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必修第三册重庆大学版
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写作专版
【B版范文集合】介绍一种艺术形式或文化
现象
写作范文集合+逐段解析·重庆大学版必修第三册
范文赏析
【范文一】Chinese Calligraphy:The Art of Words
Chinese Calligraphy:The Art of Words
Calligraphy,one of China'smost cherished traditional arts,combines writing with aesthetics.Using brushes,
ink,and rice paper,artists create characters that balance structure and rhythm.Each stroke carries meaning
-bold lines convey strength,while gentle curves express elegance.
This art form dates back over 3,000 years,evolving from ancient oracle bone inscriptions to today's di-
verse styles like Kaishu (regular script)and Caoshu (cursive script).Beyond writing,calligraphy reflects
Chinese philosophy,emphasizing harmony between man and nature.Practicing it calms the mind,making
it a popular hobby across generations.
In 2009,Chinese calligraphy was inscribed on UNESCO's Representative List of the Intangible Cultural
Heritage of Humanity.It remains not just a skill,but a living tradition connecting past and present.
【范文一逐段解析】
开头段(艺术定义):
用one of China's most cherished traditional arts点明地位;核心句型combines..with.说明艺
术本质;Each stroke carries meaning使用拟人手法增强表现力。
中间段(历史发展):
dates back over3,000 years准确表达历史长度;evolving from.to.展示发展脉络:reflects
hinese philosophy揭示文化内涵;calms the mind说明现代价值。
结尾段(国际认可):
用inscribed on UNESCO'...List强调国际地位:not just a skill,.but a living tradition升华主题,
突出文化传承价值。
【范文二】The Spring Festiva:A Celebration of Tradition
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必修第三册重庆大学版
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The Spring Festival:A Celebration of Tradition
The Spring Festival,or Chinese New Year,is the most important cultural festival in China.Celebrated in
late January or February,it marks the beginning of a new lunar year and a time for family reunions.
Preparations start weeks in advance:households clean thoroughly to sweep away bad luck,decorate doors
with red lanterns and couplets,and prepare dumplings and niangao (sweet rice cakes).On New Year's
Eve,families gather for a feast,watching the CCTV Gala and setting off fireworks at midnight.Children
receive red envelopes (hongbao)with money,symbolizing good fortune.
Though modern customs like digital hongbao have emerged,the festival's core-family,gratitude,and
hope-endures.It'sa vivid display of Chinese values,uniting people worldwide in joyous celebration
【范文二逐段解析】
开头段(节日定位):
用the most important cultural festival确立地位;marks the beginning of..说明时间意义;family
reunions点明核心主题。
中间段(传统习俗):
通过冒号引出Preparations start weeks in advance总述;用sweep away bad luck,red lanterns,
hongbao等具体习俗展示文化细节;symbolizing good fortune解释文化象征。
结尾段(现代传承):
Though modern customs..have emerged对比古今:the festival's core.endures强调永恒价值;
uniting people,worldwide体现文化影响力。
高分亮点句型(可直接套用)
艺术定义类:
one of the most cherished traditional arts,combines...with..,Each...carries meaning
历史发展类:
dates back over...year's,evolving from...to...,was inscribed on UNESCO's List
文化现象类:
the most important cultural festival,marks the beginning of,symbolizing...
现代传承类:
Though modern customs...have emerged,the core...endures,uniting people worldwide
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必修第三册重庆大学版
【写作专版】
U5:介绍艺术形式/文化现象
仿写练习(结合亮点句型)
请根据以下提示,仿写一篇文化介绍(100词左右):
提示:介绍中国传统茶文化(Chinese tea culture),包含:历史(2000多年)、核心精神(和谐/尊
重)、茶具(teapot/cups)、现代价值(放松/社交)。
仿写框架参考:
Chinese tea culture is
It dates back
years and reflects
Traditional tea ceremonies use
The core spirit emphasizes
Today,
remains popular because
It continues to
常见错误修正(避坑指南)
时态错误:
错误:It is date back3000yers.→正确:It dates back3000 years..(個定搭配)
错误:People celebrated it every year.一正确:celebrate(现在时表常态)
冠词缺失:
错误:It is most important festival.→正确:the most important
错误:Harmony between man and nature.→正确:The harmony
文化术语:
错误:red packets→正确:envelopes (hongbao)
错误:write calligraphy→正确:practice/create
核心写作要点
结构清晰:定义说明→历史习俗介绍→现代价值,三段式逻辑递进。
细节支撑:使用具体例子(如Kaishu/red envelopes)避免空泛描述。
文化术语:准确使用专有名词(calligraphy/Spring Festival)并适当解释。
时态规范:历史用过去时,现存传统用现在时,普遍真理用一般现在时。
价值升华:结尾强调文化传承意义或现代影响力。
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