题型六 书面表达-【决胜中考】2025年中考英语全程复习配套课件（安徽专版）

英语 返回目录 题型六　书面表达 名师精讲 01 针对性练习 02 名师精讲 返回目录 精讲一：书面表达的题型认识 书面表达是考查学生综合运用英语能力的一种题型，它要求考生根据所给情景和要求写一篇短文，文章内容要符合所给的情景和要求。书面表达有提示和要求两部分。“提示”一般包括与写作内容紧密相关的信息；“要求”一般包括对短文的文体、格式及字数的要求。我们不能离开提示和要求自行立意、选材，随意发挥。我们必须根据所给材料进行适当发挥，切中题意，语言准确，条理清楚，书写规范。 名师精讲 返回目录 书面表达一直是中考英语试题的重要组成部分，它要求学生必须具有扎实的语言基本功，具备一定的审题能力、想象能力、表达能力、评价能力等。因此，在平时要有意识、系统性地训练英语表达能力。 名师精讲 返回目录 精讲二：解题方法技巧 书面表达是考查学生运用所学的语法知识及词汇知识遣词造句和运用英语进行思考和表达的能力，做此题时应注意以下几点： 写作前：认真审题，明确题意，将写作要点连贯起来，构成文章的整体框架，避免遗漏要点。 名师精讲 返回目录 写作时：尽量用自己熟练掌握的短语、句型将理顺的要点表达出来，写作时应多用简单句，少用没有把握的复合句。若遇到表达障碍，可换一种说法，将一句变成若干句，只求大意相同。把想好的句子连贯地组织起来，注意上下句的逻辑关系，适当使用递进、让步、转折、因果等相关词语，使文章层次分明、过渡自然。 写作后：检查修改，默读一到两遍，看人称、大小写、标点、习惯用语、格式有没有错误；要点有没有错误或遗漏；句子有没有语病；语句是否连贯。 名师精讲 返回目录 (2024·安徽) 假设你是李辉，上周你在学校举行的“消防安全日”活动中学会了灭火器的使用方法。请结合下图信息，写一篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿。 要点： 1.活动目的； 2.灭火器的使用方法； 3.你的体会。 名师精讲 返回目录 注意： 1.短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80~100(首句已为你写好，不计入总词数)。 名师精讲 返回目录 Last week， our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. ______________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 名师精讲 返回目录 【参考范文】 Last week， our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. The purpose was to draw our attention to fire safety. Among the activities， how to use a fire extinguisher interested me most. 名师精讲 返回目录 When we use a fire extinguisher， we should first shake it after picking it up， and then pull off the safety pin quickly. As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire， we are expected to press down on the handle until we put out the fire. During the period， we should be careful enough not to get hurt. From the activities I’ve learned a lot and realized the importance of fire safety. 名师精讲 返回目录 A(2024·广东) 假设你叫李明，你校交换生 Ethan在阅读中国古诗词的过程中遇到了困难，他通过学校广播节目寻找共读伙伴。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英文写一封邮件，表示愿意成为他的共读伙伴，并提供帮助。 针对性练习 返回目录 注意： 1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名； 3.语句连贯，词数80左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。 针对性练习 返回目录 Dear Ethan， I’ve learned from the school radio program that you have difficulty in reading ancient Chinese poems and need a reading buddy.__________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes， Li Ming I believe I’m the buddy you want， as I have read many ancient Chinese poems and I have a deep understanding of them. I love ancient Chinese poems， and I am able to explain them in English. Also， I was born with a radio voice， so I can help you read the poems aloud correctly and beautifully. If you agree to pair up with me， we could meet every Friday afternoon in the school garden. Perhaps we can finish reading ten poems a month.  针对性练习 返回目录 B(2024·河北) 假定英语课上你们正在就“课堂表现”开展同伴互评活动，下面是你的同伴张军的自我课堂表现记录(Class Record)。请你根据记录内容写一篇短文，总结他五个方面的课堂表现并进行简单评价，然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。 针对性练习 返回目录 Class Record　Name：Zhang Jun Questions Yes No Did you listen to the teacher carefully？ √   Did you answer questions actively？ √   Did you ask any questions？   √ Did you work well in your group？ √   Did you take notes？   √ 针对性练习 返回目录 注意： 1.短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名； 2.词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 针对性练习 返回目录 Well done， Zhang Jun！ You listened to the teacher carefully in class and____________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ answered questions actively. So you got high marks in most of your subjects. You worked well in your group and showed your ability to us. However， you didn’t ask any questions and you didn’t take notes. So we couldn’t know if you needed help. In my opinion， you should ask questions if you have any problems so that you can solve problems in time. What’s more， you should take notes so that you can review and digest what you don’t understand. I hope my advice is of help.  针对性练习 返回目录 C(2024·无锡) 传统节日是中华文化的重要组成部分。学校正开展“中华文化周”活动，今年的主题是“交朋友，传文化”。假设你是李华，请你给国外的笔友Tom发一封英文邮件，向他介绍一个中国传统节日(时间、庆祝方式等)。 注意事项： 1.邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2.词数不少于90个，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称； 4.邮件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。 针对性练习 返回目录 Dear Tom， Traditional festivals are an important part of the Chinese culture. _____________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Among them， I like the Spring Festival best. I’m writing to tell you something about it.  It comes in January or February. It is a time for family members to get together. On the eve of the Spring Festival， all family members enjoy different kinds of food， such as dumplings and fish. We also watch the Spring Festival Gala and stay up late， hoping to have a new start in the following year.  针对性练习 返回目录 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Can you tell me something about the festivals in your country？ Yours truly， Li Hua The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and happiness but also help us understand the importance of home and family.  针对性练习 返回目录 D 假如你是李辉，你校英文报计划举办主题为“携手行动，节约粮食”的英语作文比赛。请你用英文写一则活动通知，内容包括： 1.介绍活动目的； 2.说明参赛要求(主题、字数……)。 注意： 1.词数80~100； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 针对性练习 返回目录 Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ To raise awareness about environmental protection and promote the importance of saving food， our school’s English newspaper is organizing an essay competition themed “Join Hands， Save Food”.  针对性练习 返回目录 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ School English Newspaper Participants are required to finish an article in English， which has 200 words. Your essay should reflect a positive approach towards food conservation， emphasizing the issue and offering practical suggestions. Please submit your entries to the editorial department of the school English newspaper by the end of this month.  Let’s join hands and take action together to build a society that values food！  针对性练习 返回目录 E(2024·青岛) 在多彩的初中校园生活中，你可能学会了一项体育技能，发展了一项艺术才能；也可能进行了一次精彩的演讲，参加了一次有意义的研学……这些都助力了你的成长，让你终身受益。假如学校公众号以My Story in Junior High School 为题征稿，请选择1—2项内容，讲述你的成长故事，并谈论你的感受以及相关的发展计划。 要求： 1.词数80~100； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。 针对性练习 返回目录 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ My Story in Junior High School Last term， our teacher took us to a farm for a study tour. In the activity， we not only learned how to plant crops， but also experienced the importance of labor. At the same time， it also allowed us to experience the hardships of farmers. After this event， although we were tired， we were very happy.   I think the school trip is really meaningful for us. We can not only relax ourselves but also learn a lot from it. I will take part in more such activities in my future free time.  针对性练习 返回目录 F(2024·常州) 假如你是李平，收到英国笔友 Peter的求助信。请你根据来信，按照要求写一封英文回信。 针对性练习 返回目录 Dear Li Ping， These days I’m going crazy！My teacher requires me to run for half an hour every morning. But I don’t like sports at all. I think it’s meaningless. What do you think of it？Could you share your sports experience and tell me what you have learned from it？Please give me some advice as well. Yours， Peter 针对性练习 返回目录 注意： 1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 针对性练习 返回目录 Dear Peter， I’m glad to receive your letter. _________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Ping I think sports are very important to us. It not only makes us healthier， but also cultivates our willpower. I like playing basketball. If I have time， I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends on weekends. By playing basketball， I not only made many friends， but also improved my spirit of cooperation. So I suggest you should do some sports， such as running， skipping rope， playing basketball， etc. I hope my suggestion is helpful to you. I am looking forward to your reply.  针对性练习 返回目录 G 假定你是李辉，你的英国朋友Jim向你咨询如何提升交际能力，请结合你的经历回复邮件。 要点： 1.具体经历； 2.经验总结； 3.…… 要求： 1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.不可出现真实姓名及学校名称； 3.词数80~100(短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数)。 针对性练习 返回目录 Dear Jim， How is everything going？_________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m glad you’re interested in improving your communication skills. My own experience has been quite encouraging.  I used to struggle in social settings， but taking part in various clubs helped me learn to join crowds of people effectively. I’ve learned that active listening and sincere expression are really important for building connections. Additionally， showing confidence， respecting others， and using body languages are also key.  针对性练习 返回目录 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours， Li Hui Reading books and watching speeches on the subject have been invaluable resources for me. Each person’s journey is special， but with an open and eager mindset， you’ll find your own path to improve communication.  针对性练习 返回目录 H 假如你是李辉，曾经参加过一次让自己很自豪的劳动活动。某校英文报正在举行作文比赛，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1.活动经过； 2.个人感悟。 注意： 1.短文须包含上述提示内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数80~100(短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数)。 针对性练习 返回目录 How Proud I Was Labor makes our life happy and meaningful. Speaking of labor， I think of last Labor Day holidays.   In order to learn about the value of labor， our headteacher led us to do volunteer work last Labor Day. We went to a park. There was much “white pollution” here and there. We planned to collect plastic bags. While we were cleaning the park， some people passed by and asked what we did that for. So， we explained to them the harm of plastic products to our lives. They all spoke highly of us.  ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 针对性练习 返回目录 After hard work， I felt tired but really happy. I was so proud because I did something helpful for our city as well as getting the meaning of labor.  针对性练习 返回目录 I 为提升学生核心素养，学校开设了英语拓展课(extended classes)，如英语电影配音课(the English film dubbing class)、英文诗歌课(the English poetry class)等。校英文网站邀请你写一篇短文，讲述学到的内容和对于这些课程的看法。 参考词汇：recite(v. 背诵) 注意： 1.短文须包含所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名； 3.词数80~100(短文首句和尾句已为你写好，不计入总词数)。 针对性练习 返回目录 In recent years， the extended classes in our school have become increasingly popular among students. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe that extended classes are a valuable addition to our school courses. I think it’s really necessary to do it. First， it’s good for students to develop their interests. And interests can make them more knowledgeable. Secondly， these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students. Thirdly， it’s a good idea to offer these classes. They are not only good for our study but also for our growing.  针对性练习 返回目录 J(2024·合肥蜀山一模) 随着中国的国际地位日益提高，越来越多的外国友人想要了解中国，为此，China Daily报社正在以“My country”为题向中学生征稿。假如你是李辉，请根据以下要点写一篇短文投稿。 要点： 1.地域广阔； 2.历史悠久； 3.景点众多； 4.…… 针对性练习 返回目录 要求： 1.语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥； 2.不可出现真实姓名与学校名称； 3.词数80~100。 针对性练习 返回目录 My country China is a beautiful and great country. ________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Its land area is 9.6 million square kilometers.  As one of the four ancient civilizations， China has long history and creates many splendid cultures. When people talk about China， they also think of many great places of interest such as the Great Wall， Mount Tai， Sun-Moon Lake and so on. When people talk about China， they think of many great things of China such as the Four Great Inventions of ancient China， Shenzhou-18 spacecraft， Chang’e-6 lunar probe and so on. So beautiful China is becoming stronger and stronger， China’s tomorrow will be better.  If you come to visit China， you won’t forget the great time you’ll have here！   针对性练习 返回目录 谢谢观看 返回目录 $