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选择性必修第一册重庆大学版
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介绍名胜古迹及其文化价值
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写作范文集合+逐段解析·重庆大学版选择性必修第一册
范文赏析
【范文-】The Great Wall:A Symbol of Chinese Civilization
Hello everyone!Today I want to introduce the Great Wall,one of the most famous historical sites in China.
Stretching over 21,000 kilometers,it was originally built to protect ancient China from invasions.Construc-
tion began more than 2,000 years ago and continued through different dynasties.
The Great Wall is not just a wall but amasterpiece of engineering.Its design reflects the wisdom of ancient
Chinese people,who used local materials like stone and brick to adapt to various terrains.As a cultural
symbol,it represents unity and perseverance.In 1987,it was listed as a World Heritage Site by UNESCO.
Today,the Great Wall attracts millions of visitors worldwide.It reminds us of China's rich history and
inspires people to value peace and cultural heritage.Visiting it is like traveling back in time to experience
the greatness of ancient civilization.
【范文一逐段解析】
开头段(基本介绍):
用Hello everyone!Today I want to introduce..开篇,直接点题;核心数据Stretching over
21,000 kilometers和Construction began more than2,000 years ago准确呈现长城规模和历史
深度。
中间段(文化价值):
用masterpiece of engineering强调工程价值,,reflects the wisdom突出古人智慧;cultural symbol
和represents unity and perseverance点明精神内涵;World Heritage Site展示国际认可。
结尾段(现代意义):
通过attracts millions of visitor's说明当代影响力,reminds us of China's rich history和inspires
people to value peace升华文化价值,like traveling back in time生动比喻增强感染力。
【范文二】The Forbidden City:A Palace of Imperial History
选择性必修第一册重庆大学版
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介绍名胜古迹及其文化价值
Good morning,everyone!Let me share with you the Forbidden City,located in the heart of Beijing.Built
in the 15th century,it served as the imperial palace for 24 emperors during the Ming and Qing dynasties.
For nearly 500 years,it was the political and ceremonial center of China.
This magnificent complex covers 720,000 square meters and includes 980 buildings.Its red gates,golden
roofs,and symmetrical layout showcase traditional Chinese architecture.Each hall has unique meanings:
the Hall of Supreme Harmony,for example,was where emperors held important ceremonies.
As a World Heritage Site,the Forbidden City preserves countless cultural relics,such as ancient paintings
and imperial treasures.It not only tells stories of China's imperial past but also symbolizes the country's
profound cultural heritage.Today,it is known as the Palace Museum,welcoming visitors to explore its
grand history.
【范文二逐段解析】
开头段(历史地位):
用Good morning,everyone!!Let me share with you.礼貌开场:关键信息served as the imperial
palace for24 emperors和political and ceremonial center精准概括故宫历史地位;时间表述
Built in the 15 h century清晰明确。
中间段(建筑特色):
通过covers720,000 square meters和980 buildings量化展示规模;red gates,golden roofs,
ymmetrical layout生动描绘建筑特征;Each hall has unique meanings引出具体案例Hall of
Supreme Harmony,增强说服力。
结尾段(文化传承):
preserves countless cultural relics强调文物价值,tells stories..symbolizes..heritage双重表述
深化文化意义;welcoming visitors to explore体现古今连接,结尾自然有力。
高分亮点句型(可直接套用)
历史背景类:
Built in...century served as...for...years/was the center of...
建筑特征类:
covers...square meters /includes...buildings/showcase traditional architecture
文化价值类:
symbolize cultural heritage/represent wisdom and perseverance/preserve cultural relics
现代意义类:
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选择性必修第一册重庆大学版
【U5专版】
介绍名胜古迹及其文化价值
attracts millions of visitors/reminds us of rich history welcomes visitors to explore
仿写练习(结合亮点句型)
请根据以下提示,仿写一篇介绍秦始皇兵马俑的短文(100词左右):
提示:位于西安,1974年发现:数千个真人大小的陶俑:秦始皇陵墓的守卫:展示古代军事艺术:
1987年列入世界遗产。
仿写框架参考:
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常见错误修正(避坑指南)
时态错误:
错误:It is built2,000 years ago.一正确:It was built2,000 years ago.(过去时态)
错误:The Great Wall protect China..→正确:The Great Wall protected China..(历史功能)
冠词缺失:
错误:Itis_World Heritage Site.一正确:a World Heritage Site(可数名词单数)
用词不当:
错误:The Forbidden City is very big.一正确:The Forbidden City covers720,000 square meters.
(精确描述)
核心写作要点
结构清晰:开头(位置+历史背景)一中间(建筑特征+文化价值)→结尾(现代意义),三
段式结构。
数据支撑:必须包含建造时间、规模数据(长度/面积/数量)、列入遗产时间等关键信息。
价值升华:用symbolize/represent点明精神内涵,用remind/inspire强调当代意义
避坑提醒:注意历史描述用过去时,专有名词首字母大写(如World Heritage Site),避免笼统
选择性必修第一册重庆大学版
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介绍名胜古迹及其文化价值
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