话题 8 谈论季节与天气对应的活动-2025-2026学年七年级上册英语写作范文集合（外研版）

初一上册外研版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 寒假专版 【B版范文集合】谈论季节与天气对应的活 动 写作范文集合+逐段解析·外研版初一上册 范文赏析 【范文一】季节与活动 Seasons and Activities There are four seasons in a year.Spring is warm and rainy.I often fly kites in the park with my friends.In summer,it's hot and sunny.I like swimming in the pool and eating ice cream.Autumn is cool and windy. I usually pick apples with my family.Winter is cold and snowy.I often make snowmen and go skating.I love all seasons! 【范文一逐段解析】 季节特征描述： 使用Spring is warm and rainy.等句型准确描述季节特征；in summer/autumn/winter时间状 语位置规范。 活动表达： I often fly kites.../I like swimming.等结构清晰展示不同季节活动：频率副词ofte/usually使 用恰当。 情感表达： 结尾句Ilove all seasons!简洁有力，表达积极情感。 【范文二】我最爱的季节 My Favorite Season My favorite season is summer.The weather is hot,so I can wear T-shirts and shorts.I often go to the beach with my parents.We swim in the sea and build sandcastles.Sometimes I eat watermelon with my brother. It's so sweet!Summer is a great season for fun activities.I always have a happy time in summer. 1 初一上册外研版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 【范文二逐段解析】 主题明确： 开篇直接点题My favorite season is summer..:用so连接天气与穿着，展示因果关系。 活动细节： swim in the sea/build sandcastles等具体活动描述；sometimes丰富活动频率表达。 感官描写： It's so sweet!添加味觉描写；结尾always have a happy time强化情感表达。 高分亮点句型（可直接套用） 季节特征： Spring is warm and rainy./The weather is hot and sunny. 活动表达： I often..in(季节)./Ilike doing.when it's(天气). 偏好表达： My favorite season is...because.../...is a great season for... 情感表达： I love all seasons!/I always have a happy time in... 仿写练习（结合亮点句型） 请根据以下提示，仿写一篇关于季节的短文(60词左右)： 提示：你最喜欢的季节，该季节的天气特点，你经常做的2-3项活动，喜欢的原因。 仿写框架参考： My favorite season is The weather is and I often with my Sometimes I I like this season because It'sa season! 常见错误修正（避坑指南） 2 初一上册外研版 【寒假专版】 B版写作范文集合 季节名称： 错误：I like spring season.→正确：I like spring:(季节名单独使用) 天气描述： 错误：It'ssow.一正确：t's snowy.(形容词形式) 活动表达： 错误：I go swim.→正确：I go swimming.(动名词结构) 核心写作要点 结构清晰：开篇点题→天气特征→季节活动→情感表达，四要素缺一不可。 天气词汇：准确使用wam//rainy/hot//suny/cool/windy/cold/snowy等形容词。 活动搭配：fly kites,,go swimming,.pick apples,make snowmen等固定搭配要记牢。 频率副词：合理使用often/usually/sometimes/always使表达更自然。