内容正文:
技巧三
扩写句子
学生写作时需要先构思要点,接着将其以英文
【学以致用】
的方式转化为简单句,最后将简单句变成复合句,使
3.Try my best to help animals..(扩写尽力帮助动物的
内容更加完整、具体。在将简单句转化为复合句时,
条件)
可以通过以下几种方法扩写:
方法扩写原因
4.We won't grow up.(扩写成长的条件)
用来表示原因的词汇有:because,since,as,
for等
例1:We are proud of our city.(扩写城市的历史)
方法4扩写结果或目的
-We are proud of our city because it's a beautiful
用来表示结果的词汇或短语有:so(that),to,
city with a long history.
therefore,as a result
例2:I was praised.(扩写被夸奖的原因)
用来表示目的的短语有:so that,in order that/
I was praised,for I did something meaningful
to等
with my pocket money.
例l:You should take part in sports.(扩写参加体育
【学以致用】
运动的目的)
1.I like the library very much.(扩写喜欢图书馆的原
You should take part in sports in order to keep
因)》
healthy.
例2:Modern medicine is developing fast.(扩写现代
医学快速发展带来的结果)
>Modern medicine is developing fast.As a re-
方法2扩写事例
sult,many diseases can be prevented and cured.
用来列举具体事例的短语或句型有:such as,for
【学以致用】
example,Let's take...as an example.
5.Learn to praise the people around us.(扩写学会赞
1:Good learners know the best way they can study.
美周围人的目的)
(举例一个好的学习方法)
-Good learners know the best way they can study.
For example,they can take notes by writing down
6.We can discuss in groups freely.(扩写小组自由讨
key words or by drawing mind maps.
论带来的结果)
2:We should do exercise at least one hour a day.
(举例一项或几项具体的运动)
方法5扩写感受或想法
-We should do exercise at least one hour a day,
用来表示感受或想法的短语有:in my opinion,
such as running or walking.
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from my point of view,as for me,I think,I hope
例l:A show about paper-cutting will be put on.(扩写
2.He is very polite.(举例一个礼貌的行为)
对表演的看法)
-A show about paper-cutting will be put on.As
for me,it's a chance for us to learn more about
方法3,扩写条件
traditional Chinese culture.
用来表示条件的词汇或短语有:if,unless,as
例2:This is my holiday plan..(扩写对假期的期望)
long as等
>This is my holiday plan.I hope I can spend an
例1:Zongzi made by myself will give my parents a
enjoyable and safe holiday.
pleasant surprise.(扩写父母看到“我”自制的
【学以致用】
7.I try hard to avoid using mobile phones or computers.
粽子的条件)】
(扩写对使用手机或电脑的看法)
>If I bring back home zongzi made by myself
it'll give my parents a pleasant surprise.
例2:Dreams won't come true.(扩写梦想实现的条件)
8.I'm going to graduate soon.(扩写对毕业后的期望)
->Dreams won't come true unless we work hard for
them.
贵州新中考英语
主题写作进阶
技巧四
巧用衔接词
一、逻辑关系类
If we have too much stress,we can't sleep at
恰当地运用连接词把词与词、短语与短语、句与
night and may feel too tired.
句之间连接起来,可以使语言表达更加准确、流畅。
【学以致用】
现将常用的连接词总结如下:
4.My father is very busy.He always gives me a hand when
▲表示并列或选择关系:and,both..and.…,not only.…
I am in trouble.(用though/.although合并句子)
but(also).,either..or..,as well as等。
Reading is interesting.Reading is educational.
>Reading is not only interesting but also educa-
▲表示目的或结果:so..that.…,s0that等。
tional.
I will keep practicing drawing.I can go to an art
【学以致用】
college.
1.Tea is good for our health.Tea is important to many
I will keep practicing drawing so that I can go to
cultures.(用not only..but also...合并句子)
an art college.
【学以致用】
5.I'm going to do my best to get good grades.I can go
▲表示转折关系:but,while,however等。
to college and receive a good education.so that
Love can be expressed by gifts,family dinners and
合并句子)
phone calls.None is better than going back home
and spending time with our families.
Love can be expressed by gifts,family dinners
二、框架搭建类
and phone calls.However,none is better than go-
行文连贯是衡量书面表达水平的重要标准之
ing back home and spending time with our families.
一。《义务教育英语课程标准(2022年版)》对三级
【学以致用】
写作的要求是“在口头和书面表达中使用常见的连
2.I'm not sure whether Mrs.Liu still remembers me.I
接词表示顺序和逻辑关系,连接信息,做到意义连
want to tell her that she will be in my heart forever.
贯”,如何做到行文连贯呢?我们可以恰当地使用连
(用but合并句子)
接词或短语,使全文条理清楚、结构紧凑。
▲引出下文:first/firstly,to begin/start with,at first,
▲表示因果关系:so,therefore,as a result,thanks to,
first of all,above all等。
because of,because等。
People can do much to protect the environment.To
When I was in trouble,I asked my classmates or
start with,turn off the lights when leaving the room.
friends for help.We were at the same age and could
▲承上启下:second/secondly,third/thirdly,then/
understand each other easily.
next,also,after this/after that,what's more/besides/in
When I was in trouble,I asked my classmates or
addition,no matter when等。
friends for help because we were at the same age
To fit in with the new class,you can follow my tips.
and could understand each other easily.
Firstly,be active to communicate with others
【学以致用】
sincerely.Secondly,find someone who shares the
3.She made every effort to study.She got a high score
same interests as you.
in the final exam.(用because合并句子)
▲结束话题:finally,lastly,last but not least等。
Finally,if you follow my suggestions above,you
will realize your dream in no time.
▲表示条件或让步:if,unless,.as long as,even if/even
▲总结话题:in short,in a word,on the whole,all in
though,though/although等。
all,as for me,in my opinion等。
We have too much stress.We can't sleep at night
In a word,communication is really important in
and may feel too tired.
making friends.
贵州新中考英语主题写作进阶
5主题写
第一部分
技巧二巧用高分句式
【学以致用】
1.It is important for teenagers to develop good learning habits.
2.It's a great joy to share knowledge with classmates
3.I think it meaningful to save water in daily life
4.Kind acts make the community a friendlier and warmer home.
5.The greener the world is,the better living environment we
will enjoy.
6.Learning from mistakes helps us to)grow quickly.
7.This is the most exciting game that our team has taken
part in.
8.No matter who helps you,remember to say thanks./Whoever
helps you,remember to say thanks.
9.Only through practice can we improve our skills.
10.How important it is to make a plan for the coming new year!
11.To improve my teamwork ability,I actively take part in
group projects at school.
技巧三扩写句子
【学以致用】
1.I like the library very much because there are different kinds
of books.
2.He is very polite.For example,he always greets others in
daily life.
第二部分
主题1经历与感受
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)I used to depend on my parents,but now I have decided to
do all the things by myself.
2)Nobody likes failure,but we can always learn something valuable
from it.
3)This experience not only helped others but also made me
more confident.
4)After losing the race,I came to realize that winning is never
the only path.
5)I try to do more housework so that my mom won't be too
tired.
6)My teacher patiently told me how to communicate better with
my parents.
7)Thanks to my friend's help,I could overcome difficulties and
become positive.
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;一;一般过去;一般现在
【润色与升格】
DI always remember the moment when we gathered around the
dining table for Sunday dinners.
2 When I was a kid,my dad used to read bedtime stories
to me.
3I'm grateful to my warm and loving family,because they have
created a home filled with sweet memories that will last a life-
time.
实战演练
【高分范文】
My Mother Raised Me Up
In the journey of my growth,it was my mother who truly
raised me up.Once,when I struggled with math and felt like
giving up,she sat beside me patiently,guiding me through each
problem.Her support and belief in my learning ability lit up a
贵州新中考英语(R
作进阶
技巧篇
3.If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer,I will try
my best to help animals.
4.We won't grow up unless we face difficulties bravely.
5.Learn to praise the people around us so that we can get along
well with them.
6.We can discuss in groups freely.Therefore/As a result,we
can learn how to communicate and learn from each other.
7.I try hard to avoid using mobile phones or computers.I think
the light they give off is harmful to my eyes.
8.I'm going to graduate soon.I hope I can have a wonderful
high school life.
技巧四巧用衔接词
【学以致用】
1.Tea is not only good for our health,but also important to
many cultures.
2.I'm not sure whether Mrs.Liu still remembers me,but I want
to tell her that she will be in my heart forever.
3.She got a high score in the final exam because she made every
effort to study.
4.Though/Although my father is very busy,he always gives me
a hand when I am in trouble.
5.I'm going to do my best to get good grades so that I can go to
college and receive a good education.
主题篇
tiny light within me
This experience taught me the power of love and never
giving up.It made me realize that challenges are chances for
growth.With my mother's encouragement,I learned to face diffi-
culties bravely,turning them into stepping stones.Her love and
trust became my power,encouraging me to become a more confi-
dent and determined person.
Through this journey,I grew stronger and wiser,
understanding that the love and support from family are the tiny
lights that light up my path in life.
主题2多彩、安全、有意义的学校生活
主题佳句积累
【句子仿写】
1)The school library provides us with a variety of educational
books.
2)To make students'free time more colorful,the school has
organized many activities.
3)There are various fun activities during breaks,like playing
basketball and running.
4)Taking part in sports activities not only strengthens my body
but also relaxes my mind.
5)We should thank our teachers who always help us with our
studies.
6)If you study hard,you might get into a good senior high
school.
7)I hope you can make the best use of the chances to make
great progress
真题剖析
【审题】
记叙;一;一般过去
【润色与升格】
DThe story that happened last Friday has left a deep impression
on me.
2It was a bright morning on the school sports ground filled with
cheers.
参考答案及解析
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