工艺品。 4.My favourite painting is Galloping Horses. 我最喜欢的画是《奔马图》。 5.Qi Baishi， one of China’s greatest painters， followed the traditional Chinese style of painting. 齐白石，中国最伟大的画家之一，遵循着传统的中国画风格。 丰满主体 1.The whole matching of colours of the painting is very harmonious. 这幅画整个色彩的搭配非常协调。 2.Each of the four clay figures looks different and lifelike. 四个泥人个个神态迥异，栩栩如生。 3.There seemed to be something that surprised him. 好像有什么东西让他大吃一惊。 4.Chinese painting is known for its brush drawings in black inks and natural colors. 中国画因用黑色墨汁和自然原色的毛笔画而出名。 5.Pop art was an important modern art movement that aimed to show ordinary twentieth-century city life. 波普艺术是一个重要的现代艺术流派，着眼于展现20世纪普通的城市生活。 余味结尾 1.When we see the sand passing by， it’s like seeing the two brothers of hour hand and minute hand racing. 每当我们看到沙子的流逝，就好像看到时针和分针两兄弟在赛跑。 2.This horse gives people confidence.Whenever I lose confidence and see it， it immediately gives me much confidence. 这匹马给人以信心。每当我失去信心，看到它立即让我信心十足。 3.It will encourage me to go forward bravely in my study and life. 它将鼓励着我在学习和生活中勇往直前。 4.The painting leaves a great impression on me and gives me a deeper understanding of life. 这幅画给我留下了深刻的印象和对生活的深层理解。 　　假定你是李华，你校英文报征集一篇介绍徐悲鸿的《奔马图》的文章，并给出喜欢的理由。请你写一篇短文进行投稿，内容包括： 　　1.介绍徐悲鸿和《奔马图》； 　　2.说明喜欢的理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 一、审题谋篇，结构分明 明确体裁 介绍艺术品的说明文 确定时态和人称 一般现在时为主；第三人称为主 布局文章架构 第一段：介绍徐悲鸿； 第二段：介绍《奔马图》； 第三段：说明喜欢的理由 二、要点陈述，语言规范 1.徐悲鸿是二十世纪中国最著名的艺术家之一，他最出名的是他的栩栩如生的马画。 　Xu Beihong was one of China’s best-known twentieth-century artists who is most famous for his lively paintings of horses.　 2.徐悲鸿采用中国的传统绘画风格，所以《奔马图》因用毛笔蘸黑墨和天然颜料画成而出名。 　Xu Beihong followed the traditional Chinese style of painting， so the painting Racing Horse is known for its brush drawings in black inks and natural colours.　 3.《奔马图》不仅展示了六匹向我们跑来的看起来极其鲜活的马，而且也体现了这个天才画家的个性和梦想。 　The painting Racing Horse not only shows six horses running towards us， which look wonderfully alive， but also represents the personality and ideal of the gifted painter.　 4.我认为这幅画使人愉快。或许那就是因为我的确喜欢动物画。 　I think it’s delightful.Perhaps that’s because I really like the painting of animals.　 5.总而言之，我非常喜欢这幅被列为国家级文物的《奔马图》。 　In a word， I am so crazy about the painting Racing Horse，which was listed in the national level of cultural relics.　 三、句间衔接，过渡自然 1.用倒装句改写要点3。 　Not only does the painting Racing Horse show six horses running towards us，which look wonderfully alive， but also represents the personality and ideal of the gifted painter.　 2.用why引导的定语从句、that引导的表语从句改写要点4。 　Perhaps the reason why I think it’s delightful is that I really like the painting of animals.　 四、检查誊写，卷面整洁 　　　Xu Beihong was one of China’s best-known twentieth-century artists who is most famous for his lively paintings of horses.　 　　　Xu Beihong followed the traditional Chinese style of painting，so the painting Racing Horse is known for its brush drawings in black inks and natural colours.Not only does the painting Racing Horse show six horses running towards us，which look wonderfully alive，but also represents the personality and ideal of the gifted painter.　 　　　Perhaps the reason why I think it’s delightful is that I really like the painting of animals.In a word， I am so crazy about the painting Racing Horse， which was listed in the national level of cultural relics.　 动作描写 greet v.问候，迎接，招呼→greeting n.问候，招呼 fold v.折起 demonstrate v.示范，演示 stimulate v.刺激，促使，促进 sponsor v.资助 心理描写 get a load of ...注意，仔细看（常用于表示惊讶或羡慕） be fond of ... 喜欢…… 人物描写 elegant adj.高雅的，优美的 lack v.没有，缺乏 一、翻译句子 1.Clair说到她缺乏自信。 　Clair mentioned that she lacked confidence.　 2.更糟糕的是，她的家对于她丈夫来说不够优雅。她的丈夫想获得更高的薪水来提高自己的社会地位。 　What’s worse，her house wasn’t elegant enough for her husband who wanted to improve his social status with a bigger salary.　 3.Tony安慰她，并承诺让她更漂亮，让她的房子更优雅。他做到了。 　Tony comforted her and promised to make her more beautiful and her house more elegant.He made it.　 4.几天后，Clair邀请女性朋友来她家。 　A few days later，Clair invited other women to her house.　 5.Tony双臂交叉，笔直地站着，满面笑容地迎接她们。 　Tony greeted them with a broad smile， standing up straight with his arms folded.　 6.所有的女人都喜欢Clair的房子和由一家公司赞助的机器人Tony。 　All the women were fond of Clair’s house and Tony， a robot sponsored by a company.　 二、连句成篇 　　　Clair mentioned that she lacked confidence.What’s worse，her house wasn’t elegant enough for her husband who wanted to improve his social status with a bigger salary.Tony comforted her and promised to make her more beautiful and her house more elegant.He made it.A few days later，Clair invited other women to her house.Tony greeted them with a broad smile，standing up straight with his arms folded.All the women were fond of Clair’s house and Tony， a robot sponsored by a company.　 Ⅰ.阅读理解 　　Huang Gongwang was a famous Chinese artist in the Yuan Dynasty. He was good at music， poetry， writing and especially painting. 　　Huang was born in 1269 in Jiangsu Province. Sadly， when he was young， his parents died and he lived a poor life. But then， a nice man from Zhejiang Province adopted him and took care of him. The kind man was impressed by the boy’s talent. Later Huang began to learn painting under the guidance of Zhao Mengfu. 　　Between the ages of 50 and 62， Huang often travelled in nature. During the long-term travelling， he developed an interest in rivers and mountains. When living in Songjiang， Huang often watched and enjoyed the fantastic scenery there. Sometimes he sat in the mountains all day， even forgetting to eat and have a rest. While enjoying the beauty of nature， he got lots of good ideas about what to paint. 　　Huang drew lots of paintings during his later life. But most of them have gone missing over the centuries. Dwelling in the Fuchun Mountains is one of the few surviving works and it is considered to be among his greatest works. It describes the autumn scenery along Fuchun River in southern China with ink and wash. After years of efforts， Huang finished painting Dwelling in the Fuchun Mountains. Unluckily， this painting was later burnt into two pieces. Now， the two pieces are carefully kept in two different museums. 　　During Huang’s life， he made great achievements in painting. Because of his great ability in art， Huang was considered one of the Four Great Masters of the Yuan Dynasty. 语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了中国元代著名的画家黄公望的个人经历以及成就。 1.Why did the man adopt Huang Gongwang？（　　） A.Because he was young. B.Because he lost his parents. C.Because he got different talents. D.Because he was good at painting. 解析：B　细节理解题。根据第二段中的Sadly， when he was young ... and took care of him.可知，这个人收养黄公望是因为他失去了父母。 2.What can be inferred about Huang Gongwang from Paragraph 3？（　　） A.He tried to stay away from social life. B.He liked travelling when he was young. C.He often drew creative ideas from nature. D.He had an unhealthy eating and sleeping habit. 解析：C　推理判断题。根据第三段最后一句可推知，黄公望经常从大自然中汲取创意。 3.What do we know about Dwelling in the Fuchun Mountains？（　　） A.It has been lost in history. B.It’s a painting created by two painters. C.It describes the beauty of four seasons. D.It’s a valuable work that is kept in two places. 解析：D　细节理解题。根据倒数第二段最后两句可知，《富春山居图》是一件保存在两个地方的有价值的作品。 4.What can be the best title for the text？（　　） A.A Famous Artist B.A Touching Story C.An Old Valuable Painting D.An Introduction to Art History 解析：A　标题归纳题。通读全文可知，文章主要介绍了中国元代著名的画家黄公望的个人经历以及成就。因此，A项最适合作文章标题。 Ⅱ.完形填空 　　Back starting from my fourth grade， I was in low spirits for about four and a half years.I never really had any 　5　 during that time.My only one had just moved away in the third grade.I always felt 　6　， with no one and not even my family to talk to.I didn’t think they knew what I was 　7　.It was a really hard time.I’d always 　8　 my feelings and just put on a nice， fake smile for them.That was all they 　9　， right？ 　　During my seventh-grade year， I started to make a friend or two.My depression state started 　10　.But at some time I was still 　11　 myself， calling myself fat or ugly.My friends tried their best to help and it did 　12　 in some ways but not fully.It was a surprise that I found what I was 　13　： music.I found this song called “Beautiful”.There was one line that said， “You are beautiful in every single way.” I now 　14　 that we are all beautiful and no guy or girl can tell us otherwise.　15　 some people can’t see that. 　　Now I 　16　 believe that even a song can 　17　 a person’s life just because of the lyrics you hear.I just hope they find this 　18　 and listen to it.I also hope it has the same 　19　 it had on me when I was suffering. 语篇解读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者曾经陷入抑郁，感到非常孤独，后来，一首歌的歌词改变了作者对生活的态度，作者意识到自己也很美丽。 5.A.friends　　　　　　　 B.families C.ideas　 D.troubles 解析：A　根据下文I always felt 　6　， with no one and not even my family to talk to.可知，此处表示那段时间作者没有真正的朋友。 6.A.angry　 B.stressed C.regretful　 D.lonely 解析：D　作者没有人交谈，所以感到孤独。 7.A.learning　 B.accepting C.experiencing　 D.expecting 解析：C　根据语境可知，此处表示作者认为他们不知道自己在经历什么。 8.A.exchange　 B.hide C.hurt　 D.observe 解析：B　根据下文and just put on a nice， fake smile for them可知，作者总是隐藏自己的情感，对他们假装微笑。 9.A.ordered　 B.tried C.suggested　 D.wanted 解析：D　根据上文I’d always 　8　 my feelings and just put on a nice， fake smile for them.以及语境可知，此处表示作者认为对他们假装微笑是他们想要的。 10.A.coming true　 B.taking over C.getting out　 D.dying down 解析：D　根据上文可知，作者开始交朋友，所以消沉的情绪开始消退。 11.A.behaving　 B.conducting C.disliking　 D.ignoring 解析：C　根据下文calling myself fat or ugly可知，有时作者还是不喜欢自己。 12.A.disappear　 B.exist C.work　 D.suffer 解析：C　根据语境可知，此处表示作者的朋友尽力帮助作者，在某些方面确实起作用了。 13.A.missing　 B.wondering C.following　 D.developing 解析：A　根据下文music可知，此处表示作者发现自己缺少的东西是音乐。 14.A.recommend　 B.doubt C.admit　 D.realise 解析：D　根据下文that we are all beautiful and no guy or girl can tell us otherwise可知，作者意识到大家都是美丽的。 15.A.Importantly　 B.Naturally C.Sadly　 D.Obviously 解析：C　根据下文some people can’t see that可知，有些人看不到这一点，这是令人悲伤的。 16.A.formally　 B.strongly C.likely　 D.regularly 解析：B　根据语境可知，此处表示作者坚信一首歌可以改变一个人的生活。 17.A.change　 B.save C.control　 D.take 解析：A　参见上题解析。 18.A.motto　 B.song C.lesson　 D.voice 解析：B　根据下文and listen to it可知，在听之前，作者希望他们能找到这首歌曲。 19.A.effect　 B.chance C.choice　 D.feeling 解析：A　根据下文it had on me when I was suffering可知，此处表示作者希望歌曲对听这首歌的人也会产生影响。 Ⅲ.读后续写 　　阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 　　Scarlett did not eat regularly when she was three years old. At the time， her parents thought she was just a picky eater， but after a blood test and some other tests， they learned she had a rare heart condition. 　　“I was shocked. I always thought it was her stomach， but the result was beyond our imagination，” her mom， Shanna Tabron， says. “It was really tough to understand and let it sink in. The heart is the engine to your body， and it was heart-broken to hear it.” 　　In the following 5 years， Scarlett was in and out of the hospital while she waited for a new heart， before receiving a transplant in 2019. Since then， Scarlett said she’s been “feeling better”. And she is a cute and active girl and has found great joy through dancing， which she finds both fun and challenging. This year， when the doctor told Scarlett’s parents that they should not worry about Scarlett’s heart any more， the family even held a dance party for the lucky and brave girl. 　　Out of all the dancers in the world， Scarlett’s biggest inspiration is the amazing Rockettes. “They are the best，” Scarlett says. “Even when I was sick and went through so many tests， I could felt the power and energy they gave me.” She always wished to see the Rockettes in person. 　　Through a partnership between Make-A-Wish Southern Florida and Make-A-Wish Metro New York， Scarlett and her family recently got to fly to New York City for an unforgettable weekend. 　　And when she found out that her dream of going to New York City to meet them was coming true， she was excited. “I’m really excited to go dancing with the Rockettes and watch their performance，” she said， after changing into a special dancing suit to show off her high kicks. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右； 2.请按如下格式作答。 　　In tears， Scarlett’s mother observed the little girl during the show. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　Then， Scarlett got to attend a private meet with the Rockettes dancers in person.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 参考范文： 　　In tears， Scarlett’s mother observed the little girl during the show. During the performance， Scarlett had the biggest eyes and smile， forgetting everything around. It seemed as if she had joined them， dancing with them. She felt so special. “After the show ended， they had some flowers falling from the ceiling， and she opened her bag to collect them as a sweet memory of the best day，” Scarlett’s mother said. 　　Then， Scarlett got to attend a private meet with the Rockettes dancers in person. “Scarlett kept saying， ‘You are perfect，’” her mom recalls. The dancers surprised her with a bag filled with gifts. “The minute I met Scarlett， I could see her eyes light up with joy，” said one of the professional dancers. “My favourite part of spending time with Scarlett was seeing her excitement as she talked about her love for dance， and for the Rockettes，” she added. The dancers felt thankful that they could be a part of Scarlett’s holiday this year， while for Scarlett and her family， this was a trip they would never forget. 7 / 8 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $