话题 6 描述正在发生的事情与场景-2025-2026学年七年级下册英语写作范文集合（外研版）

初一下册外研版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 寒假专版 【版范文集合】描述正在发生的事情与场 景 写作范文集合+逐段解析·外研版初一下册 范文赏析 【范文一】A Busy Weekend Morning A Busy Weekend Morning It's Sunday momning,and my family is having a busy but happy time.Look!My father is reading a news- paper on the sofa.My mother is cooking breakfast in the kitchen-she is making eggs and toast.My little sister is playing with her toy cars on the floor.What am I doing?I am cleaning my bedroom.The sun is shining through the window,and I can hear birds singing outside.Everyone is doing something different, but we are all enjoying this peaceful morning together. 【范文一逐段解析】 场景描述： 使用It's Sunday morning点明时间，my family is having a busy but happy time总述家庭状态。 人物活动： 通过Look!引导视觉焦点，is reading/cooking/playing/cleaning展示现在进行时态，破折号补 充细节making eggs and toast。. 环境描写： The sun is shining和birds singing营造氛围，结尾enjoying this peaceful morning升华主题。 【范文二】Our School Playground Now Our School Playground Now It's 4:30 pm,and the school playground is full of students.Many boys are playing football on the big field.Some girls are skipping ropes under the trees.Look!Two teachers are playing basketball with some students.Near the playground gate,a group of students are drawing pictures on the ground with chalk.A few students are sitting on the bench and talking happily.Everyone is having fun.The playground is always 初一下册外研版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 lively at this time! 【范文二逐段解析】 整体场景： It's4:30pm精确时间，is full of students概括场景。 分组描写： 使用Many boys/Some girls/A group of/A few students实现分类描述，Look!强调重点活动。 总结升华： Everyone is having fun总结情绪，always lively at this time点明规律性。 高分亮点句型（可直接套用） 时间定位： It's[时间点J,and./At this time of day. 活动描写： Look![人物]is/are [doing]../[数量词][人物are[doing]. 环境渲染： I can hear/see./The[自然现象]is[doing]. 总结评价： Everyone is[状态]/Everything feels[形容词] 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 请描述公园周末场景(60词左右)： 提示：周日上午，公园里许多人。老人们在打太极拳，孩子们在放风筝，父母们在聊天。湖边有人 画画，小路上有人跑步。 仿写框架： It's-morning.The park-people.Look!Some old men_.The children_.Their parents_ _the lake,a woman.On the path,.Everyone_. 初一下册外研版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 时态错误： 错误：My father read newspaper..→正确：My father is reading newspaper. 主谓一致： 错误：Many boys is playing..一正确：Many boys are playing.. 介词误用： 错误：playing basketball in some students→正确：playing basketball with some students 核心写作要点 时态统一：全文使用现在进行时描述正在发生的动作 空间顺序：按整体→局部”或”远→近”顺序描写场景 感官描写：加入ee/her/feel等感官动词增强画面感 数量分级：灵活使用many/some/afew/a group of量化描述