话题 14 谈论喜爱的体育运动及锻炼意义-2025-2026学年九年级英语写作范文集合(沪教牛津版)

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初三沪教牛津版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 寒假专版 【B版范文集合】谈论喜爱的体育运动及锻 炼意义 写作范文集合+逐段解析·沪教牛津版初三 范文赏析 【范文一】我最喜爱的运动 My Favorite Sport Hello everyone!My name is Tom.Playing football is my favorite sport.I started playing it when I was ten years old.Every weekend,I play football with my friends in the park.We usually have a match for two hours. Playing football not only makes me strong but also teaches me teamwork.When we play together,we need to pass the ball and help each other.It also helps me relax after studying hard at school.I want to be a good football player in the future. I think everyone should do some sports every day.It's good for our health and study. 【范文一逐段解析】 开头段(引入主题): 用Hello everyone!自然开场:核心句型Playing football is my favorite sport..点明主题:I started...when.说明运动经历,every weekend强调规律性。 中间段(运动益处): 用not only..but also.并列结构突出双重好处;teaches me teamwork体现团队价值;helps me relax展示减压功能;I want to be..表达未来目标。 结尾段(倡导运动): 用everyone should..提出倡议,good for health and study总结核心价值,简洁有力。 【范文二】运动的重要性 1 初三沪教牛津版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 The Importance of Doing Sports Hi,I'm Lucy.My favorite sport is swimming.I go swimming twice a week with my father.Swimming is a great sport because it exercises my whole body. At first,I was afraid of water.But with practice,I can swim well now.Swimming makes me feel happy and energetic.It also helps me sleep better at night.Doing sports is very important for us students.It can make us strong and help us study better. Let's do more sports and have a healthy life! 【范文二逐段解析】 开头段(个人偏好): 用i,I'm.亲切开场;twice a week量化频率;because it exercises..说明选择理由,逻辑清 晰。 中间段(成长经历+益处): At first...But with practice.展示进步过程;feel happy and energetic描述心理益处;helps me leep better补充生理益处;make us strong and help us study点明学生价值。 结尾段(呼吁行动): 用祈使句Let'sdo.发起号召,healthy life升华主题,简洁有力。 高分亮点句型(可直接套用) 运动偏好: Playing...is my favorite sport./I go...twice a week./...exercises my whole body. 运动益处: not only makes me...but also teaches me..helps me relax after...makes me feel happy and energetic 克服困难: At first,I was afraid of...But with practice,I can...now. 倡导运动: Everyone should do some sports every day.Let's do more sports and have a healthy life! 仿写练习(结合亮点句型) 初三沪教牛津版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 请根据提示仿写(80词左右): 提示:姓名Wang Lin,喜爱篮球(每周三练),运动益处(增强体质/培养毅力),倡导同学参与。 仿写框架: Hi,I'm.My favorite sport is_.I practice ittimes a week.-is great because_ Playing-not only but also_.It helps me_after long study hours.I think_ Let's_and enjoy_! 常见错误修正(避坑指南) 动词形式错误: 错误:I enjoy play football.→正确:I enjoy playing football,. 错误:It make me strong..一正确:It makes me strong 搭配错误: 错误:I started play at ten.→正确:I started playing at ten, 错误:good to our health→正确:good for our health 逻辑错误: 错误:Sports teach us study.→正确:Sports help us study better,. 核心写作要点 结构清晰:开头(运动偏好)→中间(益处/经历)→结尾(倡导运动),三段式结构。 细节支撑:必须包含运动频率(every weekend/twice a week)和具体益处(至少两点)。 亮点加分:使用not only.but also.并列结构,because解释原因,Let's…呼吁行动。 避坑提醒:注意动名词作主语(Playing..),三单动词变化(makes/helps),介词搭配(good for)。 3

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