内容正文:
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;一;一般过去
【润色与升格】
1Though I'm fond of crazy about the topic,I was very nervous
about speaking in public.
2When the big day came,my heart beat so fast that I was una-
ble to say a single word.
3Once we step out of our comfort zone and give it a try,we can
get over our inner fears.
实战演练
【高分范文】
My Dream Job
Everyone has his or her own dream job and each job has its
meaning.I also have my dream job.
I want to be a teacher when I grow up.I think teachers are
great.On the one hand,they teach their students much knowl-
edge.On the other hand,they can learn something new from
their students while teaching.What's more,I think teachers can
be forever young by teaching and playing with kids.So I think
this job is meaningful.
To turn my dream into reality,I should study academic
subjects diligently and explore educational books in my free
time.Additionally,I've volunteered to help classmates with
their homework,which has improved my communication skills
and deepened my understanding of teaching.
I firmly believe that as long as I persist,I will stand on the
teaching platform one day.
主题10人际交往与团队合作
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)You should make friends with people who have something in
common with you.
2)My problem is that I am afraid to communicate/of communi-
cating with others.
3)We are always ready to help each other by lending a hand.
4)No matter how different our opinions are,we should respect
each other in a team.
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;一;一股现在;一;一般过去
【润色与升格】
DTeamwork plays a key role in both our study and daily life
2I still remember a basketball match in Grade 8 that taught me
a meaningful lesson.
3It also made me realize the importance of communication as
well as trust among team members.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Hello,everyone!I am Li Hua.Here is the survey result
on how kids communicate with their parents.55%of the
students communicate with their parents face to face.20%of
the students share a meal with their parents for communication.
17%of the students travel with their parents for communica-
tion.8%of the students communicate with their parents
through other ways.As we grow older,we'll find it's not easy to
communicate with our parents openly.So what should we do
when communicating with them?Here are some of my ideas.
Firstly,we can make a list of things our parents and we
disagree about most.Then Try to find out the reasons.Second-
ly,we should talk with them more!Sharing ideas can make us
closer.Besides,we should also learn how to really listen.Fi-
nally,be sure to be polite.We are a family and we love each
other.
All in all,don't keep your thoughts from parents.Commu-
nicating more lets you and them understand each other better.
主题11网络安全与科技
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)As is known to all,many students are interested in surfing
the Internet.
2)If you often visit unsafe websites,your personal information
will be at risk/in danger
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3)It's unbelievable that Al's learning ability is faster than
we imagined.
4)The progress of science and technology makes great contribu-
tions to making our life more convenient.
真题剖析
【审
议论;三
一般现在;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
Some of us hold the opinion that it is not only convenient and
easy but also can save us much time.
2Besides,instead of really understanding the knowledge,we
just copy the answers without knowing the reason.
3As far as I'm concerned,we students should use the Internet
wisely to study well and get rid of the disadvantages of the In-
ternet.
4Only in this way can we really learn and grow.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Tina,
With the rapid development of the Internet,it's much
easier for us to get information online.Meanwhile,there are
also some hidden dangers that we can't see through.Sometimes
we may see some negative and harmful information which is bad
for our mental needs.
To stay safe online,I'd like to suggest several ways.First,
protect our private information,which means we can't give out
our private addresses or phone numbers.Then,don't visit un-
known websites or click the unknown e-mails.It can help keep
us away from dangers.Never meet online friends alone or give
our real names,telephone numbers to anyone online.Tell our
parents who we are in touch with online.Call the police for help
when we are in danger.
Let's work together to create a safer online environment.
Li Hua,China
主题12
自然生态与环境保护
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)I'm sure (that)it'll be relaxing to walk in the fresh air.
2)Huangguoshu Waterfall in Guizhou is so beautiful that it
takes my breath away.
3)The more people join in environmental protection,the better
our planet will be.
4)They are trying their best to tell people the importance of sav-
ing water.
5)We must reduce plastic waste so that we can protect more
animals from being harmed.
真题剖析
【审题】
应用;一;一般过去;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DThis photo was taken in Shenzhen Bay Park on a sunny morn-
ing.
2 There were clean and soft clouds in the sky that which were
like white sheep.
3In my opinion,this photography competition tells us that the
beauty of nature is close to us in our daily lives.
实战演练
【高分范文】
My Eco-Friendly Campus Project
I have designed an environmental protection project to
make our school greener.
For energy-saving measures,besides turning off lights
when not in use,we'll also set up a system to remind us to turn
off the electrical devices which are not used.
When it comes to green education activities,we will not
only organize eco-workshops every month,but also hold a
"Green Creativity Competition"each term in order to encourage
students to make handicrafts from recycled materials.
As far as I'm concerned,this project is meaningful because
it helps us develop green habits in our daily life.What's more,
it raises our environmental awareness and makes us have a sense
of responsibility.Moreover,through creative activities,it in-
spires our innovation while protecting the campus environment.
J)
参考答案及解析主题10人际交往与团队合作
。主题探究
①与家人、朋友或老师沟通的经历与启发
人际关系(家庭
同伴、师生)
②与家人、朋友或老师沟通的方法及建议
描述人际交往
①讲述与他人或自己内心发生的冲突和解决方式
人际交往与
中的问题与建
②讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议
团队合作
议或解决方案
①分享自己团队协作的经历,并谈谈感悟或看法
团队合作
②写一封关于表扬团队合作的表扬信
③写一篇关于团队合作的演讲稿
⊙主题短语积累
角度1人际关系(家庭、同伴、师生)
2.have difficulty (in)doing sth.
5.keep a good mood保持好心情
1.get on/along with..与…和睦
某事有困难
6.talk with sb.face to face和某人
相处
3.be afraid to do sth.害怕做某事
2.have a close relationship with...
面对面谈话
4.feel lonely and nervous感到孤独
和…有亲密的关系
和紧张
7.bring you closer together让你们
3.company with their family陪伴他
5.under much pressure在很多压力
更紧密
们的家人
4.be good with sb.善于和某人打交道
之下
8.There is no need to worry about...
5.share joy with.…和…分享喜悦
6.lack communication缺乏交流
没有必要担心…
6.overcome any difficulties克服任
7.ignore one's feelings忽略某人的
角度3团队合作
何困难
感受
7.bring us warmth and courage带给
(2)建议或解决方案
l.help out(帮助…)分担工作、
我们温暖和勇气
1.advise sb.to do sth.suggest
解决问题
8.bring out the best in me使我表
doing sth.建议(某人)做某事
2.believe in/trust sb.信任某人
现出最好的一面
2.be friendly/kind/nice to sb.对某
角度2描述人际交往中的问题
3.be responsible for...对…负责
与建议或解决方案
人友好/友善
4.pul/work together齐心协力
(1)问题
3.be patient with sb.对某人有耐心
5.develop team spirit培养团队精神
1.argue/fight with sb.和某人吵架/
4.reach for one's hand向某人伸出
打架
援手
6.achieve success获得成功
)主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
色角度1人际关系(家庭、同伴、师生)
1.The more I get to know Julie,the more I realized that we have a lot in!l)你应该和与你有共同之处的
common.[RJ九全U11]
人交朋友。[用短语“have.in
2.Mr Brown always took the time to explain things to me clearly whenever
common'”仿写]
I couldn't understand anything.[RJ九全U1l4]
3.My parents are very understanding.When I fail my exam,they never push
me so hard.(when引导时间状语从句,举例说明父母很善解人意)
4.I think friends are like books-we don't need a lot of them as long as
they're good.(as long as引导条件状语从句)
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@角度2描述人际交往中的问题与建议或解决方案
(1)问题
2)我的问题是害怕和别人交流。
1.Every time I heard the other students talking and laughing.I felt even
[用that引导的表语从句仿写]
more lonely.[WY八下M9]
2.My problem is that I can't get on with my family.(that引导表语从句
引出问题)》
3.When they argue,it's like a big,black cloud hanging over our home.
(使用比喻的修辞,使句子更加形象)
4.Your best friend does not trust you anymore.(固定搭配not.anymore
3)我们总是乐于互相帮助,伸出
说明问题)
援手。[用短语“each other”仿
5.I'm stressed because my parents always push me to get an A in the exam.
写]
(2)建议或解决方案
1.You're halfway to solving a problem just by talking to someone about
it![RJ八上U10]
2.We should respect each other's differences and learn from each other.
[新教材J八上U10]
3.I think the first step is to find someone you trust to talk to.
@角度3团队合作
1.But I think if we continue to pull together,we're going to win the next
4)在团队中,无论我们的意见有
game.[RJ九全Ul1]
多不同,都应该互相尊重。[用
2.By cooperating with other people,we can make progress in both the
“no matter how引导的让步状语
project and self--improvement.(①cooperate with sb.与某人合作;
从句”仿写]
②make progress取得进步)
3.Through this game,I deeply realize that in a team,we can't achieve suc-
cess no matter how excellent each one is.The key to success is team-
work.[①no matter how引导让步状语从句;②the key to(doing)sth.
(做)某事的关键]
⊙真题剖析
[2025遵义汇川六模]回顾初中三年,团结合作在我们的学习和生活
【审题】
中都发挥着重要作用,在初中生涯中,你一定运用团结的力量解决过
主题:团队合作
些困难的事。为发扬团结合作精神,校英文广播站正在开展主题为
“Teamwork Makes Me
”的征文活动,请你根据下列思维导图
文体:
文
并结合自身经历,写一篇不少于80词的短文投稿。
要点:
根据make的用法可知,make sb.后跟形
要求:
容词(词组)或动词原形(词组)。此
①团队合作的重要性
处所填词(词组)应能体现团队合作对
1.用适当的词补全标题;
“我”产生的积极影响。可参考的词汇
②一次团队合作的经历
有:grow,strong,successful.
③这次经历的影响
2.包含图中所有信息,可适当拓展;
3.文中不得出现真实校名、人名、地名。
人称和时态:
要点①、③:人称用第
Teamwork Makes Me
称,时态用
时
The importance
Your experience
The influence
要点②:人称用第
人称,
of teamwork
of teamwork
of this experience
时态用
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【写作框架】
开头示例句:Teamwork can help us overcome difficulties
开头:点明团
and achieve success more easily.
队合作的重要
性(引出主题)
Word bank:play a key role,overcome difficulties,achieve
success,make things easier,bring more joy
可参考的团队经历:
Teamwork Makes
中间:讲述一
basketball match cooperation,class project group division,
次团队合作的
class cleaning.class art show,school charity sale
Me
经历
Word bank:work together,try one's best to cooperate,share
responsibilities,achieve the goal together
结尾:总结这
结尾示例句:This experience made me understand the power
次团队合作经
of teamwork.
历的收获及感
Word bank:realize the power of teamwork,value the spirit
悟
of cooperation,look forward to more teamwork
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Teamwork Makes Me Grow
①用短语“play a key role”替换“impor-
DTeamwork is important in both our study and daily life.It can
tant”升格句子:
help us overcome difficulties and achieve success more easily.(要,点
1:团队合作的重要性)
2I still remember a basketball match in Grade 8.It taught me
a meaningful lesson.At first,we didn't cooperate well.As a result,
we fell behind.Then,our leader called us together and we discussed
②用that引导的定语从句连接两个
how to play better.We realized that only by working together could
句子:
we have a chance to win.In the next few minutes,we passed the ball
to each other smoothly and tried our best to cooperate.Finally,we
won the game.(要,点2:一次团队合作的经历)
This experience made me understand the power of teamwork.
③用短语“as well as'”替换“and”升格
Working together is the key to success.3It also made me realize the
句子:
importance of communication and trust among team members.In the
future,I will always remember the power of teamwork and be a better
team player.(要,点3:这次经历的影响)
实战演练
良好的亲子关系是孩子健康成长的基石。假如你是李华,你校英语社团对“孩子与父母沟通方式”展开
了调查。请根据以下调查结果,为下周国旗下讲话写一篇发言稿。
要点如下:
The percentage of communication ways with parents
1.简要描述调查结果;
2.提出与父母有效沟通的两条建议,并说明原因;
B209%
A:Talk face to face
3.号召大家积极与父母沟通。
写作要求:
A:55%
C176
B:Share a meal
C:Take a family trip1.短文须包括所给要点,可适当发挥;
D:Others
2.内容积极向上,不少于80词(短文的开头已经给
出,不计入总词数);
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Hello,everyone!I am Li Hua.Here is the survey result on how kids communicate with their parents.
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