Unit 6 Touring the World 作文学案- 2025-2026学年鲁教版五四制六年级上册英语

Unit 6 Touring the World 作文学案 【写作导引】 本单元以“Touring the World”为话题，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“旅游与文化”这一主题群。单元核心聚焦“用英语描述旅游景点、推荐特色地点，复习一般现在时（be & do）及方位表达，传递对自然与文化的热爱”，常见写作角度包括：① 介绍熟悉的旅游景点；② 给朋友推荐旅游目的地；③ 描述旅游照片中的景点；④ 制作旅游海报介绍景点。单元语法重点为 一般现在时（be动词与实义动词）复习，思维技能侧重“按逻辑描述景点的位置、特色与活动”，阅读策略聚焦“理解旅游类短文的核心信息”，所有内容严格贴合课本词汇与句型，无超纲表达，可直接用于课堂教学。 【单元话题】 “走遍天下，领略美景”。请用英语写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的一个旅游景点，包括其位置、特色及可开展的活动，词数60-80左右，题目为“My Favourite Tourist Spot”。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 My Favourite Tourist Spot My favourite tourist spot is Daming Lake in Jinan. It’s a famous and beautiful place. Jinan is called “Quan Cheng” because it has 72 springs, and Daming Lake’s water comes from these springs. The lake is clear, and there are many green trees and lotus flowers in summer. Tourists can take photos by the lake, walk around the lake, or have a picnic on the grass. The views are wonderful, especially when the sun shines. I often visit Daming Lake with my family on weekends. It’s a great place to relax and enjoy nature. 【译文】 我最喜欢的旅游景点 我最喜欢的旅游景点是济南的大明湖，它是一个著名又美丽的地方。 济南被称为“泉城”，因为它有72处泉水，而大明湖的水就来自这些泉水。湖水清澈，夏天还有很多绿树和莲花。游客可以在湖边拍照、环湖散步，或者在草地上野餐。景色非常美，尤其是阳光照耀的时候。 我周末经常和家人一起去大明湖，它是放松身心、欣赏自然的好地方。 亮点词块 1.tourist spot 旅游景点 2.famous for 因……而出名 3.clear water 清澈的湖水 4.lotus flowers 莲花 5.take photos 拍照 6.walk around the lake 环湖散步 7.have a picnic 野餐 8.wonderful views 美丽的景色 9.enjoy nature 欣赏自然 10.relax oneself 放松身心 高分句子 1.Jinan is called “Quan Cheng” because it has 72 springs.（用because表原因，复习一般现在时实义动词，贴合单元语法重点） 2.The lake is clear, and there are many green trees and lotus flowers in summer.（用there be句型描述景点特色，符合单元表达习惯） 3.Tourists can take photos by the lake, walk around the lake, or have a picnic on the grass.（列举景点活动，贴合主题，句型简洁） 【拓展1】 你的笔友 Amy 计划来中国旅游，请你写一封邮件，向她推荐泰山（Mount Taishan），词数不少于50。 Dear Amy, Hi! I know you’re going to travel to China. I want to recommend Mount Taishan to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1范文】 Dear Amy, Hi! I know you’re going to travel to China. I want to recommend Mount Taishan to you. Mount Taishan is in Shandong Province. It’s one of the Five Great Mountains in China and is famous for its wonderful views. There are green trees, beautiful springs and flowers everywhere. When the sun rises, the sky turns orange and pink—it’s amazing! You can climb the mountain, take photos of the views, and learn about Chinese culture there. Many tourists visit it every year. I’m sure you’ll love it. Welcome to China! Yours, Li Hua 【拓展1译文】 亲爱的埃米： 嗨！我知道你要来中国旅游，我想向你推荐泰山。 泰山在山东省，是中国五岳之一，以美丽的景色闻名。到处都是绿树、漂亮的泉水和花朵。当太阳升起时，天空变成橙红色和粉红色——简直太美了！你可以爬山、拍景色照片，还能在那里了解中国文化。 每年都有很多游客来参观，我相信你会喜欢它的。欢迎来中国！ 你的， 李华 【拓展2】 你有一张 Waikiki Beach 的照片，请根据以下提示向同学介绍这张照片里的景点，词数60左右，开头已给出。 提示 信息 景点 Waikiki Beach（威基基海滩） 位置 Hawaii（夏威夷） 特色 白色沙滩、蓝色海水、彩色日落 活动 游泳、捡贝壳、打沙滩排球 Look at this photo. It’s Waikiki Beach. It’s one of the most beautiful beaches in the world. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【拓展2范文】 Look at this photo. It’s Waikiki Beach. It’s one of the most beautiful beaches in the world. It’s in Hawaii. The beach has white sand, and the sea is usually blue and green. When the sun sets, the water turns yellow, orange or purple. People can swim in the sea, pick seashells, or play beach volleyball on the sand. There are also interesting sea animals like sea lions and sea horses. It’s a wonderful place to have fun. I hope I can visit it one day! 【拓展2译文】 看这张照片，这是威基基海滩，它是世界上最美丽的海滩之一。 它在夏威夷，海滩有白色的沙子，海水通常是蓝绿色的。当太阳落山时，海水会变成黄色、橙色或紫色。人们可以在海里游泳、捡贝壳，或者在沙滩上打排球。那里还有海狮、海马等有趣的海洋动物。 这是一个玩乐的好地方，我希望有一天能去参观！ 本话题作文的一些实用短语与句型积累 一、核心主题词汇 1.旅游景点相关（单元重点） · 景点名称：tourist spot 旅游景点；mountain 山；lake 湖；beach 海滩；forest 森林；spring 泉；great mountain 名山；national forest park 国家森林公园 · 特色描述：beautiful views 美丽景色；clear water 清澈的水；white sand 白色沙滩；green trees 绿树；lotus flowers 莲花；colorful sunset 彩色日落；famous for 因……而出名 · 旅游活动：take photos 拍照；have a picnic 野餐；climb the mountain 爬山；walk around 漫步；swim in the sea 海里游泳；pick seashells 捡贝壳；play beach volleyball 打沙滩排球；visit nature parks 参观自然公园 1. 语法相关（单元重点） · 一般现在时（be动词）复习： · 例句：Mount Taishan is in Shandong Province.（泰山在山东省）/ The sea is blue.（海水是蓝色的） · 一般现在时（实义动词）复习： · 例句：Many tourists visit Mount Taishan every year.（每年很多游客参观泰山）/ The sun rises in the east.（太阳从东方升起） · 疑问与回答： · 例句：Where is Daming Lake? It’s in Jinan. / What do people do there? They take photos and walk around. 1. 逻辑衔接相关（单元基础） · 描述顺序：first 首先；next 接下来；finally 最后 · 并列：and 和；also 也；such as 例如 · 因果：because 因为；so 所以 · 推荐：I recommend … 我推荐……；It’s a great place to … 这是……的好地方 二、实用句型积累 1.介绍旅游景点（贴合单元核心） · [Tourist spot] is in [place]. It’s famous for … · The [spot] has … (views/features). The water is … / The trees are … · People can … (activities) there. It’s wonderful to … · I like [spot] because it’s … and there are many fun things to do. 1. 语法句型运用（贴合单元语法） · Mount Taishan is one of the Five Great Mountains in China.（一般现在时be动词，介绍景点地位） · Many tourists climb Mount Taishan every year for the beautiful views.（一般现在时实义动词，描述游客活动） · The sea in Waikiki Beach is usually blue, and it turns pink when the sky is pink.（并列句+一般现在时，描述景点特色） · Is there a lake in your city? Yes, there is. / No, there isn’t.（there be句型疑问，复习基础语法） 1. 推荐旅游景点（贴合单元内涵） · I want to recommend [spot] to you. It’s a beautiful place with … · You should visit [spot] because it has wonderful views and fun activities. · It’s a great place to relax and enjoy nature. · I’m sure you’ll love this amazing tourist spot! 三、基础句式与衔接 1.核心语法+基础表达（单元核心语法） · Daming Lake is in Jinan. It’s famous for its clear water.（一般现在时be动词+固定搭配） · People visit Waikiki Beach every year. They swim, pick seashells and play beach volleyball.（一般现在时实义动词+并列活动） 1. 简单衔接+逻辑表达（单元拓展） · First, Mount Taishan is in Shandong Province. Next, it has beautiful views of springs and trees. Finally, you can climb the mountain and enjoy the sunset.（按顺序介绍景点） · The forest in New Zealand is green and tall. Many people go there to see kiwi birds because they are unique.（因果关系描述景点与活动） 1. 课堂实用句型（教学专用） · 提问句型：Where is …? / What is … like? / What can people do there? / Why is … famous? · 回答句型：It’s in … / It’s … (beautiful/clear/wonderful). / People can … there. / It’s famous for … 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $