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技巧三扩写句子
学生写作时需先构思要点,接着将英语要点转化为简单句,最后将简单句变成复合句,使表达更加完整、
具体。在将简单句转化为复合句时,可以通过以下几种方式扩写:
技巧点拨
学以致用
方法:用表示原因的词连接,这类词有:because,since,as,for等
1.We are proud of our city.(扩写为城市自豪的原因)
1.I like the library very much.
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-We are proud of our city because it's a beautiful
city with a long history.
因
2.I was praised.(扩写被夸奖的原因)
2.Be careful with the electricity and fire.
I was praised,for I did something meaningful
with my pocket money.
方法:运用列举具体事例的词汇或短语:such as,.for example,Let's take.,as an example.等
3.We should do exercise at least one hour a day.
3.Family members should share happiness and worries
事
例一项或几项具体的运动)
->We should do exercise at least one hour a day
such as running or walking.
方法:用表示条件的词汇或短语连接,此类词汇有:if,unless,as long as等
4.Zongzi made by myself will give my parents a pleasant
4.Try my best to help animals.
surprise..(扩写如果父母看到“我”包的粽子)
扩
If my parents see zongzi I made myself,it'll give
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them a pleasant surprise.
5.Dreams won't come true..(扩写梦想实现的条件)
5.We won't grow up.
-Dreams won't come true unless we work hard for
them.
方法:用表示结果的词汇或短语连接,此类词有:so,so.that,therefore,as a result等
用表示目的的词汇或短语连接,此类词有:so that,to,in order that/to等
6.You should take part in sports..(扩写参加体育运动6.Learn to praise the people around us.
写
的目的)
-You should take part in sports in order to keep
或
healthy.
的
7.Modern medicine is developing fast..(扩写医学快速
7.We can discuss in groups freely.
发展带来的结果)
-Modern medicine is developing fast.As a result
many diseases can be prevented and cured.
方法:运用表示感受或想法的词汇:in my opinion,from my point of view,as for me,I think/hope/believe.等
8.A show about paper-cutting will be put on.8.I try hard to avoid using mobile phones or computers
表演的看法)
或
-A show about paper-cutting will be put on.As for
法
me,it's a chance to learn more about traditional
Chinese culture.
浙江新中考英语主题写作进阶
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技巧四
巧用衔接词
一、逻辑关系类
恰当地运用连接词把词与词、短语与短语、句与句之间连接起来,可以使语言表达更加准确、流畅。
技巧点拨
学以致用
1.表示并列或递进关系:and,both.and.,not only..but(also).,
1.Tea is not only good for our health.Tea is
moreover,in addition,besides,as well as等。例:
a key part of many cultures..(用not only
Reading is interesting.Reading helps me gain more knowledge.
.but also..合并句子)
-Reading is not only interesting but also helps me gain more
knowledge.
2.表示转折关系:but,while,however,rather than,instead of,yet等。例:
2.I'm not sure whether Mrs.Liu still
Love can be expressed by gift,family dinner and phone call.None is
remembers me.I want to tell her that she
better than going back home and spending time with our family.
will be in my heart forever.(用but合并
-Love can be expressed by gift,family dinner and phone call.
句子)》
However,none is better than going back home and spending time
with our family.
3.表示因果关系:as,since,as a result,thanks to,because of,
3.She made every effort in studying.She got
because,for this reason,due to,so等。例:
a high score in the final exam.
When I was in trouble,I asked my classmates or friends for help.We
because合并句子)
were of the same age and we could understand each other easily.
-When I was in trouble,I asked my classmates or friends for help
because we were of the same age and we could understand each other
easily.
4.表示条件或让步:if,unless,as long as,even if/even though,
4.My father is very busy.He always gives
though/although等。例:
me a hand when I am in trouble.
We have too much stress.We can't sleep at night and we may feel too
though/,although合并句子)
tired.
-If we have too much stress,we can't sleep at night and we may
feel too tired.
5.表示目的或结果:so.that.,so that,as a result,to tell the truth,
5.I'm going to do my best to get good
therefore等。例:
grades.I can go to college to get a good
I will keep practicing drawing painting.I can go to an art college.
education.(用so that合并句子)
-I will keep practicing drawing painting so that I can go to an art
college.
6.表时间关系:later,next,then,finally,at last,meanwhile,from
6.The teacher walks into the classroom.We
now on,at the same time,in the end,immediately,recently,now
will all stand up and say Good
and then,during,nowadays,since,lately,as soon as,now,after a
morning”.(用as soon as合并句子)
while,to start with,to begin with等。例:
From now on,we should remember to turn off the lights when
leaving the room.
7.表顺序:first,second,third,then,finally,to begin with,first of
7.首先,我们应该考虑这个计划是否
all,in the first place,above all,last but not the least,first and most
安全。(翻译句子)
important等。例:
To begin with,let's talk about how to solve this math problem step
by step.
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主题写作进阶
技巧点拨
学以致用
8.表列举:for example,for instance,such as,take..for example,that
8.她擅长多个科目,比如数学、英语和
is to say等。例:
物理。(翻译句子)
There are many outdoor activities such as hiking,camping and
fishing.
9.表层次:on the one hand,.on the other hand;what is the most
9.Learning a language requires practice and
important,what's more,it is the most important that...,most
patience.We need to be brave to speak.
importantly等。例:
(用most importantly合并句子)
On the one hand,staying at home is comfortable;on the other
hand,going out can help us meet new people.
l0.表比较:similarly,in the same way,while,on the other hand,
10.Some students prefer reading in the
instead,but,different from,however,otherwise,unlike
library.Others like studying in groups in
等。例:
the classroom.(用while合并句子)
Kindness can warm a person's heart,and in the same way,
encouragement can give others the courage to keep going.
l1.表解释:in other words,in fact,as a matter of fact,that is,from
11.He's always ready to help others.He's a
my point of view,in my opinion,in my view,from my point of view
very kind person..(用in other words连
等。例:
接句子)
She seems quiet,but in fact,she's very outgoing when she's with
friends.
12.表总结:on the whole,in a word,to sum up,in brief,in summary,
12.这次旅行既有趣又充满惊喜一总而
in short,all in all,in general,as far as I am concerned,above all
言之,太完美了。(翻译句子)
等。例:
He works hard,stays positive,and cares for others;in brief,he's
someone you can always trust.
二、框架搭建类
行文连贯是衡量书面表达水平的重要标准之一。我们可以恰当使用连接词或短语,使全文条理清楚、结
构紧凑。
技巧点拨
学以致用
引出下文:first/firstly,to begin/start with,at
People can do much to protect the environment.To start with,
first,first of all,above all等。
turn off the lights when leaving the room.
承上描述:second/,secondly,third/thirdly,
To fit in the new class,you can follow my tips.Firstly,be
then/next,also,after this/after that,what's
active to communicate with others sincerely.Secondly,find out
more/besides等。
someone who shares the same interest with you.
Finally,if you follow my suggestions above,you will realize your
结束话题:finally,lastly,last but not least等。
dream in no time at all.
总结话题:in short,in a word,on the whole,all
In a word,communication is really important in making friends.
in all,as for me,in my opinion等。
浙江新中考英语主题写作进阶19.There is no need to worry about small things.
20.Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body
21.Only through practice can we improve our skills.
22.How important it is to make a plan for the coming new year!
23.We can overcome any difficulties in life with hope in our
hearts.
技巧三扩写句子
【学以致用】
1.I like the library very much because there are different kinds
of books.
2.Be careful with the electricity and fire,for they may cause
terrible accidents.
3.Family members should share happiness and worries.For
example,when they feel sad,we should try to make them
happy.
4.If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer,I will try
my best to help animals.
5.We won't grow up unless we face difficulties bravely.
6.Learn to praise the people around us so that we can develop
good relationships with them.
7.We can discuss in groups freely.Therefore/As a result,we
can learn how to communicate and learn from each other.
8.I try hard to avoid using mobile phones or computers.I think
the light they give off is harmful to my eyes.
第二部分
主题一校园生活与活动
【主题佳句积累】一句子仿写
1)The school library provides us with a variety of educational
books.
2)To make students'free/spare time more colorful,the school
has organized many activities
3)There are various fun activities during breaks,like playing
basketball and running.
4)Taking part in sports activities not only strengthens my body
but also relaxes my mind.
5)We should thank our teachers who always help us with our
studies.
6)I hope you can make the best use of chances to make good progress.
【真题剖析】
审题:英国好友Alice;应用文一邮件;第一、二人称为主;
一般现在时
【润色与升格】
主
范文一:
DIt's my pleasure to give you some advice on your future
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school.
作
Besides,I think the school which has a good ping-pong team
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really fits you well.
阶
3You can not only make Chinese food by yourself,but also
have a better understanding of Chinese food culture.
范文二:
DAlthough my school is in the countryside,I still believe it is
the best choice for you to study here.
2To start with,there is a new sports centre in our school,
where you can enjoy exercising whenever you like.
3 Most importantly,as/since/because I've studied in this
school for three years,I really know how kind and helpful
our teachers are.
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技巧四巧用衔接词
【学以致用】
1.Tea is not only good for our health,but also a key part of
many cultures.
2.I'm not sure whether Mrs.Liu still remembers me,but I want
to tell her that she will be in my heart forever.
3.She got a high score in the final exam because she made every
effort in studying.
4.Although Though my father is very busy,he always gives me
a hand when I am in trouble.
5.I'm going to do my best to get good grades so that I can go to
college to get a good education.
6.As soon as the teacher walks into the classroom,we will all
stand up and say“Good morning'”,
7.First/To begin with/First of all/First and most important/In
the first place,we should think about whether this plan is safe.
8.She is good at various subjects such as math,English and physics.
9.Learning a language requires practice and patience.Most
importantly,we need to be brave to speak.
10.Some students prefer reading in the library,while others
like studying in groups in the classroom.
11.He's always ready to help others.In other words,he's a very
kind person.
12.The trip was fun and full of suprises-in a word,it was perfect.
主题篇
【实战演练】
范文一:
Dear Alice,
I'm so excited to know that you will come to China soon.
Since you're interested in traditional Chinese culture and love
Chinese food,I strongly recommend the Chinese Cooking Club
to you.
First of all,the club has classes in the school dining hall,
which is big and has all the necessary tools.There,you can
learn to cook many kinds of traditional Chinese dishes,like the
tasty Beijing Roast Duck and the sweet-sour West Lake Fish.
What's more,the lessons also tell you interesting stories and
culture about these traditional foods.For example,you'll know
why dumplings are very important during Chinese New Year.
Besides,by joining this club,you'll not only learn how to cook
well but also understand Chinese food culture better,so your
study tour in China will be more special.
I believe you'll have a great time there.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
范文二:
Dear Alice,
I'm so excited to know that you will come to China soon.
Knowing your interest in traditional Chinese culture,I think the
Chinese Folk Music Club is a perfect choice for you.
To begin with,the club has classes in the music room,a
nice place with a great atmosphere.Here,you can learn about
various kinds of Chinese folk music.For example,there are
beautiful folk songs passed down for ages and interesting
instrumental music played on traditional instruments like the
erhu and pipa.What's more,there are lots of activities.You
can enjoy wonderful folk music shows and even try playing some
traditional instruments with teachers'help.What a fantastic way
to experience the beauty of Chinese traditional music!
Hope you'll love it.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
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