话题 1 撰写敬佩的励志人物短文并附事例-2025-2026学年高中英语写作范文集合必修第二册（沪外版）

必修2沪教版（上外版） 【寒假专版】 B版励志人物短文 寒假专版 【B版范文集合】敬佩的励志人物短文 写作范文集合+逐段解析·沪教版必修2 范文赏析 【范文一】Helen Keller The Inspiring Story of Helen Keller Helen Keller is a person I deeply admire.At the age of 19 months,she lost her sight and hearing due to illness,trapping her in a world of darkness and silence.However,with the help of her teacher Anne Sullivan, she refused to give up.Keller learned to communicate by feeling vibrations and touching lips,eventually mastering reading,writing,and even speaking. One remarkable example is her determination to attend college.Despite the challenges of studying with lim- ited senses,she graduated from Radcliffe College,becoming the first deaf-blind person to earn a bachelor's degree.Keller later dedicated her life to advocating for people with disabilities,proving that courage and perseverance can overcome any obstacle.Her story teaches us that"although the world is full of suffering, it is also full of the overcoming of it." 【范文一逐段解析】 开头段（人物介绍)： 用Helen Keller is a person I deeply admire.点明主题；核心句型At the age of..she lost.描述 困境，However..refused to give up转折突出精神品质。 中间段（具体事例)： 用One remarkable example is..引出典型事例；Despite the challenges..强调克服困难，be coming the first.…突出成就；dedicated her life to..展示人物贡献。 结尾段（启示升华)： 用proving that..can overcome.总结精神品质，Her story teaches us that.引用名言深化主 题，增强说服力。 【范文二】Thomas Edison 必修2沪教版（上外版） 【寒假专版】 B版励志人物短文 Thomas Edison:The Inventor Who Lit Up the World Thomas Edison,one ofhistory's greatest inventors,inspires me with his resilience and creativity.Asa child, he was told he was"too stupid to learn,"but he turned failure into fuel for success.Edison once said,"I have not failed.I've just found 10,000 ways that won't work,"which perfectly reflects his attitude. A striking example is his invention of the practical incandescent light bulb.After thousands of unsuccess- ful experiments with different materials,he finally found that carbonized bamboo filaments worked.This breakthrough not only revolutionized daily life but also laid the foundation for modern electricity.Edison's 1,093 patents and relentless work ethic show that true genius lies in persistence.He reminds us that success is not about avoiding failure,but learning from it. 【范文二逐段解析】 开头段（品质概述)： 用inspires me with his resilience and creativity点明敬佩原因：turned failure into fuel生动比 喻，”I have not failed..”引用名言增强表现力。 中间段（创新事例）： A striking example is..引出核心事例：After thousands of unsuccessful experiments.强调坚 持，finally found.展示突破：not only.but also..说明影响。 结尾段（哲理升华)： 用show that true genius lies in.,揭示成功本质，reminds us that..,总结人生哲理，呼应开头。 高分亮点句型（可直接套用) 人物介绍类： ..is a person I deeply admire./...inspires me with his/her... 困境描述类： At the age of...,he/she lost.../Despite the challenges of...,he/she... 事例引入类： One remarkable example is.../A striking example is... 精神品质类： ..refused to give up./..turned failure into fuel for success. 哲理升华类： This proves that...can overcome.../He/She reminds us that... 必修2沪教版（上外版） 【寒假专版】 B版励志人物短文 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 请根据以下提示，仿写一篇励志人物短文(100词左右)： 提示：选择一位你敬佩的励志人物（如运动员/科学家/艺术家），描述其克服困难的经历和给你的启 示。 仿写框架参考： -is a person I deeply admire.He/She facedwhen_ One remarkable example is_.Despite_,he/she_.This shows his/her extraordinary_ His/Her story teaches us that_.I will apply this lesson by_ 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 时态错误： 错误：She lose her sight..→正确：She lost her sight.(过去时) 错误：Edison says.…→正确：Edison said.(历史事实用过去时) 搭配错误： 错误：dedicated her life for..→正确：dedicated her life to..(固定搭配) 错误：turn failure to fuel→正确：turn failure into fuel(正确介词) 单复数错误： 错误：thousand of experiments→正确：thousands of experiments(复数形式) 核心写作要点 结构清晰：开头（人物+敬佩原因）→中间（具体事例+克服困难过程）→结尾（启示+个 人感悟)。 事例典型：选择1-2个最能体现人物精神的具体事例，用数据/细节增强说服力。 亮点突出：使用直接引语、比喻修辞（如'light up the world')、对比手法（困境vs成就）。 时态准确：描述历史人物用一般过去时，引用名言用现在时/过去时根据语境调整。 启示升华：结尾需明确点出人物精神的现实意义，避免简单重复事例。 3