话题 2 介绍当代榜样人物并谈自身感悟-2025-2026学年九年级英语写作范文集合（沪教牛津版）

初三沪教牛津版 【写作专版】 B版写作范文集合 写作专版 【B版范文集合】介绍当代榜样人物并谈自 身感悟 写作范文集合+逐段解析·沪教牛津版初三 范文赏析 【范文一】The Role Model in My Heart The Role Model in My Heart Dr.Zhong Nanshan is a renowned medical expert who has dedicated his life to fighting against diseases. During the COVID-19 pandemic,the 84-year-old doctor bravely went to Wuhan,the hardest-hit area,to lead the medical team in saving lives.He worked day and night,sharing his professional knowledge and experience with other doctors.His selflessness and sense of responsibility deeply moved me From Dr.Zhong,I learn that a true hero is not someone with super powers,but a person who is willing to help others when they are in need.As a student,I should study hard to gain knowledge and skills,so that I can contribute to society in the future.I will also try my best to help those around me,just like Dr.Zhong does 【范文一逐段解析】 人物介绍段： 用renowned medical expert点明身份；通过dedicated his life to强调奉献精神；具体事例br avely went to Wuhan和worked day and night展现英雄品质；结尾selflessness and sense of respor sibility总结人物特质。 感悟启示段： 用rom..I learn that.☑引出感悟：not.but.对比结构突出英雄本质；study hard to gain knowledge和contribute to society表明学习目标；try my best to help呼应榜样行为。 【范文二】My Inspiring Role Model My Inspiring Role Model Ms.Yuan Longping,known as the"Father of Hybrid Rice",is one of the greatest scientists in China.He 1 初三沪教牛津版 【写作专版】 B版写作范文集合 spent his whole life researching hybrid rice to solve the problem of food shortage.Despite facing many difficulties,he never gave up his dream.Thanks to his hard work,hybrid rice has been planted in many countries,helping millions of people get rid of hunger. Ms.Yuan's perseverance and devotion to his career inspire me a lot.He shows me that we should have a strong will and keep working hard to achieve our goals.I am determined to learn from him,study diligently, andnever be afraid of challenges.I hope that one day,I can also make a difference to the world through my efforts. 【范文二逐段解析】 成就描述段： 称号”Father of Hybrid Rice'”点明地位；spent his whole life researching强调奉献；despite facing difficulties突出坚韧：helping millions get rid of hunger展示全球影响。 精神启示段： perseverance and devotion总结榜样品质；strong will and keep working hard提出核心启示； determined to.,never be afraid表达学习决心；make a difference to the world升华理想。 高分亮点句型（可直接套用) 人物介绍： ..is a renowned ..who has dedicated ..to... Despite facing ...he/she never gave up... Thanks to his/her hard work,... 精神品质： His/Her ..and...deeply moved/inspired me. He/She shows me that we should have... 自身感悟： I am determined to learn from him/her,... I hope that one day,I can make a difference to... 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 请根据以下提示，仿写一篇榜样人物介绍（100词左右)： 提示：选择一位你敬佩的当代人物（如运动员/科学家/艺术家），描述其成就和精神品质，并谈谈对 2 初三沪教牛津版 【写作专版】 B版写作范文集合 你的启示。 仿写框架参考： is my role model.He/She is_who_.During_,he/she_. From him/her,I learn that_.His/Herinspires me to.As a student,I willand hope toin the future. 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 时态错误： 错误：He is spent his whole life researching.一正确：spet(过去时表已完成动作) 错误：I learned that we should..→正确：learn(现在时表普遍真理) 搭配错误： 错误：devotion on his career→正确：devotion to 错误：afraid with challenges→正确：afraid of 逻辑错误： 错误：He bravely went to Wuhan but worked day and night→正确：and(并列关系非转折) 核心写作要点 双段结构：首段介绍人物成就（身份+具体事例），次段阐述精神品质+自身感悟 时态运用：人物经历用过去时，精神品质/普遍真理用现在时 亮点词汇：使用dedicated,perseverance,devotion,inspire等高级词汇 逻辑连接：合理使用Despite,Thanks to,From.等衔接词 感悟深度：避免空泛赞美，结合自身实际说明具体启示