内容正文:
初一上册人教版
【寒假专版】
B版写作范文集合
寒假专版
【B版范文集合】写初中入学自我介绍
写作范文集合+逐段解析·教科社+外研社六上
范文赏析
【范文一】活泼型自我介绍(适合课堂/社团展示)
Hello,Everyone!
Hello,everyone!My name is Zhang Wei.I am thirteen years old.I am excited to be a student in Grade
Seven.
I have a lot of hobbies.I enjoy playing football with my friends every weekend.It makes me strong and
happy.I also love drawing pictures,especially cartoons.My favorite subject is Math,because solving
problems is like a fun game for me.I am looking forward to making new friends here.
If you share the same hobbies or just want to talk,please come and say hi.Let'shave a great time in middle
school together!Thank you!
【范文一逐段解析】
开头段(基本信息):
用Hello,.everyone!开篇,亲切自然;核心句型My name is../Iam.years old是自我介绍必
备基础句型,信息完整且简洁。
中间段(兴趣拓展):
用I have a lot of hobbies..引出爱好,再用I enjoy playing football.,强调运动;通过every
weekend/especially cartoons补充细节,让内容更生动:用because解释喜欢数学的原因,逻
辑清晰。
结尾段(友好互动):
用If you share the same hobbies..发出邀请,Let's have a great time.结尾积极向上,符合
初一学生的表达风格。
【范文二】文静型自我介绍(适合正式场合/新班级)
初一上册人教版
【寒假专版】
B版写作范文集合
My Self-introduction
Good morning,teachers and classmates!My name is Chen Yu.I come from a small town near here.There
are four people in my family-my parents,my little sister and me.
I am a quiet girl with long hair.I am kind and always ready to help others.I like reading storybooks very
much.I usually read for an hour before going to bed.I can also play the piano a little.My favorite season
is spring,because everything turns green and beautiful
I am so happy to join this class.I hope we can learn from each other and become good friends.Thank you!
【范文二逐段解析】
开头段(身份背景):
用Good morning,teachers and classmates!适配正式场合;新增I come from./There are.
people in my family补充家庭信息,内容更丰富:用破折号列举家人,格式规范。
中间段(性格+爱好):
用I am a quiet girl with long hair.描述外貌性格,kind是初一重点形容词;read for an hour
before going to bed是高频句型,can play the piano a little表达特长,真实且贴合学情。
结尾段(学习期望):
用Ihope we can learn from each other..表达谦逊的学习态度,become good friends自然亲切,
符合新生身份。
高分亮点句型(可直接套用)
基本信息类:
I come from.../There are...people in my family /I am excited to be...
兴趣爱好类:
I enjoy playing.../I love drawing...especially.../My favorite...is...because..
性格/能力类:
Ima.(形容词boy/girl/I am always ready to../Ican..a little
结尾友好类:
If you share...please come and.../I hope we can...together Let's have a great time...
仿写练习(结合亮点句型)
初一上册人教版
【寒假专版】
B版写作范文集合
请根据以下提示,仿写一篇自我介绍(80词左右):
提示:姓名Li Hua,14岁,来自南京,七年级一班;爱好打篮球(每周三训练),喜欢英语(因为
喜欢看电影):性格开朗,希望和同学一起学习英语。
仿写框架参考:
Hello,everyone!My name is
I am
years old.I come from
I enjoy
every
My favorite subject is
because
I hope
with my classmates.Let's
together!
常见错误修正(避坑指南)
语法错误:
错误:I am thirteen year old.一正确:I am thirteen years old,.(年龄的复数形式)
错误:I enjoy play football.→正确:I enjoy playing footbal.(njoy后接动名词)
表达冗余:
错误:My name is Zhang Wei,.I am Zhang Wei..→正确:My name is Zhang Wei.(避免重复)
逻辑错误:
错误:I come from China,a small town.→正确:I come from a small town in China.(地点顺序:
小→大)
核心写作要点
结构清晰:开头(问候+基本信息)→中间(爱好/性格/家庭)→结尾(友好意愿),三段式
最稳妥。
信息完整:必写:姓名、年龄、年级;选写:家庭、爱好、性格(至少选1个拓展)。
亮点加分:用because解释原因、用频率词(every week/usually)补充细节、用looking for1 ward
to表达期待。
避坑提醒:注意名词复数(years/hobbies、入动名词(playing/reading)、地点表达(小地点+in+
大地点)。
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