话题 5 创作人类与自然和谐共处的议论文-2025-2026学年高中英语写作范文集合选择性必修第四册（冀教版）

选择性必修4冀教版 【写作专版】 B版议论文范文 写作专版 【B版范文集合】人类与自然和谐共处的议 论文 写作范文集合+逐段解析·冀教版选择性必修4 范文赏析 【范文一】 Harmony Between Humans and Nature As the most intelligent species on Earth,humans have long been exploring the relationship with nature However,the rapid development of industry has led to serious environmental problems,such as air pollution and deforestation.It is high time for us to realize the importance of living in harmony with nature. Nature provides us with everything we need for survival,like fresh air,clean water and rich resources.If we continue to destroy it,we will eventually suffer from our own actions.For example,the frequent natural disasters in recent years are warnings from nature.On the contrary,when we protect nature,it will reward us.Many places that have taken effective environmental protection measures have seen clearer skies and greener mountains. In conclusion,humans and nature are interdependent.We should respect nature,protect it and live in har- mony with it.Only in this way can we create a better future for ourselves and our descendants. 【范文一逐段解析】 开头段（问题提出）： 用As the most intelligent species.引出主题，It is high time for us to.强调紧迫性，such as列 举具体环境问题。 中间段（论证分析)： Nature provides us with.…说明自然价值，If we continue to.展示后果，On the contrary.形 成对比论证，Many places that..举例佐证。 结尾段（结论呼吁)： humans and nature are interdependent点明核心观点，Only in this way can we.倒装句增强 语气，提出行动方向。 选择性必修4冀教版 【写作专版】 B版议论文范文 【范文二】 Man and Nature:A Harmonious Coexistence Since the beginning ofhuman history,nature has been our mother.It nurturesus and givesus the opportunity to develop.However,with the progress of society,some people ignore the value of nature and over-exploit its resources,which has caused a series of ecological crises. We must understand that nature has its own laws.We cannot change it at will.Take the balance of the ecosystem as an example.Every creature has its role to play.If we destroy one part of it,the whole system will be affected.Therefore,we should learn to live in harmony with nature instead of trying to conquer it. We can take actions like planting more trees,reducing pollution and saving energy. In a word,the relationship between humans and nature should be one of mutual respect and mutual benefit. Let's work together to protect nature and build a beautiful home where humans and nature can coexist harmoniously. 【范文二逐段解析】 开头段（历史视角)： nature has been our mother比喻手法，oveI-exploit its resources点明问题本质，ecological crises 概括现状。 中间段（解决方案)： Take.as an example举例论证，Therefore,we should.提出核心建议，like planting.列举具 体行动，三个动词短语平行结构。 结尾段（升华主题）： mutual respect and mutual benefit定义关系本质，Let's work together.…呼吁行动，coexist harmoniously点题。 高分亮点句型（可直接套用） 问题描述类： It is high time for us to.../has caused a series of.../ignore the value of... 论证分析类： Take...as an example /If we continue to...,we will.../Every creature has its role to play 解决方案类： We can take actions like.../learn to live in harmony with.../instead of trying to conquer it 2 选择性必修4冀教版 【写作专版】 B版议论文范文 结论呼吁类： Only in this way can we.../build a beautiful home where.../mutual respect and mutual benefit 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 请根据以下提示，仿写一篇关于环保的议论文(150词左右)： 提示：当前塑料污染严重，海洋生物受影响：分析问题原因：提出三种解决方案（减少使用回收利 用/环保材料)：呼吁共同行动。 仿写框架参考： Nowadays,plastic pollution marine life.It is high time for us to Take sea turtles an example.Many mistake plastic bags for...If we continue to We can take actions like and Only in this way can we_. 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 搭配错误： 错误：harmony to nature一→正确：harmony with nature 错误：suffer by our actions→正确：suffer from our actions 单复数错误： 错误：a series of ecological crisis→正确：ecological crises 逻辑错误： 错误：conquer and protect nature一正确：protect nature instead of trying to conquer it 核心写作要点 三段式结构：问题描述（现象+危害）一论证分析（原因+案例)一解决方案（具体措施+ 呼吁) 论证方法：使用具体案例（如：Take.as an example)入对比论证(On the contrary)、因果分 析(If,ill) 语言亮点：比喻手法(nature as mother)、倒装句(Only in this way..)、平行结构（三个动词短 语) 3 选择性必修4冀教版 【写作专版】 B版议论文范文 词汇升级：避免重复使用protect,.可替换为preserve/conserve/safeguard等 4