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初一下册仁爱版
【寒假专版】C版写作高级词句
寒假专版
【C版高级词句】讲述助人或受助的经历
写作提分攻略·仁爱版初一下册
范文一高级词句
一、高级词汇
worried∥3.idl
含义:担心的;焦虑的
搭配:look worried看起来担心;feel worried感到焦虑
carefully
∥'eafali/l
含义:小心地:仔细地
搭配:cross the street carefully小心地过马路;listen carefully仔细地听
remind
Ih 'mamd//
含义:提醒:使想起
搭配:remind sb.to do sth.提醒某人做某事;remind sb.of sth.使某人想起某事
experience
ih'sprarians∥
含义:经历:经验
搭配:a helpful experience一次助人的经历;learn from experience从经验中学习
二、高级句型&万能模板句型
英文:One possible experience of helping others happened to me last month
中文意思:上个月,我有过一次可能的助人经历。
模板亮点:One possible experience of..happened to me..适用于引出个人经历类话题开头
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初一下册仁爱版
【寒假专版】
C版写作高级词句
英文:She looked very worried and kept looking around.
中文意思:她看起来很担心,并且不停地四处张望。
模板亮点:”主语+系动词+形容词+d+动词短语”并列结构,用于描述人物状态和动作
I knew that the bus stop for Bus No.10 had moved to the other side of the street last week.
中文意思:我知道10路公交车的站台上周己经搬到街对面了。
模板亮点:Iknew that+-宾语从句结构,用于表达已知信息或背景情况
Helping others not only makes others feel warm but also brings happiness to ourselves
中文意思:帮助别人不仅能让别人感到温暖,也能给我们自己带来快乐。
模板亮点:not only..but also.并列结构,用于强调两者兼顾的积极影响,可用于结尾总结观点
One possible experience of helping others happened to me last month.On my way home from school,I
saw an old lady standing at the bus stop.She looked very worried and kept looking around.I went up to
her and asked,Granny,are you okay?Do you need help?"She told me she wanted to take Bus No.10
to the People's Hospital,but she couldn't find where the bus stop was.I knew that the bus stop for Bus
No.10 had moved to the other side of the street last week.So I helped her cross the street carefully and
showed her the new bus stop.When the bus came,I told the driver to remind her to get off at the hospital
stop.The old lady thanked me again and again,and I felt very happy.
Helping others not only makes others feel warm but also brings happiness to ourselves.I will always
remember this experience and try to help more people in the future.
范文二高级词句
一、高级词汇
heavily∥'hevili//
含义:大量地;猛烈地
搭配:rain heavily下大雨;snow heavily下大雪
upset
lap'set/l
含义:沮丧的;难过的
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初一下册仁爱版
【寒假专版】C版写作高级词句
搭配:look upset看起来沮丧;feel upset感到难过
sincerely∥sm'sali/∥
含义:真诚地:诚恳地
搭配:thank sincerely真诚感谢;sincerely hope真诚希望
strengthen∥'strenen/∥
含义:加强;巩固
搭配:strengthen friendships巩固友谊;strengthen relationship加强关系
meaningful //mi:nmfl//
含义:有意义的
搭配:meaningful life有意义的生活:meaningful experience有意义的经历
二、高级句型&万能模板句型
英文:After school,it suddenly started to rain heavily.
中文意思:放学后,天突然下起了大雨。
模板亮点:描述天气变化的常用句式,适用于记叙文场景描写
Although I got a little wet on one shoulder,I felt very happy because I could help her out.
中文意思:虽然我的一个肩膀有点湿,但我感到非常开心,因为我能帮到她。
模板亮点:although引导让步状语从句+because引导原因状语从句,表达转折与原因,适用于表达
个人感受的场景
英文:This experience taught me that helping others is a wonderful thing.
中文意思:这次经历教会我帮助别人是一件很棒的事情。
模板亮点:”experience taught me that..”总结经验教训,适用于记叙文结尾升华主题
英文:I will continue to help those in need whenever I can..
中文意思:我会继续在任何可能的时候帮助那些需要帮助的人。
模板亮点:”continue to do sth.whenever I can'”表达持续行动的决心,适用于表达个人承诺或计划
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初一下册仁爱版
【寒假专版】C版写作高级词句
Last Friday afternoon,I had an experience of helping a classmate.After school,it suddenly started to
rain heavily.I noticed that my deskmate Lily was standing at the school gate,looking upset.She told me
she forgot to bring her umbrella.I remembered my mother had just bought me a new big umbrella,so I
decided to share it with her.We walked together under the umbrella,chatting and laughing all the way.
When we arrived at her home,she thanked me sincerely.Although I got a little wet on one shoulder,I
felt very happy because I could help her out.
This experience taught me that helping others is a wonderful thing.It not only strengthens friendships
but also makes our lives more meaningful.I will continue to help those in need whenever I can.