话题 1 自我介绍姓名年龄国籍爱好等基本信息-2025-2026学年七年级上册英语写作范文集合（人教版）

初一上册人教版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 寒假专版 【B版范文集合】自我介绍（姓名/年龄国 籍/爱好) 写作范文集合+逐段解析·人教版初一上册 范文赏析 【范文一】活泼型自我介绍（适合课堂/社团展示） Hello,Everyone! Hello,everyone!My name is Zhang Wei.I am thirteen years old.I come from Beijing,China.Now I am a student in Class Three,Grade Seven. I have several hobbies.Swimming is my favorite sport.I go swimming with my father every Sunday.I also enjoy drawing pictures,especially animals.My favorite subject is Math,because I like solving problems.I am excited to meet new friends here. If you share the same hobbies or want to study together,please talk to me.Let's enjoy our school life!Thank you! 【范文一逐段解析】 开头段（基本信息）： 用Hello,.everyone!开篇，亲切自然；核心句型My name is../I am...years old/I come from., 是自我介绍必备基础句型，信息完整且简洁。 中间段（兴趣拓展）： 用I have several hobbies.引出爱好，再用Swimming is my favorite sport.强调最爱；通过evey Sunday/especially animals补充细节，让内容更生动：用because解释喜欢数学的原因，逻辑 清晰。 结尾段（友好互动)： 用If you share the same hobbies..发出邀请，et's enjoy our school life!!结尾积极向上，符合 初一学生的表达风格。 【范文二】文静型自我介绍（适合正式场合/新班级） 初一上册人教版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 My Self-introduction Good afternoon,everyone!My name is Chen Yu.I am twelve years old and I was born in Shanghai.There are four people in my family:my parents,my little sister and me. I am a quiet girl with long hair.I am careful and love reading storybooks.I often spend my free time in the school library.I can speak a little English and I want to improve it.My favorite season is autumn because the weather is cool I hope to learn more from my classmates and teachers.Let's be friends and grow together!Thank you! 【范文二逐段解析】 开头段（身份背景)： 用Good afternoon,,everyone!适配正式场合；新增I was born in../There are..people in my family补充家庭信息，内容更丰富；用冒号列举家人，格式规范。 中间段（性格+爱好)： 用I am a quiet girl with long hair.描述外貌性格，careful是初一重点形容词；spend.in the library是高频句型，can speak a little English/want to improve it表达学习目标，真实且贴合 学情。 结尾段（学习期望）： 用I hope to learn more from.表达谦逊的学习态度，grow together比单纯说be friends'”更有 深度，是高分亮点。 高分亮点句型（可直接套用） 基本信息类： I was born in...()/I am a student in Class...Grade.../There are...people in my family. 兴趣爱好类： My favorite...is...because.../I enjoy doing sth./I often spend my free time (in)doing sth. 性格/能力类： I am a..(形容词)boy/girl/I can speak a little../I want to improve my.. 结尾友好类： Let's...together!/I hope to make friends with you/I am excited to meet new friends. 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 初一上册人教版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 请根据以下提示，仿写一篇自我介绍（80词左右)： 提示：姓名Li Ming,l2岁，来自广州，七年级二班：爱好打篮球（每周六打），喜欢语文（因为喜 欢读故事)：性格开朗，希望和同学一起学习进步。 仿写框架参考： Hello,everyone!Myname is Li Ming.I am years old.I come from I am a student in I like best.I play it every My favorite subject isbecause I am a boy. I hope to with my classmates.Let's together！Thank you！ 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 语法错误： 错误：Iaml2 year old.→正确：Iam12 years old.(年龄的复数形式) 错误：I like play basketball..一正确：I like playing basketball.(like后接动名词) 表达冗余： 错误：My name is Li Ming,I am Li Ming.→正确：My name is Li Ming.(避免重复) 逻辑错误： 错误：I come from China,Beijing.→正确：I come from Beijing,China.(地点顺序：小→大) 核心写作要点 结构清晰：开头（问候+基本信息）→中间（爱好性格/家庭）→结尾（友好意愿），三段式 最稳妥。 信息完整：必写：姓名、年龄、年级班级：选写：家庭、爱好、性格（至少选1个拓展）。 亮点加分：用because解释原因、用often/every week补充频率、用hope/want to表达目标。 避坑提醒：注意名词复数(years/classes)、动名词(playing/reading)、地点顺序（小地点在前）。 3