Unit 4 说明毅力对成功的重要性或分享坚持达成目标的经历-2025-2026学年高中英语写作范文集合选择性必修第二册（重庆大学版）

选择性必修第二册重庆大学版 【U4写作】 毅力与成功范文解析 写作专版 【重庆大学版选择性必修第二册】U4:毅 力与成功 写作范文集合+逐段解析·说明毅力重要性 范文赏析 【范文一】The Importance of Perseverance The Importance of Perseverance Perseverance is the key to success in any field.Without it,even the most talented people may fail to achieve their goals.Take Thomas Edison as an example.He failed thousands of times before inventing the light bulb,but he never gave up.His perseverance finally led to one of the greatest inventions in history. In our daily life,perseverance helps us overcome difficulties.When we face challenges in studies or other aspects,giving up is easy,but(persevering)brings us closer to success.Students who keep practicing English every day will surely improve their language skills.Remember,success belongs to those who never lose heart. 【范文一逐段解析】 论点段（核心观点）： 开篇用Perseverance is the key to success直接点明主题；通过Take.as an example引出爱迪 生的经典事例，用failed thousands of times和never gave up形成强烈对比。 论证段（生活应用）： 用In our daily life自然过渡到现实场景；giving up is easy,but persevering brings us closer to success形成转折对比；通过keep practicing English every day的学生案例强化论点。 结论句（升华主题）： success belongs to those who never lose heart简洁有力，呼应开头观点。 【范文二】My Experience of Perseverance 1 选择性必修第二册重庆大学版 【U4写作】 毅力与成功范文解析 My Experience of Perseverance Last year,I decided to learn how to play the piano.At first,it was very difficult.My fingers were not flexible,and I often made mistakes.I felt frustrated and wanted to quit.However,my teacher encouraged me to keep practicing. I started to practice for an hour every day.I focused on basic skills and gradually improved.After six months,I could play simple songs.When I performed at the school party,everyone cheered for me.This experience taught me that perseverance is the bridge between dreams and reality.No matter how hard it is, never stop trying 【范文二逐段解析】 背景引入段： 用时间状语Last year开篇；通过My fingers were not flexible/often made mistakes具体描述 困难；felt frustrated and wanted to quit真实展现心理状态。 行动转变段： practice for an hour every day体现持续性；focused on basic skills/gradually improved展示进 步过程：After six months明确时间跨度。 成果启示段： performed at the school party/everyone cheered呈现成功场景；perseverance is the bridge between dreams and reality是全文点睛之笔；结尾句No matter how hard.,never stop trying 升华主题。 高分亮点句型（可直接套用） 核心观点类： Perseverance is the key to success/Perseverance is the bridge between dreams and reality 事例论证类： Take...as an example/...failed...times before.../...never gave up 困难描述类： At first,it was very difficult/I felt frustrated and wanted to quit 行动坚持类： keep practicing...every day /focused on...and gradually improved 结论升华类： Success belongs to those who.../No matter how hard...never stop trying 选择性必修第二册重庆大学版 【U4写作】 毅力与成功范文解析 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 请根据以下提示，仿写一篇关于坚持的短文(100词左右)： 提示：描述你学习骑自行车的经历。最初多次摔倒想放弃，但在父亲鼓励下每天练习，两周后终于 成功骑行，并明白坚持的重要性。 仿写框架参考： Learning to ride a bicycle was challenging for me.At first,_ I fell many times and wanted to_.However,my father encouraged me to_ I practicedevery day.After I could finally ride smoothly.This taught me that. 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 时态错误： 错误：I decide to learn piano last year..→正确：I decided to learn piano last year..(过去时) 错误：Perseverance help us succeed..→正确：Perseverance helps us succeed.(三单) 搭配错误： 错误：success belongs with those→正确：success belongs to those(固定搭配) 错误：keep to practice→正确：keep practicing(动名词作宾语) 逻辑错误： 错误：I failed but I succeeded..→正确：I failed many times but finally succeeded..(补充过程) 核心写作要点 结构清晰：论点（毅力重要性）→事例论证（名人/个人）→结论升华，三段式最稳妥。 细节真实：描述困难时用具体细节（如'fingers not flexible),进步过程写明时间跨度（如'after six months”)。 亮点加分：使用比喻(bridge between dreams andreality”)、转折对比(”giving up is easy,but..…”)。 避坑提醒：注意过去时态一致性、三单变化、固定搭配(belong to/keep doing)。 3