内容正文:
主题12自然生态与环境保护
。主题探究
①个人经历与感悟:感受自然的力量;观察动植物,体验四季变
化;通过镜头记录自然之美
亲近自然
②亲近自然的好处:缓解压力;培养观察力;激发对自然的热爱
自然生态与
①个人行动:践行低碳生活(减少塑料使用等);垃圾分类;资源再利用
环境保护
②集体责任:校园环保活动;城市美化;旅游时注意环保;保护野生
保护环境
动物;节约用水
③科技创新:环保作品展(变废为宝等)》
⊙主题短语积累
角度1亲近自然
l5.relax in nature在自然中放松
11.throw sth.around/about到处乱
1.get close to nature
亲近自然
16.appreciate the charm of nature
扔某物
2.be in harmony with nature与自然
欣赏自然的魅力
12.call on sb.to do sth.号召某人
和谐相处
17.watch the sunrise/sunset观看日
做某事
3.get along with nature与自然和睦
出/日落
l3.close down the factories关闭
相处
角度2保护环境
工厂
4.explore the natural world探索自
1.cut down砍倒
然世界
14.make good use of sth./put sth.to
2.bein(great)danger处于(极大
5.be attracted by被…吸引
good use好好利用某物
的)危险中
6.be worth visiting值得参观
15.play a role/,part in.在…中
7.set off动身;启程
3.at a cost of以…为代价
起作用
8.natural wonders自然奇观
4.result in/lead to导致;造成
l6.have an influence on对…有
9.tourist attraction旅游景,点
5.change the situation改变局面
影响/起作用
l0.have fun/enjoy oneself玩得开心
6.global warming全球变暖
11.be known for因…而闻名
7.plastic bags塑料袋
17.take action采取行动
8.public transportation公共交通
l8.protect.from/against..保护
12.leave a deep impression on sb.
9.be bad for be harmful to do
…免受…
给某人留下深刻印象
l3.ride bicycles骑自行车
harm to=do damage to对…有
19.pay attention to注意
14.breathe the fresh air take in
害
20.pick up捡起
fresh air呼吸新鲜空气
10.die out灭绝;消失
21.single-use products一次性产品
主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
@角度1)亲近自然
1.It reminds us that the best things in life are free-laughter,friends,fam-
1)我确信在清新的空气中散步
ily,and the beauty of nature and the countryside.[RJAU8]
会很放松。[用句型“be sure+
2.I'm sure it'll be fantastic to see the city from the top.[WYA M8]
(that)从句”仿写]
3.The mountain scenery is so beautiful that it takes my breath away.(take
one's breath away令人惊叹/震撼到屏住呼吸)[新教材RJ八上Ul]
4.The colour white meets your eyes all round.The clouds are clean and2)贵州的黄果树瀑布美得让我
soft,like our white sheep.[新教材WY七下U5]
说不出话。[用短语“take one's
5.Watching the sunset over the lake is one of the most beautiful things in
breath away”仿写]
the world.(one of+the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数,意为“最…
的…之一”)
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6.Being close to nature makes me appreciate the beauty of life.
3)参与环境保护的人越多,我们
7.The more you enjoy nature,the happier you will be.
的地球就会越好。[用句型“The
8.Getting close to nature can not only help us relax,but also help us de-
+比较级,the+比较级”仿写]
velop a healthy lifestyle.
②角度2保护环境
1.All these small things could add up and become big things that would
4)他们在尽最大的努力告诉人们
improve the environment.[RJ九全Ul3]
节约用水的重要性。[用结构“y
2.We cannot hope for rapid change,but let's take these simple steps
one's best to do sth.”仿写]
today.[WY九上M12]
3.I've already tried my best to protect the environment.[WY M12]
4.Put waste into different bins so that it can be recycled properly.(so that
5)我们必须减少塑料垃圾,以便
引导目的状语从句,意为“这样;以便”)
保护更多动物免受伤害。[用
5.If we don't take action,pollution from factories will spread over cities
连词词组“so that”仿写]
and villages,and make people ill.(if引导的条件状语从句)
⊙真题剖析
[2024广东深圳改编]假设你是李华,你的作品在“The Beauty of Na-
【审题】
ture”主题摄影展上获得了一等奖。你的英语老师邀请你在“英语一分
主题:“The Beauty of Nature”摄影
钟演讲”上给同学们做分享。要点如下:
比赛的获奖感言
1.摄影的时间、地点、内容;
文体:
文
2.选这张照片的原因;
人称:以第
人称为主
3.参赛感受。
时态:用
时和
时
写作要求:
要点:
1.词数为80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数);
①描述拍摄照片的时间、地点、内容
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
②解释选这张照片的原因
Dear
③表达参赛感受
That'sall!Thank you!
【写作框架】
开头:简要说
明获奖的情况
并引出所拍照
开头示例句:I am really happy that..I am honored to win.…
片主题
可选择分段/不分段:
中间:1.描述
l.①明确拍摄照片的时间、地点:I took this photo in../
拍摄照片的时
摄影比赛获奖感言
间、地点、内
My photo was taken in...
(格式已给出)
容
②内容:In the photo,you can see...the whole picture
2.解释选这张
makes people feel...
照片的原因
2.解释选这张照片的原因:Here are the two/three reasons
why I chose the photo.Firstly...Besides...
结尾:表达参
赛感受并发出
结尾示例句:Just use your cameras or phones to record the
号召
beautiful natural scenery around you
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【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Dear everyone,
①将主动语态改为被动语态升格句子:
I am Li Hui.I am really happy that I won a prize in the photography
competition.Now I would like to share something about my photo
with you.
DI took this photo in Shenzhen Bay Park on a sunny morning.
In the photo,you can see the blue sea as well as the blue sky.2The
②用there be句型及定语从句合并两个
clouds were clean and soft in the sky.They were like white sheep.
句子:
And in the distance stood some hills.(要点1:描述拍摄照片的时
间、地,点、内容)Here are the two reasons why I chose the photo.
Firstly,it perfectly conveys nature's magic.I want to share that sense
of peace and wonder with others.Besides,this place is special to me
because I often go there with my family and friends..(要点2:解释
③用短语“in one's opinion'”替换“I think”
选这张照片的原因)
升格句子:
3I think this photography competition tells us that the beauty of
nature is close to us in our daily life.Just use your cameras or phones
to record the beautiful natural scenery around you.(要,点3:表达参
赛感受)
That'sall!Thank you!
写作积累:
1.share sth.with sb.与某人分享某事/物
2.as well as和…一样
3.the reason why句式结构
马实战演练
你校英文网站正在开展以“My Eco-Friendly Campus Project'”为主题的征文活动。请根据下方思维导图
提示,描述你设计的校园环保方案,说明怎么做并阐述其意义。
energy-saving
1.turn off lights when not in use
measures
2.
(至少补充1点)
How to do it?
green education
l.organize monthly eco-workshops(生态工作坊)
My Eco-Friendly
activities
2.(至少补充1点)
Campus Project
develop green habits
Why is it meaningful?
(至少补充2点)
写作要求:
1.可适当添加细节使内容连贯;
2.词数80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3.不得出现真实校名、姓名等个人信息。
My Eco-Friendly Campus Project
I have designed an environmental protection project to make our school greener.
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贵州新中考英语主题写作进阶真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;一;一般过去
【润色与升格】
1Though I'm fond of crazy about the topic,I was very nervous
about speaking in public.
2When the big day came,my heart beat so fast that I was una-
ble to say a single word.
3Once we step out of our comfort zone and give it a try,we can
get over our inner fears.
实战演练
【高分范文】
My Dream Job
Everyone has his or her own dream job and each job has its
meaning.I also have my dream job.
I want to be a teacher when I grow up.I think teachers are
great.On the one hand,they teach their students much knowl-
edge.On the other hand,they can learn something new from
their students while teaching.What's more,I think teachers can
be forever young by teaching and playing with kids.So I think
this job is meaningful.
To turn my dream into reality,I should study academic
subjects diligently and explore educational books in my free
time.Additionally,I've volunteered to help classmates with
their homework,which has improved my communication skills
and deepened my understanding of teaching.
I firmly believe that as long as I persist,I will stand on the
teaching platform one day.
主题10人际交往与团队合作
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)You should make friends with people who have something in
common with you.
2)My problem is that I am afraid to communicate/of communi-
cating with others.
3)We are always ready to help each other by lending a hand.
4)No matter how different our opinions are,we should respect
each other in a team.
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;一;一股现在;一;一般过去
【润色与升格】
DTeamwork plays a key role in both our study and daily life
2I still remember a basketball match in Grade 8 that taught me
a meaningful lesson.
3It also made me realize the importance of communication as
well as trust among team members.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Hello,everyone!I am Li Hua.Here is the survey result
on how kids communicate with their parents.55%of the
students communicate with their parents face to face.20%of
the students share a meal with their parents for communication.
17%of the students travel with their parents for communica-
tion.8%of the students communicate with their parents
through other ways.As we grow older,we'll find it's not easy to
communicate with our parents openly.So what should we do
when communicating with them?Here are some of my ideas.
Firstly,we can make a list of things our parents and we
disagree about most.Then Try to find out the reasons.Second-
ly,we should talk with them more!Sharing ideas can make us
closer.Besides,we should also learn how to really listen.Fi-
nally,be sure to be polite.We are a family and we love each
other.
All in all,don't keep your thoughts from parents.Commu-
nicating more lets you and them understand each other better.
主题11网络安全与科技
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)As is known to all,many students are interested in surfing
the Internet.
2)If you often visit unsafe websites,your personal information
will be at risk/in danger
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3)It's unbelievable that Al's learning ability is faster than
we imagined.
4)The progress of science and technology makes great contribu-
tions to making our life more convenient.
真题剖析
【审
议论;三
一般现在;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
Some of us hold the opinion that it is not only convenient and
easy but also can save us much time.
2Besides,instead of really understanding the knowledge,we
just copy the answers without knowing the reason.
3As far as I'm concerned,we students should use the Internet
wisely to study well and get rid of the disadvantages of the In-
ternet.
4Only in this way can we really learn and grow.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Tina,
With the rapid development of the Internet,it's much
easier for us to get information online.Meanwhile,there are
also some hidden dangers that we can't see through.Sometimes
we may see some negative and harmful information which is bad
for our mental needs.
To stay safe online,I'd like to suggest several ways.First,
protect our private information,which means we can't give out
our private addresses or phone numbers.Then,don't visit un-
known websites or click the unknown e-mails.It can help keep
us away from dangers.Never meet online friends alone or give
our real names,telephone numbers to anyone online.Tell our
parents who we are in touch with online.Call the police for help
when we are in danger.
Let's work together to create a safer online environment.
Li Hua,China
主题12
自然生态与环境保护
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)I'm sure (that)it'll be relaxing to walk in the fresh air.
2)Huangguoshu Waterfall in Guizhou is so beautiful that it
takes my breath away.
3)The more people join in environmental protection,the better
our planet will be.
4)They are trying their best to tell people the importance of sav-
ing water.
5)We must reduce plastic waste so that we can protect more
animals from being harmed.
真题剖析
【审题】
应用;一;一般过去;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DThis photo was taken in Shenzhen Bay Park on a sunny morn-
ing.
2 There were clean and soft clouds in the sky that which were
like white sheep.
3In my opinion,this photography competition tells us that the
beauty of nature is close to us in our daily lives.
实战演练
【高分范文】
My Eco-Friendly Campus Project
I have designed an environmental protection project to
make our school greener.
For energy-saving measures,besides turning off lights
when not in use,we'll also set up a system to remind us to turn
off the electrical devices which are not used.
When it comes to green education activities,we will not
only organize eco-workshops every month,but also hold a
"Green Creativity Competition"each term in order to encourage
students to make handicrafts from recycled materials.
As far as I'm concerned,this project is meaningful because
it helps us develop green habits in our daily life.What's more,
it raises our environmental awareness and makes us have a sense
of responsibility.Moreover,through creative activities,it in-
spires our innovation while protecting the campus environment.
J)
参考答案及解析