内容正文:
主题4和谐社区与美丽家乡
。主题探究
①介绍社区基本情况
介绍美丽社区
②宣传社区出圈景点
和
③描绘梦想中的社区
①介绍家乡基本情况[2023省一模]
与
介绍家乡的发展变化
②介绍、赞美家乡的变化
美丽家
③具体介绍家乡的某个景点
①介绍中国大好河山,表达对祖国的热爱
介绍中国的发展变化
②简要阐述中国在多方面的发展与变化并
谈谈感受
⊙主题短语积累
角度1介绍美丽社区
4.welcome to..欢迎来到…
2.take place发生
1.clean and tidy千净整洁
5.the home of..…的发源地
3.make progress取得进步
2.attract lots of tourists吸引大量游客
6.be rich in富含/盛产…
4.develop rapidly快速发展
3.polite and friendly礼貌且友好
7.be free to对…免费
5.a long history and vast land历史
4.various activities各种各样的活动
8.natural beauty自然风光
悠久,地域辽阔
5.be full of laughter充满欢声笑语
9.one of the most suitable living6.home and abroad国内外
6.pick up litter in the park在公园
cities最宜居的城市之一
7.take useful measures采取有效
捡垃圾
l0.have great effects on对…有
措施
7.make eco-friendly products做环
很大影响
8.make great achievements in many
保产品
11.living condition/standard生活
fields在许多领域取得巨大成就
角度2介绍家乡的发展变化
条件/水平
9.make sth.a reality使…成为
1.lie in/be located in the central
l2.convenient transportation便利的
现实
part of...位于…中部
交通
10.make contributions to society
2.by the side of..…在…旁边
角度3介绍中国的发展变化
社会做出贡献
3.have a large population人口众多
1.be proud of为…感到自豪
⑨主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
@角度1介绍美丽社区
1.There is a large shopping mall where you can satisfy all your daily needs.
1)我们不仅要学习现代技术,也
2.Some artworks made of recycled materials and wastes will be built in our
要关注传统文化。[用连词词
neighborhood,which not only bring the arts but also bring the environ-
组“not only..but also..”仿写]
mental protection education.
3.Even though I don't know any of my neighbors,they are always ready to
help me.
@©角度2介绍家乡的发展变化
1.My hometown is especially famous for its university.[WYA M2]
2)这个公园以它的湖、桥和山上
2.In the past,my hometown was very small,and people lived a poor life.
的古建筑而闻名。[用短语“be
3.High buildings can be seen everywhere and children can also get a very
famous for'”仿写]
good education
4.The environment in my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful,
which adds to our happiness.
贵州新中考英语主题写作进阶
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@角度3介绍中国的发展变化
1.So together,our actions can make a difference and lead to a better
3)近年来,中国在减少污染方面
future![RJ九全UI3]
取得巨大进展。[用短语“make
2.In recent years,great changes have taken place in China and many
great progress in”仿写]
achievements have attracted the attention of the world.
3.Chinese culture spreads so quickly around the world that more and more
foreigners are interested in it.
4.China has made great progress in its space successfully,making
4)我为中国在科技方面取得的
China's space dream a reality..(making.…是现在分词短语作伴随状语)
成就感到骄傲。[用短语“be
5.Even so,education will be more convenient,no matter where you are,
proud of”仿写]
you can learn what you need from the Internet.(no matter+疑问词引导
让步状语从句,突出强调教育的便利性)
6.I'm proud of our country and I hope I'll be the pride of our country in
the future.
⊙真题剖析
[2023贵州一模]贵州自然风光秀美,地方风物独特。近日,贵州天眼新
【审题】
闻双语频道正在举办主题为“亮出贵州名片,我为家乡代言”的英语征文比主题:介绍自己的家乡
赛。请你以“Beautiful
My Hometown”为题,写一篇约80词的
文体:
文
稿件。
人称:主要为第
和
第
人称
Places of
时态:用
时
interest
要点:
Customs
Food
①介绍自己家乡的基本信
Beautiful
My Hometown
息(名称、地理位置等)
②介绍家乡的具体情况(名
People
胜古迹、美食、风土人情、
地方特色、文化等)
③省略号为补充要点,可表
写作要求:
达对家乡的热爱,并欢迎
1.补全标题;
空处缺少地点,镇写家乡名称
大家来游玩
2.稿件须包含思维导图中至少两条信息;
3.适当表达自己的看法及感受;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
【写作框架】
开头:介绍自己
开头示例句:My hometown Tongren is located in the
家乡的基本信息
(名称、地理位
northeastern part of Guizhou Province.
置等)
Word bank:a place with a long history and rich culture
可展开叙述的信息有:
L.Places of interest:the Mount Fanjing梵净山,Jinjiang
中间:介绍家乡
River锦江河,Tongren Grand Canyon铜仁大峡谷,
Beautiful
的具体情况(名
Tongren Museum铜仁博物馆
My Hometown
胜古迹、美食、
2.Food:Tongren guobafen铜仁锅巴粉,rice tofu米豆腐
风土人情等)
3.People:warm-hearted,friendly,kind,hard-working
make you feel at home
4.Customs:the dragon boat races,the red culture
结尾示例句:I love my hometown from the bottom of my
结尾:表达对家
heart.
乡的热爱,并欢
迎大家来游玩
Word bank:natural beauty,be sure to welcome you with
open arms,leave you with unforgettable memories
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主题写作进阶
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Beautiful Tongren,My Hometown
①用连词词组“s0.that..”升格句子:
My hometown Tongren is located in the northeastern part of
Guizhou Province.It is a place with a long history and rich culture
(要点1:介绍自己家乡的名称、地理位置等基本信息)
There are many places of interest in Tongren.They always
amaze both locals and visitors.Among them,the Mount Fanjing and
②用短语“make you feel at home'”替换
Jinjiang River stand out most.DJinjiang River is very clear,and
短语“welcome you”,升格句子:
you can clearly see a lot of fish swimming freely in it.Besides,the
food in Tongren is quite delicious and cheap,such as Tongren
guobafen and rice tofu.What's more,the local people of Tongren are
warm-hearted and friendly.2If you travel there,they will try their
③用which引导的非限制性定语从句将
best to welcome you.(要,点2:介绍家乡的具体情况)
两句合并为一句,升格句子:
3My hometown is a place with natural beauty and cultural
atmosphere.It becomes a beautiful heaven.I love my hometown from
the bottom of my heart.I sincerely invite all of you to come and visit
Tongren!Tongren is sure to welcome you with open arms and leave
you with unforgettable memories..(补充要,点一要,点3:表达对家
乡的热爱,并欢迎大家来游玩)
写作积累:
1.besides除…之外(还有)2.what's more更重要的是3.cultural atmosphere文化氛围
马实战演练
假如你是王华,上个月刚搬进新家,你的美国笔友Tom来信表示祝贺,你回信表示感谢,并介绍小区情
况,邀请他今年暑假来玩。小区情况主要包括下表内容。
My new neighborhood
Location:in the centre of the town
Facilities(场所;设施):a supermarket;some restaurants;agym
Environment:green trees;fresh air
Neighbor:kind and helpful
Feelings:happy,lucky
写作要求:
1.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
2.包括上表中所有要点,并适当发挥,80词左右;
3.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I'm happy to receive your letter.Thanks for your congratulations.Now let me tell you something about my new
neighborhood.
I hope you can come to my hometown this summer holiday.I believe we will have great fun together.
Yours,
Wang Hua
贵州新中考英语主题写作进阶
233I realized that it's truly meaningful to give up a small personal
honor to help someone in need.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Class-break Activities Make Me Happy
Class-break activities are an important part of our daily life
They promote our physical and mental health.
During the fifteen-minute break,I usually enjoy various
activities to relax.Sometimes I chat with my classmates about
interesting topics or homework.Other times,I walk around the
classroom to stretch my legs and refresh my mind.If the weather
is nice,I go outside to enjoy the sunshine and fresh air.My
favorite break activity is playing table tennis with friends.It's
fun and helps me stay active.When I feel tired,I prefer sitting
quietly while listening to music to recharge.
As far as I'm concerned,short breaks are important because
they help me focus better in class.They also make my school life
more enjoyable.I always feel happier and more energetic after a
good break!
主题3学习方法与策略
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)This book is so interesting that I read it again and again.
2)Books are one of the greatest friends that stay with us forever.
3)The more books you read,the richer knowledge you will
have.
4)You'll gain much as long as you read books with a thinking
mind.
5)It is a helpful/good habit to record math mistakes in a note-
book.
6)Speak Chinese with others as much as possible to improve
quickly.
7)When it comes to learning English,I think the best way is to
use it every day.
真题剖析
【审题】
说明;一;一般现在
【润色与升格】
(DAmong the three kinds of books,storybooks enjoy the highest
popularity,with 41 students choosing them.
2For me,storybooks are my top choice.
3In my point of view,we are supposed to read more English
books,no matter what kind.
实战演练
【高分范文】
My Plan to Improve in English
English is really important to me.It helps me communicate
with people from other countries and understand different cul-
tures.But now,I face some challenges.I'm weak in grammar
and often make mistakes when writing.Also,my listening skills
are not good enough.I can't catch every word in English
conversations.
To improve it,I'll do several things.First,I'll spend 20
minutes each morning learning grammar rules and doing simple
exercises.Then,I'll listen to English songs for half an hour
every day to practice my listening.I'll also try to keep diaries in
English and ask my teacher to check them.
I hope in three months,I can use grammar correctly and
understand most of the English I hear.And I want to be more
confident when speaking and writing English.
主题4和谐社区与美丽家乡
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)We should not only learn modern technology but also pay
attention to traditional culture.
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2)This park is famous for its lake(s),bridges and the ancient
buildings on the hill.
3)In recent years,China has made great progress in reducing
pollution.
4)I am proud of China's achievements in science and technology.
真题剖析
【审题】
说明;一;三;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DJinjiang River is so clear that you can clearly see a lot of fish
swimming freely in it.
2If you travel there,they will try their best to make you feel at
home.
3My hometown is a place with natural beauty and cultural
atmosphere,which makes it become a beautiful heaven.
实战演练
【高分范文】
Dear Tom,
I'm happy to receive your letter.Thanks for your congratu-
lations.Now let me tell you something about my new neighbor-
hood.
My neighborhood is in the centre of the town which is not
far away from the City Library.It is not big,but it's very beauti-
ful.Around my neighborhood,there are many facilities,such as
a supermarket,some restaurants and a gym.You can see green
trees and beautiful flowers everywhere.The air is fresh too.
My neighbors are all kind and helpful.Some of them are
volunteers.They have different skills and often help each other.
I feel so happy and lucky to live in such a good neighborhood.
I hope you can come to my hometown this summer holiday.
I believe we will have great fun together.
Yours,
Wang Hua
主题5劳动实践与劳动品质
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)I think it is important for us to take labor classes.
2)A day trip to the farm is of great value as it helps us under-
stand where food comes from.
3)Sharing the chores not only helps us understand the idea of
fairness,but also makes us have more time to spend with our
family.
4)I believe that everyone can play a part in voluntary activities.
真题剖析
【审题】
说明:一;三;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DTo start with,it's really interesting for us to learn from farm-
ers.
2In order to make the trip more interesting,we can add two
more activities.
3I believe this farm trip will not only let us get close to nature
but also bring us a lot of fun.
实战演练
【高分范文】
I did a survey on my classmates doing housework.Accord-
ing to the results,15%of them usually do housework,while
80%sometimes help with chores.Sadly,5%seldom do any
housework.This shows that most students are slow to take part
in household tasks.
To improve this,I suggest that my classmates spend some
time every day doing simple chores,like tidying up their rooms,
washing dishes or folding clothes.Housework is not only helpful
for keeping our homes clean and tidy but also good for teaching
us responsibilities.When we do chores,we learn to care for our
family.Let's all try to do more to help them,just because small
things can make a big difference!
)
参考答案及解析