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主题9 志愿服务与公共服务
角度1 介绍志愿服务活动的内容
1.volunteer to do sth. 志愿做某事
2.give out food分发食物
3.clean up the city parks清理城市公园
4.help the homeless帮助无家可归的人
5.cheer up the sick kids鼓舞生病的孩子
6.raise money for the disabled为残疾人筹钱
7.give away 赠送
8.old people’s home养老院
9.put up notices张贴通知
10.offer to help 主动提供帮助
11.help people in need帮助有需要的人
12.help kids learn to read帮助孩子们学会阅读
13.give a hug to sb.给某人一个拥抱
14.organize charity events 组织慈善活动
15.plant trees in the community 在社区植树
16.help with traffic safety 协助维护交通安全
17.help the elderly living alone帮助独居老人
18.volunteer at an animal shelter 在动物收容所做义工
角度2 志愿服务活动的经历与感受
1.play a role/part in在……中发挥作用
2.take…seriously认真对待……
3.can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事
4.make a difference有影响;起作用
5.come up with some ideas 想出一些主意
6.be thankful for sth.对某事心存感激
7.meaningful and important things有意义且重要的事情
8.have a better understanding of对……有更好的理解
9.feel good about helping others对帮助别人感觉良好
10.develop a sense of responsibility培养责任感
11.learn to be responsible 学会承担责任
12.get a sense of achievement 获得成就感
13.feel warm inside 感觉心里暖暖的
14.bring hope to those in need 给需要的人带来希望
15.turn kindness into a habit 让善良成为习惯
角度1 介绍志愿服务活动的内容
1.I plan to work as a volunteer in the community so that I can help more people who are in need.(①so that引导目的状语从句,强调制定这个计划的目的; ②who引导定语从句,修饰people)
2.I can do something I love and help others at the same time.
3.Being a volunteer helps to develop our independence and teach us how to love others.
4.I am willing to do voluntary activities that can enrich my knowledge and broaden my horizon.
5.Let’s start from the small things around us and play a part in creating a better world!
1)我相信每个人都能在志愿活动中发挥作用。[用短语play a part in仿写]
I believe everyone can play a part in volunteer activities.
2)我们常常在周末做一些志愿活动来帮助有需要的人。[用so that引导的目的状语从句仿写]
We often do some voluntary activities on weekends so that we can help people in need.
角度2 志愿服务活动的经历与感受
1.I always worked as a volunteer in an old people’s home,such as helping them clean the rooms and reading newspapers to them.(用such as/like列举志愿者做的事情)
2.I sang for the sick children in hospital to cheer them up.
3.As a volunteer in an animal hospital,when I see animals get better and the look of joy on their keepers’ faces,I get a strong feeling of satisfaction.(①the look of joy喜悦的表情; ②get a strong feeling of satisfaction获得一种强烈的满足感)
4.Not only do I feel good about helping others,but I also get to spend time doing what I like to do.
5.Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky,but we should believe that life is beautiful and love will always be around us.
6.The most important is that we can make many friends who have the same interests with us.(who引导定语从句,修饰friends)
3)通过做志愿活动,我不仅丰富了业余时间,还学到了很多生活技能。[用连词词组not only…but also…仿写]
By doing volunteer activities,I not only enrich my spare time,but also learn a lot of life skills.
4)我认为志愿者是最美的人,值得我们尊敬。[用who引导的定语从句仿写]
I think volunteers are the most beautiful people who are worth our respect.
[2021安徽]假定你是李华,曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英语报投稿。
内容包括:
1.事情经过;
2.个人感悟。
注意:
1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.短文题目已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:pocket money(n.零花钱);meaningful(adj.有意义的)
Once I Was Praised
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【审题】
主题:用零花钱做了一件有意义的事并被家人表扬
文体: 记叙 文
人称:用第 一 人称;
时态:讲述事情发展经过用 一般过去 时;说明个人感悟用 一般现在 时。
要点:
即左侧两点内容;注意:所写事件必须有意义(提升自我、帮助他人、做公益、服务社会等)。
【写作框架】
【润色与升格】
连句成篇
句子升格
Once I Was Praised
Once I was praised because I made good use of my pocket money to do something meaningful.
①One day,I happened to know some students in a rural school wanted knowledge but they didn’t have enough books. I made up my mind to offer my help. ②I bought some books online with all my saved pocket money and gave them away to the school. Moreover,those books I gave away might inspire the students to follow their dreams and broaden their horizons. When my parents learned about what I had done,they were delighted and felt proud of me. They said that I did a meaningful thing.(要点1:事情经过)
③I believe that even small actions can influence people’s lives. I will continue to do what I can to help others.(要点2:个人感悟)
①用短语“be thirsty for”升格句子:
One day,I happened to know some students in a rural school were thirsty for knowledge but they didn’t have enough books.
②用with作方式状语前置和that引导的定语从句升格句子:
With all the pocket money that I saved,I bought some books online and gave them away to the school.
③用短语“make a difference”升格句子:
I believe that even small actions can make a difference in people’s lives.
写作积累:
1.make good/full use of 充分利用……
2.happen to do sth. 碰巧做某事
3.make up one’s mind to do sth. 下定决心做某事
4.inspire v. 鼓舞,激励
5.broaden one’s horizon 拓宽某人的眼界
[2025合肥市蜀山区三模]假如你是李辉,上周参加了学校组织的志愿者活动,请你以“Volunteering Makes the World Better”为题,向校英文报投稿。
要点如下:
1.活动内容;
2.个人收获;
3.提出号召。
注意:
1.短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80~100(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Volunteering Makes the World Better
Last weekend,I took part in a meaningful volunteer activity with my classmates. We went to a nearby nursing home and helped the elderly clean their rooms,talked with them and performed songs for them. The smiles on their faces made us feel warm and proud.
Through this activity,I learned the importance of helping others. It not only brings joy to those in need but also gives us a sense of achievement. I became more patient,responsible and willing to care for others.
I hope more students can join volunteer work. Together,we can make the world a warmer and better place.
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