内容正文:
第二部分
主题篇
主题1经历与感受
⊙主题探究
编者按:本栏目分析全国近4年中考真题书面表达,逐篇按照新课标主题及所写要点进行话题分类,概括
出每个主题下的角度及写作维度。
①阶段性成长回顾及感受[2024贵州们
成长与自我认知
②成功/失败的经历与感受
③应对变化、突破自我
①日常生活中美好或充满爱的经历与感受
②校园生活中的经历与感受[2025贵州]
③自然与出行探索的经历与感受
生活与情感体验
经历与感
④体育运动的经历与感受
⑤生活中所珍惜的事物的相关经历与感受
①劳动实践与社会实践活动的经历与感受
实践与活动体验
②传统文化、艺术活动体验的经历与感受
③学习拓展活动的经历与感受
①与家人/朋友/老师/同学之间的回忆与感受[2023贵州]
人际交往与合作
②团队合作的经历与感受
⊙主题短语积累
角度1成长与自我认知
4.make a reasonable choice做出合
7.share housework with sb.与某人
1.be afraid of害怕
理的选择
分担家务
2.be in trouble处于困难之中
5.have fun doing sth.做某事很有趣
8.give out food分发食物
3.never give up永不放弃
6.practice hard努力练习
9.give away捐赠
4.little by little一,点点地
7.be deeply touched/moved被深深
l0.enrich my experiences丰富了我
地感动
的经历
5.make progress取得进步
8.feeling of satisfaction满足感
l1.tired but happy累并快乐着
6.make great efforts努力
9.leave sb.a deep impression给某
12.stretch out my hands and legs
7.try one's best尽某人最大努力
人留下深刻印象
展四肢
8.the key to success成功的关键
10.be beneficial to...对…有益
13.impact significantly极大影响
9.overcome countless challenges
11.a source of endless happiness
角度4人际交往与合作
服无数的挑战
尽幸福的源泉
l.care about others'feelings关心其
l0.receive high praise获得高度赞扬
12.simple but precious moments
他人的感受
11.achieve success获得成功
单而珍贵的时刻
2.have an influence on..对…有
l2.in the end最终
角度3实践与活动体验
影响
l3.be worth valuing值得珍惜
1.learn some skills学习一些技能
3.ask..for help向…寻求帮助
l4.an unforgettable experience难忘
2.make z0ngzi包粽子
4.be thankful to sb.感激某人
的经历
3.go to the old people''s home去敬
5.give sb.a hand帮助某人
老院
6.pull together齐心协力
角度2生活与情感体验
4.be responsible for对…负责
7.develop communication skills
l.experience life体验生活
5.contribute one's efforts to doing
养交流技巧
2.go on a trip旅行
sth.贡献某人的力量做某事
8.strengthen social skills加强社交
3.the beauty of nature自然之美
6.do chores/housework做家务
技能
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Q主题佳句积累
佳句赏析
句子仿写
@角度1成长与自我认知
1.Many times I thought about giving up,but I fought on.[RJ U4]
1)我过去常常依赖父母,但现在
2.Paula used to be really quiet.[RJ九全U4]
我已决定要自己做所有的事
3.When we meet problems or troubles that we cannot solve ourselves,
we
情。[用搭配“used to do sth.”仿
should learn to actively ask for help from others.
写]
4.Every experience is a learning chance,and we can always learn some-
thing valuable from it.
5.I regarded the competition as a challenge,which was also a good oppor-
tunity to improve my English..(which引导非限制性定语从句,通常用
2)没有人喜欢失败,但是我们总能
逗号隔开)
从中学到有价值的东西。[用搭
6.When it comes to the topic of "My First Try",I'll never forget the
配“something valuable'”仿写]
meaningful experience I had in Grade7.(when it comes to..一说到
…,可用于开头引出话题)
©角度2生活与情感体验
1.As soon as I got home from school the first day,I happily threw my
3)这段经历不仅帮助了别人,也
schoolbag on the sofa and ate lots of snacks.[WY M4]
让我更有信心。[用连词词组
2.This was the day we would get our exam results back,but I didn't
“not only.but also.”仿写]
answer the exam questions very well last week.RJ U11]
3.I came to realize that we will never know what we can achieve unless
we try.(come to realize为动词短语,表示“(突然)意识到”;句中含有
what引导的宾语从句)
4)输掉比赛后,我意识到胜利从
4.Playing basketball teaches me the spirit of not giving up and brings me
来不是唯一的路。[用短语
happiness.
“come to realize”仿写]
5.This class not only made science interesting but also taught me to appre-
ciate nature's wonders.
6.Like flowers in a garden,happiness comes in all forms-it doesn't look
the same for everyone.
色角度3实践与活动体验
1.I finally understand that we need to share the housework to have a clean
5)我设法多做家务,这样妈妈就
and comfortable home.[RJ八下U3]
不会太累。[用连词词组“s0
2.Maybe you could do more jobs at home so that your parents have more
that”引导结果状语从句仿写]
time for proper communication.[RJ八下U4]
3.I remember that it was on the Spring Festival Eve.All of us were busy
welcoming the happiest moment.
4.Most importantly,I realize that each life is important and the tiny
things I do can make a difference.(高级词汇:tiny ad.微小的)
©角度4人际交往与合作
1.Winning or losing is only half the game.The other half is learning how
6)我的老师耐心地告诉我如何
to communicate with your teammates and learning from your mistakes.
更好地与父母沟通。[用不定
[RJ九全U11]
式结构“how to'”仿写]
2.It was awful of them to laugh at her,and I regret not saying anything.
[田九上M2](be awful of them系表结构,表示“他们…的行为是恶
劣的”;句首的t作形式主语,真正的主语是不定式结构)
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3.Just as my parents understand me and respect my choice,I promise I'll
7)多亏了朋友的帮助,我才能克
do the same for them.(just as表示“正如;就像”)
服困难,变得积极起来。[用短
4.Thanks to my kind and patient teachers,I have developed good learning
语“thanks to”仿写]
habits and done better in my studies as well.
5.in my eyes,staying with my family really makes me happy..((动名词作
主语)
@俗语谚语
I.Happiness is everywhere around us.幸福就在我们身边。2.Many hands make light work,众人拾柴火焰高。
3.Labor is the source of all happiness..劳动是幸福的源泉。4.Ten thousand lines can pull a boat..众人划桨开大船。
5.Well begun is half done.好的开始是成功的一半。
⊙真题剖析
[2023贵州]请结合下图内容及提示,以“My
Family Memory”为
【审题】
题,根据写作要求,写一篇不少于80词的短文。
主题:家庭回忆
文体:
文
人称:第
人称
describe the memory
家
express your
要点及时态:
feelings or opinions
①描述家庭回忆(事件、时
What happened?
记
间、人物),用
时
When did it happen?
FAMILY MEMORIES
What do you think of it?
②表达感受或观点,用
Who was in the memory?
Why do you think so?
时
空处可填表积极意义的形容
写作要求:1.结合实际,用适当的形容词补全标题。
词,如;unforgettable,hap-
2.短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展。
ipy,warm,funny,beautiful,
3.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
precious,unique...
【写作框架】
开头:开门见
开头示例句:When I think back to my childhood.,Iam
山,引出主题
flooded with warm memories of my loving family.
可参考的经历有:
L.童年美好回忆(童年时期父母陪自己玩乐、读故事、
收到自己喜欢的玩具等)
2.家庭活动(郊游、野餐、家庭聚会等促进家人感情的
活动)
My
中间:描述家
3.亲情(遇到困难时家人的鼓励和帮助)
Family Memory
庭回忆
4.教育影响(家人引导自己学习新的技能或爱好的经
历、家人引导自己塑造正确的人生价值观的经历等)
5.生活细节(通过日常生活的小细节来展现家庭的温馨
和幸福。如:妈妈做的美味佳肴、父母日常的关心和
支持等)
(注意:除此之外,也可以描述为家人付出而获得幸福
感的经历。如:为家人做饭、做家务等)
结尾:表达对
结尾示例句:These warm family memories have shaped
这次经历的感
who I am today.
Word bank:the importance of love,fill with sweet memories
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【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
My Warm Family Memory
①用定语从句升格句子:
When I think back to my childhood,I am flooded with warm
memories of my loving family.
DI always remember the moment.At that time,we gathered
around the dining table for Sunday dinners.Although my parents
were busy,they still made dinners for me every Sunday.The smell of
②用搭配“used to do sth.过去常常做
delicious food Mom cooked filled the air as we chatted and shared
某事”升格句子:
stories happily together.2When I was a kid,Dad read bedtime sto-
ries to me.Every night,I climbed into bed,and he sat beside me,
reading stories that took me to magical worlds.His smooth voice
made me feel safe and warm.(要,点l:描述家庭回忆的事件、时间、
人物)
③用短语“be grateful to感激”升格
These warm family memories have shaped who I am today.They
句子:
have taught me the importance of love,support and being there for
one another.3I thank my warm and loving family,because they
have created a home filled with sweet memories that will last a life-
time.(要,点2:表达感受或观,点)
写作积累:
1.be flooded with充满;涌入(适用于情感类描写)
2.be grateful to sb.感激某人
马实战演练
[2025贵阳鸟当二模]你们学校英语广播站正在举办主题为“Tiny Lights in Growth”(成长中的微光)的征文
活动,请结合“You Raise Me Up(你鼓舞了我)”这首歌曲带给你的思考和启发,以“
Raised Me Up”为
题写一篇征文参与投稿。
Tiny Lights in Growth
写作要求:
0
1.描述一次令你倍受鼓舞的经历;
You Raise Me Up
You raise me up,
2.分享这次经历带给你的启示与成长;
so I can stand on mountains
3.不少于80词且不出现个人真实信息。
You raise me up,
Share your story and
to walk on stormy seas.
make your voice heard!
I am strong,
when I am on your shoulders
You raise me up,
to more than I can be.
-Brendan Graham
月
K(
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贵州新中考英语主题写作进阶主题写
第一部分
技巧二巧用高分句式
【学以致用】
1.It is important for teenagers to develop good learning habits.
2.It's a great joy to share knowledge with classmates
3.I think it meaningful to save water in daily life
4.Kind acts make the community a friendlier and warmer home.
5.The greener the world is,the better living environment we
will enjoy.
6.Learning from mistakes helps us to)grow quickly.
7.This is the most exciting game that our team has taken
part in.
8.No matter who helps you,remember to say thanks./Whoever
helps you,remember to say thanks.
9.Only through practice can we improve our skills.
10.How important it is to make a plan for the coming new year!
11.To improve my teamwork ability,I actively take part in
group projects at school.
技巧三扩写句子
【学以致用】
1.I like the library very much because there are different kinds
of books.
2.He is very polite.For example,he always greets others in
daily life.
第二部分
主题1经历与感受
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)I used to depend on my parents,but now I have decided to
do all the things by myself.
2)Nobody likes failure,but we can always learn something valuable
from it.
3)This experience not only helped others but also made me
more confident.
4)After losing the race,I came to realize that winning is never
the only path.
5)I try to do more housework so that my mom won't be too
tired.
6)My teacher patiently told me how to communicate better with
my parents.
7)Thanks to my friend's help,I could overcome difficulties and
become positive.
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;一;一般过去;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DI always remember the moment when we gathered around the
dining table for Sunday dinners.
2 When I was a kid,my dad used to read bedtime stories
to me.
3I'm grateful to my warm and loving family,because they have
created a home filled with sweet memories that will last a life-
time.
实战演练
【高分范文】
My Mother Raised Me Up
In the journey of my growth,it was my mother who truly
raised me up.Once,when I struggled with math and felt like
giving up,she sat beside me patiently,guiding me through each
problem.Her support and belief in my learning ability lit up a
贵州新中考英语(R
作进阶
技巧篇
3.If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer,I will try
my best to help animals.
4.We won't grow up unless we face difficulties bravely.
5.Learn to praise the people around us so that we can get along
well with them.
6.We can discuss in groups freely.Therefore/As a result,we
can learn how to communicate and learn from each other.
7.I try hard to avoid using mobile phones or computers.I think
the light they give off is harmful to my eyes.
8.I'm going to graduate soon.I hope I can have a wonderful
high school life.
技巧四巧用衔接词
【学以致用】
1.Tea is not only good for our health,but also important to
many cultures.
2.I'm not sure whether Mrs.Liu still remembers me,but I want
to tell her that she will be in my heart forever.
3.She got a high score in the final exam because she made every
effort to study.
4.Though/Although my father is very busy,he always gives me
a hand when I am in trouble.
5.I'm going to do my best to get good grades so that I can go to
college and receive a good education.
主题篇
tiny light within me
This experience taught me the power of love and never
giving up.It made me realize that challenges are chances for
growth.With my mother's encouragement,I learned to face diffi-
culties bravely,turning them into stepping stones.Her love and
trust became my power,encouraging me to become a more confi-
dent and determined person.
Through this journey,I grew stronger and wiser,
understanding that the love and support from family are the tiny
lights that light up my path in life.
主题2多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)The school library provides us with a variety of educational
books.
2)To make students'free time more colorful,the school has
organized many activities.
3)There are various fun activities during breaks,like playing
basketball and running.
4)Taking part in sports activities not only strengthens my body
but also relaxes my mind.
5)We should thank our teachers who always help us with our
studies.
6)If you study hard,you might get into a good senior high
school.
7)I hope you can make the best use of the chances to make
great progress
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;一;一般过去
【润色与升格】
DThe story that happened last Friday has left a deep impression
on me.
2It was a bright morning on the school sports ground filled with
cheers.
参考答案及解析
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