Unit 5 分享喜欢的短篇故事-2025-2026学年七年级上册英语写作范文集合（鲁教版五四制）

初一上册鲁教版（五四制） 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 寒假专版 【B版范文集合】分享喜欢的短篇故事 写作范文集合·鲁教版（五四制）初一上册 范文赏析 【范文一】ly Favorite Short Story My Favorite Short Story Hello everyone!Today I want to share my favorite short story *TheLittle Prince*.It was written by Antoine de Saint-Exupery.The story is about a little prince who travels from planet to planet.He meets a king,a businessman,and a fox.The fox teaches him that"what is essential is invisible to the eye." I love this story because it shows the importance of friendship and love.The little prince'sjourney teaches us to appreciate simple things.After reading it,I realized that true happiness comes from caring for others. I hope you will read it too! 【范文二】A Story That Changed Me A Story That Changed Me Good morning,class!My favorite short story is *The Boy Who Cried Wolf*.It's a classic Aesop's fable.The story is about a shepherd boy who lies about seeing a wolf to trick the villagers.When a real wolf comes,no one believes him,and his sheep get eaten. This story teaches me the value of honesty.Lying may seem fun at first,but it hurts others and loses trust. Now,I always tell the truth,even when I'm afraid.It's a simple story,but it has a powerful lesson.I think ever yone should read it to learn about responsibility.Thank you! 高分亮点句型（可直接套用） 故事介绍类： My favorite short story is.../It was written by.../The story is about... 人物描写类： He meets.../The...teaches him that.../It's a classic...fable 初一上册鲁教版（五四制） 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 感悟启示类： This story teaches me.../After reading it,I realized.../It shows the importance of... 推荐呼吁类： I hope you will read it too!/Everyone should read it to learn... 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 请根据以下提示，仿写一篇故事分享(80词左右)： 提示：你最喜欢的短篇故事是《龟兔赛跑》(The Tortoise and the Hare),作者是Aesop。故事讲述兔 子嘲笑乌龟速度慢，比赛时免子睡觉导致失败。这个故事教会你坚持的重要性。 仿写框架参考： Hello,everyone!My favorite short story is It was written by The story is about This story teaches me Therabbit but the tortoise After reading it, I realized I think everyone should read it to learn about Thank you! 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 时态错误： 错误：The story teach me..一→正确：The story teaches me..(第三人称单数) 错误：I realized that true happiness come from.→正确：comes from..（主谓一致) 冠词错误： 错误：It's classic Aesop's fable→正确：a classic Aesop's fable(缺少不定冠词) 标点错误： 错误：He meets king businessman and fox→正确：a king,a businessman,nd a fox(缺少逗号 和冠词) 核心写作要点 2 初一上册鲁教版（五四制） 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 结构清晰：开头（问候+故事名称）→中间（作者情节概述）→感悟（学到的道理）→结尾 (推荐呼吁)。 信息完整：必写：故事名称、作者、核心情节；选写：具体人物、关键台词、个人感悟。 时态准确：故事概述用一般现在时，个人感悟用一般过去时或现在时。 亮点加分：使用直接引语（如'what is essential.”)、because连接原因、should表达建议。