话题 6 撰写关于坚持与成功的议论文-2025-2026学年高中英语写作范文集合必修第二册（沪外版）

必修2沪教版（上外版） 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 寒假专版 【B版范文集合】坚持与成功（议论文） 写作范文集合·沪教版必修2 范文赏析 【范文一】The Power of Persistence The Power of Persistence Persistence is the key to success in any endeavor.Throughout history,countless examples have proven that those who stick to their goals despite obstacles eventually achieve great things.Take Thomas Edison,the inventor of the light bulb,as an example.He failed more than a thousand times before finally succeeding. When asked about his failures,he replied,"I have not failed.I've just found 10,000 ways that won't work." This attitude of never giving up is what separates successful people from the rest. In our daily lives,we also face many challenges.Whether it's studying for a difficult exam or learning a new skill,persistence is essential.Without it,we might give up at the first sign of difficulty.However,if we keep trying and learn from our mistakes,we will gradually make progress.Just like a bamboo shoot that pushes through the soil and grows taller every day,our efforts will eventually pay off. So,let's remember that success is not achieved overnight.It requires patience,determination,and most importantly,persistence.As long as we keep moving forward,we will reach our goals. 【范文二】Persistence Leads to Success Persistence Leads to Success Success is a journey that requires not only talent and hard work but also persistence.Many people start with great enthusiasm but give up when they encounter setbacks.However,those who persist in the face of difficulties are the ones who ultimately succeed. Consider the story of J.K.Rowling,the author of the Harry Potter series.Before her books were published, she was rejected by numerous publishers.She faced financial problems and personal struggles,but she never stopped writing.Her persistence eventually paid off,and today she is one of the most successful authors in the world. In our own lives,we can apply the power of persistence.When we encounter problems in our studies, instead of getting discouraged,we should try different approaches and keep practicing.When learning a 1 必修2沪教版（上外版） 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 language,we need to keep speaking and listening every day,even when it's challenging.Over time,these small efforts will accumulate and lead to significant improvement. In conclusion,persistence is the bridge between dreams and reality.By staying committed to our goals and never giving up,we can overcome any obstacle and achieve success. 高分亮点句型（可直接套用） 论点表达类： Persistence is the key to success in any endeavor. Success requires not only talent and hard work but also persistence. 举例论证类： Take...as an example./Consider the story of... This attitude of never giving up is what separates successful people from the rest. 结论升华类： Persistence is the bridge between dreams and reality. By staying committed to our goals,we can overcome any obstacle. 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 请根据以下提示，仿写一篇关于坚持的议论文（120词左右)： 提示：以运动员训练经历为例，说明坚持如何克服困难最终获得成功。需包含具体事例和结论。 仿写框架参考： Persistence is Take as an example.He/She faced but never gave up.Through practice,he/she finally This story proves that In conclusion 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 时态错误： 错误：He face many difficulties.→正确：He faced many difficulties..(过去时) 错误：Persistence lead to success.→正确：Persistence leads to success..(三单) 必修2沪教版（上外版） 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 搭配错误： 错误：give up at difficulties→正确：give up in the face of difficulties 错误：pay on efforts→正确：pay off efforts 逻辑错误： 错误：Persistence is not important..→正确：Persistence is essential..(与主题矛盾) 核心写作要点 三段式结构：论点（首段）→事例论证（中段）一结论升华（尾段） 事例选择：历史人物/当代名人个人经历，需包含具体细节（次数时间/数据） 亮点句型：使用”This proves that..”/The key lies in..”等衔接句式 避免错误：保持时态一致，正确使用短语动词(pay off/give up),避免绝对化表述