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七下北师大版
【寒假专版】C版写作高级词句
寒假专版
【℃版高级词句】记录难忘的一次郊游或节
日活动经历
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范文一高级词句
一、高级词汇
unforgettable
anfa 'getabl/
含义:难忘的
搭配:an unforgettable picnic一次难忘的野餐;unforgettable memories难忘的回忆
prepare pri pea(r)/
含义:准备
搭配:prepare the food准备食物:prepare for the picnic为野餐做准备
competition /kompa 'tfi/
含义:比赛:竞赛
搭配:kite-flying competition放风筝比赛;join a competition参加比赛
scenery
/si:nari/
含义:风景:景色
搭配:beautiful scenery美丽的风景;enjoy the scenery欣赏风景
cherish /'tferif
含义:珍惜:珍视
搭配:cherish the day珍惜这一天;cherish the moment珍惜这一刻
七下北师大版
【寒假专版】C版写作高级词句
clean up /kli:n ap/
含义:清理;打扫
搭配:clean up the rubbish清理垃圾:clean up the room打扫房间
二、高级句型&万能模板句型
The sun was shining brightly when we met at the school gate at 8:00 a.m.
中文意思:早上8点我们在校门口集合时,阳光灿烂。
模板亮点:when引导时间状语从句,描述两个动作同时发生的场景
英文:Some girls prepared the food,while boys played frisbee,
中文意思:一些女孩准备食物,而男孩们玩飞盘。
模板亮点:while连接并列句,表示对比或同时进行的动作
英文:Although the bread was a bit messy,we laughed a lot..
中文意思:虽然面包有点乱,但我们笑得很开心。
模板亮点:although引导让步状语从句,表达转折关系
This picnic was special because I shared happiness with my friends and learned to work together
中文意思:这次野餐很特别,因为我和朋友们分享了快乐,还学会了合作。
模板亮点:because引导原因状语从句,说明某事的原因及带来的收获
英文:On the bus back,everyone felt tired but excited.
中文意思:在回程的公交车上,每个人都感到疲惫但很兴奋。
模板亮点:”形容词+bt+形容词”结构,表达矛盾统一的感受
Last Sunday,my classmates and I had an unforgettable picnic in Green Park.The sun was shining
brightly when we met at the school gate at 8:00 a.m.We took a bus there and sang songs happily on the
way.
When we arrived,we quickly found a beautiful spot under a big tree.Some girls prepared the food,
while boys played frisbee.My best friend Lily and I made sandwiches together.Although the bread
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七下北师大版
【寒假专版】C版写作高级词句
was a bit messy,we laughed a lot.After lunch,we played games like hide-and-seek.I even joined the
kite-flying competition and won a small prize!
In the afternoon,we visited the small lake in the park.We saw colorful fish swimming and took many
photos.Before leaving,we clean up all the rubbish to keep the park clean.On the bus back,everyone
felt tired but excited.
This picnic was special because I shared happiness with my friends and learned to work together.I will
always remember the laughter and beautiful scenery.It was truly a day to cherish!
范文二高级词句
一、高级词汇
celebrating
/'selrbrertm/
含义:庆祝
搭配:celebrating together一起庆祝:celebrating the festival庆祝节日
properly /prupali/
含义:正确地:适当地
搭配:fold properly正确折叠:do sth.properly正确地做某事
patiently /perfintli/
含义:耐心地
搭配:teach patiently耐心教导;wait patiently耐心等待
lightning /lartnny
含义:闪电
搭配:as fast as lightning快如闪电;like lightning像闪电一样
unforgettable
/anfa'getabl/
含义:难忘的
搭配:an unforgettable day难忘的一天:unforgettable memories难忘的回忆
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togetherness
/ta gedanas
含义:团结:和睦相处
搭配:the importance of togetherness团结的重要性;family togetherness家庭和睦
二、高级句型&万能模板句型
At first,I couldn't fold the bamboo leaves properly,and the sticky rice kept falling out.
中文意思:起初,我没法正确折叠粽叶,糯米总是掉出来。
模板亮点:At first..描述初始状态,and连接并列问题,用于叙事中遇到的困难
I was so excited that I jumped up when the red team crossed the finish line first.
中文意思:当红队第一个冲过终点线时,我激动得跳了起来。
模板亮点:so.hat.结果状语从句,when引导时间状语从句,表达强烈情绪反应
This festival was unforgettable because I learned a traditional skill and felt the warmth of family.
中文意思:这个节日令人难忘,因为我学到了一项传统技能,还感受到了家庭的温暖。
模板亮点:was unforgettable because..用于总结难忘的原因,and连接并列收获
I took photos of our zongzi and the dragon boats,which I will keep as a special memory of this
happy day.
中文意思:我拍了我们包的棕子和龙舟的照片,我会把它们当作这快乐一天的特别回忆珍藏起来。
模板亮点:which引导非限制性定语从句,as a special memory of..表达珍藏意义,用于结尾升华
主题
During the Dragon Boat Festival last month,my family and I had a wonderful day celebrating together
Early in the morning,my grandma taught my sister and me to make zongzi.At first,I couldn't fold the
bamboo leaves properly,and the sticky rice kept falling out.Grandma patiently showed me how to
wrap them into triangles,and soon I made three perfect zongzi by myself.
After lunch,we went to the riverbank to watch the dragon boat race.The teams rowed as fast as lightning,
and the crowd cheered loudly.I was so excited that I jumped up when the red team crossed the finish
line first.In the evening,we ate the zongzi we made and watched the bright moon rise.My dad told us
stories about Qu Yuan while we drank sweet rice wine.
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【寒假专版】
,C版写作高级词句
This festival was unforgettable because I learned a traditional skill and felt the warmth of family
Making zongzi with grandma and cheering for the dragon boats taught me the importance of together-
ness.I took photos of our zongzi and the dragon boats,which I will keep as a special memory of
this happy day
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