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Unit 6 Plan for yourself 话题作文句式拓展训练2
一、开头段(引入新年场景,点明决心目的)
核心句式:结合新年到来的场景→ 说明制定决心的意义→ 点明决心数量。
1. 基础句(主谓宾/主系表核心结构)
The new year is coming. I make some New Year's resolutions.
拓展方向1:优化开头句式,贴合范文表达
As the new year comes, it is a perfect time to set goals. I make some New Year's resolutions.
拓展方向2:补充制定决心的目的,强化逻辑
As the new year comes, it is a perfect time to set goals. To __________ (目的,如:improve myself/become a better person/achieve more), I make three resolutions.
拓展方向3:丰富语气,提升流畅度
As the new year approaches, it is a perfect time to set new goals for myself. To improve myself and become a better person, I make three New Year's resolutions.
二、中间段(分点阐述决心,3个核心方向)
核心句式:用 “First/Second/Third” 分点,每点遵循“表明目标→ 具体行动”逻辑,复刻范文“aim to/plan to/decide to”的表达差异,每点从基础描述逐步拓展细节。
1. 要点1(学业/能力提升)
基础句:First, I want to make progress in my studies. I will study hard.
拓展方向1:规范目标表达,补充具体行动
First, I aim to make progress in __________ (领域,如:my studies/English skills). I will __________ (行动1,如:listen carefully in class) and __________ (行动2,如:finish homework on time).
拓展方向2:丰富行动细节
First, I aim to make progress in my studies. I will listen carefully in class, take notes carefully and finish all my homework on time to get better grades.
2. 要点2(身心健康)
基础句:Second, I want to keep healthy. I will exercise every day.
拓展方向1:优化目标表达,补充具体行动与目的
Second, I plan to improve my __________ (方面,如:physical health/mental health). I will __________ (行动1,如:exercise for 30 minutes every day) and __________ (行动2,如:eat more vegetables) to __________ (目的,如:stay strong/keep fit).
拓展方向2:细化行动,提升表达精准度
Second, I plan to improve my physical health. I will exercise for 30 minutes every day, such as running or swimming, and eat more fresh vegetables and fruits to stay strong and energetic.
3. 要点3(兴趣/习惯培养)
基础句:Third, I want to take up a new hobby. I will practice it regularly.
拓展方向1:明确目标表达,补充具体爱好与频率
Third, I decide to take up a new hobby. I will learn to __________ (爱好,如:play the guitar/paint) and practice it __________ (频率,如:twice a week/every weekend).
拓展方向2:丰富语境,强化行动决心
Third, I decide to take up a new hobby to enrich my life. I will learn to play the guitar and practice it twice a week, even if I am busy with my studies.
三、结尾段(表坚持决心,引用俗语展望)
核心句式:表明坚持的态度→ 引用俗语强化信念→ 展望目标达成,
1. 基础句:I will stick to my resolutions. I believe I can achieve my goals.
拓展方向1:强化态度,补充细节
I will stick to my resolutions and never give up easily. I believe I can achieve my goals this year.
拓展方向2:加入俗语
I will stick to my resolutions and never give up easily. As the saying goes, "__________ (俗语,如:Actions speak louder than words/Where there is a will, there is a way)." I believe I can achieve my goals this year.
拓展方向3:丰富情感,提升收尾流畅度
I will stick to my resolutions and never give up easily, no matter what difficulties I meet. As the saying goes, "Actions speak louder than words." I am sure I can achieve all my goals and become better this year.
连句成篇
My New Year's Resolutions
As the new year comes, it is a perfect time to set goals.To improve myself and become a better person, I make three resolutions.
First, I aim to make progress in my studies. I will listen carefully in class, take notes and finish homework on time.Second, I plan to improve my physical health. I will exercise for30 minutes every day and eat more vegetables to stay strong.Third, I decide to take up a new hobby. I will learn to play the guitar and practice it twice a week.
I will stick to my resolutions and never give up easily. As the saying goes," Actions speak louder than words." I believe Ican achieve my goals this year.
我的新年计划
新年来临之际,是制定目标的最佳时机。为了提高自己,成为一个更好的人,我立下了三个决心。
第一,我的目标是在学习上取得进步。我会认真听讲,记笔记,按时完成作业。第二,我计划改善我的身体健康。我将每天锻炼30分钟,多吃蔬菜来保持强壮。第三,我决定培养一个新的爱好。我将学习弹吉他,每周练习两次。
我会坚持我的决心,永不轻易放弃。俗话说:“行动胜于雄辩。”我相信今年我能实现我的目标。
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